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Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Prologue
i definetly like it.
Author's Response: I'm glad! :D
Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Prologue
Not good. She could become a statistic very easily. did she bring her pepper spray?
Author's Response: Let's hope that she did... :o
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Prologue
Interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon again. Where is she stranded anyway? Nevada? Cause if it's Nevada, there really is NOTHING! I drove through it once and got lost myself. That was quite the adventure. But luckily, my rental was a new and decent one. My problem was running out of gas. LOL.
Author's Response: Oh boy, I've done that too. My failed attempt at driving to Las Vegas for some fun became a living nightmare. I'm glad you liked! :)
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Prologue
Oh interesting! I wonder about that ending.....did Edward jump her already for her blood? Or did she trip and fall flat on her back? Looking forward to seeing what happens.
Author's Response: It would be very typical for her to fall the moment Edward comes in to view. :D
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Prologue
Good beginning.
I'm looking forward to the trip!
Love,
Rachel
Author's Response: Thank you, and hopefully this long way these kids have got to go won't dissapoint! :)
Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Prologue
I'm excited to read your next chapter. I'm not quite sure what to expect, but it seems like there's an interesting enough background story for Bella, not to mention the great white knight in shining volvo, Edward. I hope you update soon, I'm really curious as to where this is all going:)
Author's Response: Who doesn't love when the knight? Especially when he's so pretty. :) Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Prologue
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Sweet. :) Thanks for reviewing!
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