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Reviews For Careless Whispers
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 08:40 PM · On: LoveSick

Edward having to leave Bella's side was almost unbearable.  His professor was an absolute jerk.  Edward should have reported Victoria and her stalkerish habits.  His life and any other male she decided she wanted and needed would be a lot safer and easier.  Edward left a very sweet note.  Bella is just running away from her deeper feelings and attraction to Edward.  Bella believed she could maintain their friendship to just sexual in nature.  It won't happen.  Their mutual attraction is deeper than just sex.  Alice is so cute while shopping.  Her budding relationship with Jasper is awesome.  The hotel room sounded marvelous.  Definitely living the other halves life.  All those delight extras.  I thought Edward's text was sweet to Bella.  There weren't any feelings in that note.  A friend can wish someone have a good time while away for the weekend.  Of course, Edward is beginning to have feelings towards Bella.  Currently he is confused as to what they would call their relationship.  He'll be in shock when he learns it is just for sex.

Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Blame It On The Alcohol

OMG I am loving this and Dixies Tavern in Charlotte is one of my favorite bars. What a deliciously small Edward filled world. I kind of squeed when I made the connection.

Reviewer: Lizzie06 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Good Girls Go Bad

hmm this is getting interesting!!! cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 05:18 PM · On: I've Got A Feeling

What's not to like?

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 07:23 AM · On: I've Got A Feeling

I would say Bella had a great surprise for Edward.  He didn't disappoint Bella either.  The two of them are made for each other.  Working together like the final 2 pieces of the puzzle to completion.  Hoping Bella doesn't have a fit of guilt and remorse in the morning.  She and Edward are perfect for each other.



Author's Response:

So True! He completes her as she completes him.

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:21 AM · On: I've Got A Feeling

wow... now this Bella means business~!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah.. this Bella knows what she wants and how to get it! No mopey shy Bella here!!

Thanks for your Support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:01 PM · On: A Long December

Will the girls think that Bella is dreaming when she starts to scream Edward's name? Cannot wait to find out!



Author's Response:

LMAO....amazingly no one seems to hear her!!

 

Thanks for your support

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: GabrielCullen (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:38 AM · On: A Long December

oh my!!!

please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good chapter :D



Author's Response:

Thanks love...Twilighted is posting them as quick as they can!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 12:59 PM · On: A Long December

Little Bella is being a naughty Bella!   I hope she doesn't call out Jacob's name when she is with Edward... that is a major cockblock right there. 



Author's Response:

WHOA!!! Stop the crazy train!!! Bella will never do such a thing. Jacob was her best friend. they tried dating but were never lovers. That would be a TOTAL cockblock....but there's no way!

And yes Bella has a very naughty side that she likes to explore now and again. So hold tight!!!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP 

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 06:48 AM · On: A Long December

Yesssss!!! Bella's bein a baaaadd girl!!! I love it!!

Author's Response:

Oh yes!! We like BADella!!!!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 &IP

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:50 PM · On: I Know You Want Me

who doesn't like dirty talk like that?



Author's Response:

We don't know...cause we LOVE some dirty talk!!! It can be a dirty text, dirty call, dirty email...it all works the same!! It gives you a RUSH when you read/hear it!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:32 PM · On: A Long December

Looks like Bella is going to make Edward work for it.  sounds like her week was busy with school and being with friends.  Alice and Jasper are so cute.  Everything they do is just so sweet and absolutely adorable.  So easy for them.  With Bella she's afraid of committment still not over Jake's death. Edward is really interested sent her a text after she left.  Now Bella decided towards the end of the week she wanted Edward and sent a most provocative text message  to Edward.  I bet he's there in 10 minutes.  He'll cut the time by speeding at warp speed to get there asap.  that poor boy doesn't know what he is in for -- Bella will totally surprise him and he'll be in shock with his mouth wide open and tongue dragging on the floor with steam coming out of his ears when he sees her.  Won't take long for any action to occur.



Author's Response:

Bella is always up to something! There is still a little chase going on...they have to prove themselves to each other. And yes, Bella is terrified of commitment after Jake dies. They weren't lovers...but when you lose someone so very close to you, it take time to heal and to love again. And maybe she is feeling a little guilty?

