omg no way thats not cool she's gunna kill him isnt she 

i thought his thought about he looks like a fucking teenager was funny  :)

please up date soon :D

Great story so far! I just recently found your story and just finished reading it. I love it! I can understand Bella not trusting Edward, but I can also understand his frustration with her for giving him mixed signals. I hope they find their way back to each other. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Can't wait for more!!

Wow - hope her revelation means she will get back on track with Edward.

Can't wait to see what Vic has in store for Rob.

i cant wait for the next chapter i am so excited

Ok...this chapter got me all kinds of excited. I just hope that Edward doesnt disappear again before she can tell him she loves him. Anyway, great chapter!!!

Interesting. I look forwad to seeing what happens next.

I was getting worried there for a moment lol. I was reading thinking I am ready for Edward to kill Rob lol.. Really like the story. Please tell me that Edward heard her conversation with Rob when she told him to get lost. So, will we be having a newborn Rob who wants Bella?

Holy crap!! She's gonna turn him! Update soon pretty please with Edward on top ;)

I felt like crying when Edward said he would let her go. Poor Rob -even though I'd prefer to see her w/Edward; he sure doesn't deserve to die by, who I'm sure is Victoria!!  Such drama!!! I love it!

Rox

I just want you to know I LOVE this story!  I will try to review more, though sometimes it just seems people have already taken words out of my mouth.....

It saddened me during this chapter that Edward finally took Carlisle's advice and told Bella he was setting her free and if she came back to him then it was meant to be....But I understand him doing it, even if I didn't want him to....and it looks like it may have been just what Bella needed!

I'm thinking now that Tricky Vicky has Rob in her sight, well, will she make him a newborn???  What do you have up your writer's sleeve???? Hmmm??

Looking forward to Chapter 10!!! *jumps up & down*

dhull (Austin, TX)

Wow, that was a chapter jam packed with emotions! It went from awkward to fun and relaxed. Then to irritating, distressing, frustrating, heart-warming, sad, tragic, hopeful, pride, anger and then finally ended with creepy (and a little nah nah nah). Quite the emotional rollercoaster you took us on here! Brilliant chapter!

My favorite passage (so beautiful, gut wrenching, bitter and furious)

"In case he had failed to notice, my “survival” over the last few years seemed to still be under heavy scrutiny. Did my heart still beat? Yes. Did my lungs still take in air? Yes. Did my heart and soul survive unscathed? Hell fucking no!"

awesome chapter :)yay she finally figured out that shes still in love with him but i have a feeling you have some more surprises instore for them before the get their happily ever after..so i will wait to see

mel xxx

I think Bella's doing a good thing by putting some effort into finding out who she really is. She needs to know and love herself before she can even consider a relationship, let alone immortality! I don't like that she keeps avoiding Edward though. They need to get one another again. On the other hand Edward really needs a couple or more lessons in personal boundaries! It might also do him some good in experiencing the rejection of the one and only person you love! Clearly I'm conflicted...

My favorite line (just brilliant):

"Picking my broken heart up from the floor and tucking it away for later pining"

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the amazing reviews. I have to say that I really enjoy the ones like this where you tell me your favorite lines. A lot of the time, they tend to be my favorite lines as well...

I appreciate you taking the time to review, and I hope to keep you thoroughly entertained in the next chapter. Which, by the way, should be posting very soon. It is already out for validation.

Lonna (ecandme)