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Reviewer: Dezibooo (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 9

update soon

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 5

Thanks for sharing your writing you two! I love this story and can't wait to see how everything plays out. I am so glad that the next chapter is already up!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

So sweet! I think I like Kale more than Edward. Thank you for sharing your writing.

Author's Response:
Lol, and here I was thinking I was bias about liking Kale more!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

okay, I really really really want to see the tattoo...speaking of which, since Kale and Citara are both really good sketchers, what is stoppingthem from coming up with their own special way to tattoo the vamps? Even concrete can be colored, why not have them (since they are smart anyway) come up witha special formulation that can dye the vamp skin...Emmett REALLY wants a tattoo....

Mick

Author's Response:
Hey Mick, that is a BRILLIANT idea! Definitely something that me and Miabella are now thinking we need to incorporate at some point in the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

Liking the story so far, I am glad there are more chapters up so now I can read right through. Thanks for sharing your writing.

Mick

Author's Response:
It does make it a lot easier to read the stories when you don't have to wait on the next chapter! I'm very impatient when it comes to waiting for a new chapter to post!

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am excited for the next chapter. I want the road trip started and don't tell Citara and Lyndah but I think I am going to stowaway and join them on this lovely ride...thanks for writing and I look forward to the next chapter.

Mick

Author's Response:
Mick, don't worry your secret is safe!

Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ugh she needs to grow some balls, she should have gone up to the girl yelling stuff in the gym and punched her then beat the crap out of her! Ugh that like really annoyed me. I wanted to like jump into the computer and beat up that girl myself. Haha!

Author's Response:
lol, got the reaction we wanted, j/k! We did it that way because she was stunned and didn't know what to think better yet what to do at the moment. Chapter 7 is insanely long and pumped full of fun stuff... its currently submitted and waiting to be accepted!

On a side note, to Cherrie, we've tried many times to respond to your review and the site is giving us errors about not being authorized... in regard to your review, there's definately more to come!

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

i LOVE this story, seriously:D can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: xMiaBellax (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

this is good... i want more.. lol

Author's Response:
Lol, too funny, I just sent you an email letting you know that the newest chapter had been accepting, freaking mindreader!

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

yay!!! finally!!! i just knew it:) i knew they would like each other. it would be great if we could read kale's pov of meeting citara:D pleeeease8(((

Author's Response:
I have plans of having Kale's point of view come into play shortly. Also, Kale's "special ability" will be announced! BIG THANKS to xMiaBellax for the brilliant idea. Sorry again for the delay in chapters, I have been seeing a neurologist for my migraines on top of working full time and going to school so busy times, and to top it all off, my love beta RedChevy has been having her own real life issues, so theres been a delay there as well, but thankfully qjmom is still helping out and betaing for her :) More coming soon!

Reviewer: xMiaBellax (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 3

I dont know about putting charlie in the story.. ppl might not be able to see him as anything but bellas dad.. But you know, its your story and i think you should put who you want in... btw, let me know if you need the banner.

Author's Response:
Yea, I've been going back and forth with Charlie, I like him as a character, but not really sure how I could fit him in the story :(

Reviewer: xMiaBellax (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

i would make u a banner... if u wanted.

Author's Response:
I would love for you to make me one! Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

oooo, i bet she'll end up with kale. love this story. hope to read another great chapther soon;)

Author's Response:
Another chapter should be coming soon... and I'm not going to comment one way or the other on the Kale comment :)

Reviewer: xMiaBellax (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is an interesting story. I am looking forward to reading the rest of it. Did you have a banner to go with your story?

Author's Response:
Nope, not at this time anyway. Any volunteers to make me a beeeeautiful banner?! :)

Reviewer: Tigerlily74 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is very interesting! I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Shouldn't be too long. It took awhile for chapter 3 to get validated due to my normal beta having real-life issues, but qjmom got me taken care of. :)

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

wow, it seems like a great story so far. can't wait to read the next chapter:)

Author's Response:
shouldn't be too long, submitted chapter 3 last night, waiting for it to be validated :)

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

Please more.

Thanks for posting.

Author's Response:
More is coming soon, In editing mode right now. Great news though, everyone's favorite vampires enter the story in chapter 3. :)

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting.

Thanks for posting.

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