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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 03:36 PM · On: One Shot

This little number nearly brought a tear to my eye! So darling and just perfect!

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2012 04:48 PM · On: One Shot

So cute!

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 06:16 PM · On: One Shot

Very, very loveable! I remember seeing all those movies when I was a teenager. Thanks so much for the sweetness.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:22 PM · On: One Shot

sweet ;-)

Reviewer: flamencochic (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:17 AM · On: One Shot

 

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Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 03:42 AM · On: One Shot

Lovely :)

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:14 PM · On: One Shot

This is such a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it. :)

Reviewer: Alanna (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:22 PM · On: One Shot

This was so unbelievably sweet and just adorable :) I loved how you showed their relationship progressing slowly, it made me feel like a really knew them and cared.



Author's Response:

Why thank you, Alanna! I'm just in love with the concept of Bella and Edward being best friends and ultimately lovers. It just makes so much sense to me, and I really wanted to develop than concept. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Gras (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 09:55 AM · On: One Shot

 

Aww, very sweet, very well written. Thank you for this!

Is there a reason for the german title?



Author's Response:

The reason for the title is that it is a song featured in "Ferris Bueller's Day Off." And since this is a thank you/tribute to John Hughes, it just seemed to fit nicely. That's all. No deep, hidden meanings. :)

Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 06:39 PM · On: One Shot

I got your responce...I'm aware of your previous pieces...I've read a few of them...I ment it was B/E's first time.  I've read a few AH pieces where they lose their virginity together that are much less realistic than this one.



Author's Response:

OOOh, my bad. Thanks for clarifying! I did want this to be special but realistic, so I'm delighted that you feel it succeeded. I just love the idea of Edward and Bella being best friends, because it seems like something that would really happen if ti was AH. Thanks for reading some of my other stuff, too. I appreciate it!!

Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:29 PM · On: One Shot

Ok, I got a little scared when you started off with them in 9th grade...but once I saw that you were going through all of high school, I was good.  This was a good first time piece.



Author's Response:

Yeah, no, I wasn't going to have them jump each other's bones at age 15...a little bit too precocious for my taste! ;)

Actually, this wasn't my first piece, but I appreciate the sentiment. I've written 12 stories for Twilight FF.

Reviewer: carebear (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 01:31 PM · On: One Shot

I LOVE this story!!!

Reviewer: Blue Indigo999 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 07:45 PM · On: One Shot

That was so cute and beautiful!

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:47 PM · On: One Shot

That was the best! Brought back some VERY similar memories from the 80's. Well done. Thanks for writng.

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:45 PM · On: One Shot

That was the best! Brought back some VERY similar memories from the 80's. Well done. Thanks for writng.

Reviewer: manuella (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 02:27 PM · On: One Shot

thank you...

Reviewer: pocketElover (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:11 AM · On: One Shot

Absolutely the sweetest smut I have ever, ever read!



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, thank you so much! What a lovely comment!

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:02 AM · On: One Shot

Nice!  Sadly, I am old enough to remember all these movies and loved them!  You did an awesome job on this story and made the characters real.  Great job!  Keep up the writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words! I'm definitely old enough to remember these movies when they were in the theater! I'm so glad you felt like the characters were real; it is hard to accomplish that in a one-shot.

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 06:40 AM · On: One Shot

This was great. :) I got very nostalgic, even though I wasn't a teen in the 80s. John Hughes really knew how to get to the heart of teenagers like not many others have.  I was sad when he passed away.  What a great tribute. :)



Author's Response:

Thank  you, thank you, thank you! I totally agree with your observation of John  Hughes. I was completely bummed when I found out he died. I'm delighted you connected with my little story.

Reviewer: eternallytnb (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:52 PM · On: One Shot

I am absolutely charmed by this story. It brings me back to when I first saw John Hughes movies and how I always identified with the chartacters. I loved the sweet interactions between E + B. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! I agree, it was always so easy to identify with his characters; they really spoke to me and made me feel less awkward for being the way I am. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:16 AM · On: One Shot

Great job bringing that full circle. One shots leave so little room but you managed to give the image of the whole relationship together and it was lovely.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind observation! I have a really tough time NOT making a one-shot a complete little story, so you have no idea how much I appreciate your comments. I'm delighted you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:08 PM · On: One Shot

That was beautiful and perfect.



Author's Response:

WOW! Thank you! I appreciate your kind words!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:54 PM · On: One Shot

i really loved this one-shot  -  really good - cant wait for ur next one - love Geek Edward and Shy Bella together =)



Author's Response:

Thanks, BlueAngel...Geek Edward and Shy Bella are totes win in my book; I'm delighted you love them, too. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, BlueAngel...Geek Edward and Shy Bella are totes win in my book; I'm delighted you love them, too. :)

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 11:31 AM · On: One Shot

Oh my god that was SO FREAKING AWESOME!!! Words CAN NOT describ how greatt and awesome and excellent that was. It was a GREAT story about growing up,finding yourself,and just about being you. I LOVED IT!!!!!



Author's Response:

WOW! Just, wow! Thanks for your kind comments, I so appreciate them! I'm thrilled the story touched you so deeply. It's exactly how I imagined these two would grow up had they been together all along. Honestly, I'm just delighted. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:07 AM · On: One Shot

LOVE IT!!!



Author's Response:

YAY! Hana still likes it! W00t!!

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