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Reviews For Beside Myself
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Stakes

Interesting chapter, looking forward as to where you will be taking this.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Introduction

Looking foward as to to how this is going to develop! Good Start!

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Introduction

Hi!!......I can't wait to see how this story plays out.......

Reviewer: enchantedmind (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Introduction

I'm glad to hear that the next posts will be longer - I want to drink in more and more of this! I'm enthralled.

I like the originality in the concept; the vast majority of stories are Edward/Bella and it's starting to get terribly stale. This, however, is like a breath of fresh air.

Your writing is great too... very elegant, descriptive, and not 'messy and confusing'. That's already setting you up for success.

As far as characterisation goes, eventhough this is just the beginning, I think you've got some great insight to Alec and Jane. I especially liked the idea of the silent sibling rivalry between them - it seems a very true thing to expect from dangerous and very young Volturi members.

I look forward to reading more of this (and more from you). I'll be waiting!

Reviewer: iDrinkBloodshake (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Introduction

Interesting chapter. I look forward to see the next chapter, where the story really begins. :)

Reviewer: Catrin_Whitlock (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Introduction

ALEC!!!!! *glomps*......O.O...sorry I have a great love for that boy...he's so cute!!! I can't wait to see where this story goes!

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