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Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 62

Grrrrrrr!

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 62

I had to track down Mike's nose in Chapter 16 to remember...goodness, they've come a long way.

Reviewer: adriana05 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 62

WHO? WHO IS HE TALKING TO??? I MUST KNOW NOW!!! LOL

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 62

So not cool.

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 62

Ahwww! you dirty tease, you! Please tell me it's already Jessica. Or Lauren, maybe. Either way I'm sure you'll make it incredible. I love this story; it makes me smile!

 

~Tay

Reviewer: Gillian Aubrey (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 62

Ok, that was just cruel!! ;) I can't handle the wait after a cliffie, my anxiety meter goes up!! Please update again soon!! Excellent chapter btw! =)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 62

to be honest she deserved it,.,..that was an awful thing to say ha ha

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 11

Okay, I must go to bed now but I've enjoyed the first 11 chapters! Any fic that gets me to cry is A-OK with me! Keep up the good work. Jen xx

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

Yay, I do like EPOV! And I like the nod to canon about Bella trying to figure out what's up with Edward.

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 9

"I'll take you."

Yes you will, won't you, Edward? Ha ha

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 8

Thank goodness Bella wasn't abused too. But she's obviously traumatized, just like Edward.

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

How awful that Bella's mom died.

By the way, I like short chapters.

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

*crying over here*

So that's how Edward came to Carlisle's attention. Devastating.

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay, they're gonna make cookies together!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 62

Lauren or Jessica?

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh no, Bella was physically abused too? I like the realistic reactions and decisions of the characters.

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Yeah for Bella! Kick him in the balls, girl. So Edward can't admit that he has feelings for her, but he obviously is already feeling protective.

Your story is making me tear up, and that's a good thing!

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Well at least he told her his name! Too bad his self-esteem is so low that he believes he's not a nice person.

Reviewer: pbswimmer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Nilla! I have enjoyed your kind reviews of my story and this is the first time I realized you had such a successful story on here. Congratulations! This first chapter broke my heart. I think it seems very realistic that Edward would react this way after being physically and sexually abused by bastard James. Jen xx

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 62

Ok so I was stunned stupid by that last little bit...who the hell is Edward talking to? I sure hope its not Jessica or Lauren and if it is...What the Hell? Mike is such a douche to spread around that it was him who rebuffed Bella...what ever! I will anxiously await your next update.

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 62

oh no!  who is it?!  i have to know!

Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 62

AAHHHH!! WHO IS IT?? TELL ME!!! lol. jk. love the story and please update soon!

Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 62

Whoa!  This can't be good.  Especially right before Bella is leaving for Phoenix!?!

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 62

who who who who???

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 62

Great chapter!!

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