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Reviewer: Jennicus (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 03:54 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
this was a beautiful story... had me in tears!
Reviewer: CasperChick (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 02:50 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
wow ... that was amazing :) .... plz write more stories
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:49 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
OMG your story was absolutely beautiful. I have no words to describe what I’m feeling….just….. I’m so glad I found it and that got to experience it, it will stay with me for a long long time.
Thank you! Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 12:59 PM · On: When All You Seem to Feel is Light
OMG It's about time! I loved this chapter. Jake is great with Amelia!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 12:36 PM · On: The Days Lost Between Broken Hearts and Delusion
Great come back Jake, I even blushed! lol
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 12:16 PM · On: To Leave with a Kiss...
I can see how it ended with Edward but will it continue with Jake? will there be more to this story? I hope so!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 12:08 PM · On: To Try and Remember
I love it so far, I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 10:14 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
loved it!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:16 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
Well, this was a torturous, lovely voyage. Congratulations on such a fine piece of writing even though it broke my heart.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 02:45 PM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
I really liked this ending. So unexpected, by me anyway. I thought you conveyed their love for Bella very well. It was somber but romantic, in a way. I LOVED THAT ALL THREE WERE THERE
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:19 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
wow you've weaved this tale beautifully.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:59 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
That was a beautiful ending. I loved the last paragraph.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 04:38 AM · On: To Try and Remember
i like this story! i just found it but i can already tell i am going to love it.
Reviewer: SherryBerry (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:49 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
"I don't want to be a murderer" Rhiana
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 08:14 PM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
That was beautiful....
Reviewer: kaylak2190 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 01:54 PM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
Beautiful. A solid and lovely end to a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I really appreciate it.
Have a lovely week.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 01:23 PM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
awesome
Reviewer: AlmyraSilverblood (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow
I dont like how you speak in first person and third person at the same time. Its also lacking alot of dialogue and all the flash backs make it boring.
Author's Response: Wow. I'm sorry you feel that way. Firstly, I feel that dialogue often becomes dull itself, and that a conversation is not always necessarily the best way to present ideas and develop stories. Often non-verbal cues, rather than verbal, indicate what is really going on in a situation. As for the flashbacks, I feel it was necessary to provide history and the flashbacks are necessary to show how Bella came to be the person she is now. Thirdly, this story is in third person, so therefore I do not comprehend what you are referring to in that sense.
Lastly, I truthfully do not appreciate the way you've criticised me here. I appreciate criticism, but only if it actually offers guidance and opportunities to improve. Yours did not provide either.
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 11:06 AM · On: To Keep This All But A Memory
I honestly don't know if I'll ever stop crying!!!!
Rox
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I hope you enjoyed some of the story, though. I know it's sad, but I wanted to represent life and the reality of what Bella could have become.
Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I hope you enjoyed some of the story, though. I know it's sad, but I wanted to represent life and the reality of what Bella could have become.
Thank you.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Life in Greyscale
I almost wish I never started to read this story because I am totally heartbroken right now. I'm trying really hard not to hyper ventilate. It's hard to breath due to the fact that I'm crying so hard. I have a splitting headache and on top of everything my husband isn't home to comfort me. You do know that this is all your fault right? If you weren't so ridiculously talented and wrote such a beautiful story with so much love, I would be fine!
Author's Response: I honestly have no words for the gratitude I have towards you right now. It's still amazing to me that people could like my writing, my words, because I honestly just started this as a way of getting out my idea of what could have been.
I'm so sorry for making you cry, but isn't that the beauty of the written word? That emotion can be inspired for characters that don't even exist, except for in our hearts and minds. Love is the heart of this story.
I hope your husband comes home soon and comforts you soon. Again, I'm sorry, but I do hope you got something from it.
Thank you so much for reading. It's people like you that inspire me.
-Unrequited Melody.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Wishing I Had Let You Sign
Sobbing now
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 02:30 AM · On: The Heartbreak of an Enigma
I have no words right now... just tears
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 02:19 AM · On: When All You Seem to Feel is Light
See, now you've got me crying again... This time it's happy tears, but still! You have this amazing gift of evoking a whole array of emotions with just a few words. You are truly gifted!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Waking Up in the Breakdown
Your writing reads like poetry. Absolutely beautiful!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:59 AM · On: The Days Lost Between Broken Hearts and Delusion
This chapter made me cry like a baby! Thank god for the last few passages that made me smile again!
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