There is ALOT of action ahead in the upcoming chapters! We have 19 chapters posted and are working on 20 as we speak!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:33 AM · On: I Know You Want Me

This story is so fun to read, i love the club scene and the lemons...lol cant wait to read more keep the chapters coming :)



Author's Response:

It is just as much fun to right! Especially since the Bar Dixie's is a real bar in Charlotte, NC where CB9 is from! Alot of these scenes are pulled from her experiences there! ;)

We are thrilled that you love it and are wanting more! We have 19 chapters posted and are currently working on 20!

Thank you for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:19 AM · On: I Know You Want Me

Goin to have a cigarette. Nuff said.

Author's Response:

Score!!!! Meet you in the bunker with a cigarette and the JD!!!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 07:46 PM · On: I Know You Want Me

I'm jealous not only does Bella get to soak in a large tub with bubble bath, she has Edward join her.  While she is dreaming about him he is there with her.  talk about erotic dream with whipped cream and other  toppings.  Something I am sure she will suggest doing in real time instead of just dreaming about it.  I can imagine Edward hearing Bella scream his name while sleeping that would just about turn anyone on.  Looks like their relationship has taken another step forward to enrich their connection.  Really nice lemon.



Author's Response:

We are very fond of this lemon....and yes erotic dream!! The lemons continue to get hotter with each chapter...get ready!!

Thank you for your support!!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Blame It On The Alcohol

My eyes are a bit on the watery side right now - that's a sad but really nicely wirtten first chapter!

Achilles



Author's Response:

I have tissues....need a hug??

You won't be sad for long. But when you get to Chapter 18...you will need tissues and lots of hugs. Just warning you!!

Thank you so much for your support!! We greatly appreciate it!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Cupid Shuffle

Interesting beginning.  I am liking this so far.  Intrigued to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

We are so pleased we could spark your interest!!! Alot happens! We have 19 Chapters written....so hang on tight!! Hotward never disappoints!!

Thank you for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Cupid Shuffle

Ok, I hooked and have added Careless Whispers to my favs. I look forward to reading more soon.



Author's Response:

Hook, Line and Sinker!!! Score!!!! Can't wait for you to read more!!

Again, thank you so much for your support!!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Good Girls Go Bad

Great song to go with this chapter!!! Love your story!!!



Author's Response:

Whoo-hoo!!! You now LOVE it!! Score!! Everytime I hear that song now i can see Bella dancing on Edward!!...Sidenote...Dixie's is a bar in my hometown, Charlotte, NC---And i have danced exactly like that with my hubby-Mikeward, hence the inspiration for this chapter! LOL

Thanks for your support....we really do appreciate it!!!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Single Ladies

So he didn't recognize Bella and she didn't recognize him from the prior year? I'll keep reading...like what I have read so far.



Author's Response:

Keep reading Love!!! We can't tell you when or what's gonna happen!!!!

Thanks for the support!!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Blame It On The Alcohol

I like it...and will probably grow to LOVE it with each chapter.



Author's Response:

We are thrilled that you like it and are hopeful you will grow to LOVE it as much as we do! We are about to finish chapter 19!!

Thank you for your support!!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Cupid Shuffle

Diffferent beginning with Jake dying and Bella closing a lot of herself off for a time.  Is Edward the same guy she was dancing with when Jake punched him out?  Glad Bella finally felt able to go out on the town again.  To find Edward as bartender at their favorite nightclub.  what's the odds?  Now they each have a strong connection towards the other.  After a lovely evening of dancing and playing twister Edward and Bella have taken the first step to making the other person theirs.



Author's Response:

We are very much Team Edward, so naturally Jake had to make a quick exit. However. we understand his love for her and her love for him as her best friend. You will see that play out later. We are in the middle of writing chapter 19 as we speak. We are very appreciative of your support!

Thanks!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Cupid Shuffle

I really like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! We are in the middle of writing chapter 19 now! Stay tuned...it only gets better!

Thanks for your support!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: GruntLover (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Good Girls Go Bad

After party....I wanna come!!! Can't wait for the rest of the chapters to get posted here. I follow you on Fanfic and think your writing is superb!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support and dedication to Careless Whispers. It means alot to us!!

Stay tuned....we will be posting Chapter 19 to FF real soon!!!

CB9 & IP

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Good Girls Go Bad

I love this story, and have been reading it else where. Everyone should read this.



Author's Response:

You just warmed our hearts!!! Thank you for following CW on other sites!!! Your support means alot!

Much Love,

CB9 & IP

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