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Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late
I was on the edge of my seat - things are going to get better, right and someone should send Tanya packing. Great story...thanks
Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Destiny's Course
Edward has to show up soon. Fun chapter, and i know you must be foreshadowing some more bella/cullen interaction. Yay!!
Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pitch Black Clarity
glad i came across this story. so far, so really good!!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late
Oh, let Rob come and save her!
Author's Response: lol :P
Did someone slip you a copy of Ch 5? - I'm not saying anything else... he he he
Thanks for the review!
Lonna
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late
MORE!!!
Author's Response: Soon... very soon :D
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twimtlfan (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Pitch Black Clarity
oh my god i cant wait for ch 5! its great so far!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late
I am almost in tears. I love the angst, but I do hope it will have a e and b ending. I hope Tanya gets some type of vampire STD. I hate her!
Author's Response: I've been so excited to share this Chapter with you all, and I was sooo bummed when it got rejected for Punctuation ... but in re-evaluating this chapter to make my corrections, I actually ended up making the content a little better, so I guess everything happens for a reason. Hoping Ch 5 won't give me quite as many problems.
Thanks so much for the review.
Reviewer: green_eyes4646 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late
omg that was amazing you have got to update faster!!!! Just dont go to fast to where the story isn't as good as it is at the moment look forward to reading more
Author's Response: YAY :P - I know... I had some punctuation issues with this one, and my beta has been down with a cold, so it took a couple tries to get it up to par... sorry for the wait... I'm hoping that doesn't happen again!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.. I'm so glad you liked it :P
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Too Late
Love the story. Hate T-Rex (Tanya,slutya,whorya). Funny how he didn't want to see her and then he run after her. If she wouldn't have broken her leg she could have kicked him in the balls! You have done a really good job with this story. I love the tat and what it says and it says it all. Excellent job!
Reviewer: EmmettsGirly (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
I am addicted to your story! You need to post chapter 4! SOON! Please???
Author's Response: It's posted... just awaiting Validation :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Lonna
Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
interesting looking forward to more chapters
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Can't wait to see what happens when they finally see each other.
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Pitch Black Clarity
Nice - looks very interesting and am looking forward to the rest.
Reviewer: berdb (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Carlisle needs to handle the Tanya situation if he doesn't want Edward to. Carlisle cannot expect Edward to endure Tanya for the rest of eternity, first of all it is leading her on and secondly it is making Edward unhappy.
I think Carlisle should put a stop to it during this visit, because she is a trouble maker.
Reviewer: bay_princesS (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Omg, just stumbled onto this fic. Totally love it. Cant wait for the update!!!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
OMG I can NOT wait for chapter 4!!
Reviewer: CdrIvanova (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Loved it ... but now I"m so anxious to find out what happens when Bella sees Edward!!
Reviewer: Phileas (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Oh man...the shit will hit the fence or how ever that saying goes (not a native english speaker)...annndddd post sooon pleassseee :D :D...
Reviewer: rxg1970 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Really looking forward to seeing how Edward reacts to 'Bella with balls'. Bring on chapter 4!!!
Reviewer: cornel (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Aw poor Edward! I mean it's his fault he's miserable, but still I feel bad for him. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what will happen between Edward and Bella when they meet. I only hope Tanya won't ruin it for them, because I think Rob is really nice and he wouldn't do anything to hurt Bella, would he?
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
omg a cliffie lol cant wait to see hoe they react to seeing each other
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Great story.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Oh dear lord you gonna kill me leaving me hanging like this...what's wrong with you...lol
Ok I did love it and for the love of all that is holy somebody please bitch slap Tanya for me! I am thrilled Edward is finally admitting his need for Bella and can't help but vibrate in anticipation for the next chapter....Please Soon!!
Author's Response: Ch. 4 is uploaded... just awaiting validation. :D
Reviewer: michiganmama (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Really love this story so far. Hope you update often.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Revelations
Damn, gimme more!!!!
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