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Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Blissful Reunion

Well that was a bit different way to start a story.  Kudos

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: Marco, Polo

I usually review with all my fics that I read but Twilighted sometimes does not cooperate and then I cannot get back on the site.  I think your story is great and I really enjoy reading it.  I am so glad that Edward showed up to help Bella though this difficult time.  I can tell that they are both experiencing some difficult times.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 34: Epilogue

Soul searching is such agony. Why does your story inspire me To keep searching?

Reviewer: ruthh (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 34: Epilogue

this is the first story i read dat made me cry. I could never imagine losing my own father, he's such an important person in my life. Reaally great story !:)

Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 29: Enough

jezz,finally this woman have the brain.

Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 27: Destiny

Bella is not only an insecure woman,but also a very stupid one.She think that sex was the cure for her insecurities.

Reviewer: sparkycola (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: I'll See You Soon

This chapter just hurt.  It took me right back to my grandfather's death and how hard it was to say goodbye.  It's beautifully written and I don't think I've ever cried so hard reading a fic.



Author's Response:

Hi, thank you so much for your kind review. I'm so sorry to hear about your grandfather. Thank you for taking the time, though, and sharing with me how this chapter affected you. It's so valuable as an author. :)

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 34: Epilogue

excellent!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I loved reading your reviews!! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you thought! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) 

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 31: Reasoning

the emotion was excellent!

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 28: Resolve

That was really good! I could feel Bella's heart breaking all over again...but Edward wasn't all to blame and I don't think he was the ass at all. They were equally to blame.

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 26: Gone

Damn! That was a juicy fight!

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 17: Homeward Bound

I had a feeling...

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 16: Demons

Edward is being very patient, but B is over reacting just a bit I think...

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Confession

I really don't think that's a big deal...unless he's got a kid or something!

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Old and the New

why is she so fixated on high school??

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 5: Going Down Swinging

Right on Rosalie...love bewildered Edward.

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: World: 1, Bella: 0

Like Alice's character and as for the shock E just gave her *hahaha*

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 11:03 AM · On: Blissful Reunion

Well that was certainly different...can't wait to read the rest of this story.

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 19: Progress

Wow, you're deliciously evil at times huh! I read this entire chapter absolutely LIVID with Bella for leaving Washington without attending the funeral AND leaving Edward behind!! Imagine my surprise and happiness to see that they are together - and in New York too!?!?!

So many questions.... Well gotta read on to find out what happened in the last month!

By the way - I'm kinda glad I found this story after it was completed - I wouldn't have been able to handle that long wait for an update after the previous chapter!! lol

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 18: I'll See You Soon

Hi, I am here bawling my eyes out.. I could barely finish reading the chapter. I am so very happy that Bella and Edward got to Charlie in enough time, and that they had the ability to see Charlie in a coherent state - just one last time. They were able to say their goodbyes.. I am so happy for that.. I went through a similar situation with my mom 19 years ago - I was 20. I don't remember the nursing staff lessening any med doses, but I remember getting that call 630 in the morning, gathering my aunt and gradma, and rushing to the hospital. I climbed into my moms bed- she was still in the coma. after a while she opened her eyes and mouthed something - I'm not sure what - but I hope it was I love you... then I saw the life fade away - just like that... I still remember seeing the "life" draining away from her features a little at a time..  

You know, I've been going back and forth with my feelings for Bella in this story. I feel bad for her and what she went through with Renee, but I am mad with her for the way she iced out Charlie and also Edward - in the beginning. She can never undo that pain and hurt she gave her father, however, I do understand how she could be so absorbed in her own feelings and forget about Charlie's..We often forget that tomorrow's not a guarantee and we may never be able to right some wrongs. Seeing her relive the flashbacks to her youth... I know she must be kicking herself for the way she treated him as she prepared to graduate and leave her life in Forks behind. I really hope she does trust Edward enough to let him help her through this next phase. He has been so wonderful to her - I hope she realizes that. I really was not able to let anyone help me and that was..difficult..

I'm really sorry for the rambling on here... I just, I don't know, felt the need to share how this story has impacted me. You are a wonderful writer and I am enjoying your work tremendously. I just found your story 2 days ago and can't stop reading!  Thank you so much for sharing it here with all of us..

Chyla



Author's Response:

Chyla,

Thank you for your heartfelt review. This chapter especially was hard for a lot of people, myself included, but it always grabs my heart when I hear that someone went through this in their own life. I am so very sorry for your loss, and I truly do mean that. I'm not sure what else to say, but I hope you know that I do appreciate you reading my little story and taking the time to tell me how much it has meant to you. I hope you continue to enjoy it...even though there are still a lot of bumps ahead. I've always promised a happy ending for them, though, and now that it is all written, I can definitely say that for sure!

 

But thank you again for the review. It really does mean a lot!

Reviewer: adonica (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 34: Epilogue

Delightful. Love when everything wraps neatly.

LOL!

This poor couple really had to work to get things wrapped. Growth, loss, pain, and oh - thank you for not restoring B's relationship with R. Sometimes, moms don't deserve to be forgiven for the mistakes they make. Sometimes blended families really DO work - and women find sisters at all stages of their lives.

Happiness. Meaningful work. Healing. Babies. Perfect. Thank you for sticking with your story. I admire that more than you know. Good luck. May you have as bright a future as your characters. xx

@adonicass  <-- on twitter

 



Author's Response:

Hi adonica, thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story...even through the bumpy ride! And I agree with what you said about Renee, ugh she disgusts me and she isn't even real! Thank you again so much, and I'll be sure to add you on twitter!

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Giving In

Okay now we're getting somewhere. So excited to read on! Was very angry at Bella in past chaps but I get her now. She seems to be in very good doctor's care...

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: World: 1, Bella: 0

I had a feeling!!! :)

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2011 02:52 AM · On: Blissful Reunion

Well DAMN!!! What a way to start the story!! Ensuring we come back for more huh? Well I'm hooked and all in. Can't wait to read on.

Reviewer: oona (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 34: Epilogue

Loved this story. Lucky enough to find as it was being completed. Can not thank you enough for taking me on this journey.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely review - I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :)

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