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Reviews For Loner
Reviewer: beacullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 71

That was a really good chapter, one of the best.  I love Charlie even more, and I hurt for Edward even more.  And Jacob ugh couldn't it have been someone else.lol sorry not a Jake fan.  Thanks again Nilla.

Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 71

*sniff, sniff* It sucks when Edward and Bella aren't together in stories, but the difference in this one is that Bella is coming back. Words cannot describe how much I love this story.

Reviewer: Cansano2009 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 71

Oh, what an emotional chapter! The love they have for each other is just so beautiful, so visceral, so committed.  Outstanding writing!  I'm intrigued about Bella and Jacob.  I hope Bella approaches it at the right time with Edward and gently.  Edward is making so much progress. . .it's a great relief for him and the reader :)  I know he has a long way to go, but it seems that a foundation, a strong one, has been laid - thank God. 

Even though it's painful for them, I think - for both of them to grow - it's necessary and a good thing.  Saying that, I hope they get back together soon. 

Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 71

Jacob?  Is this the first mention of him?  It's been so long since I read the beginning chapters of your story that I forget!  Sorry!  ;-)

Now what exactly does Bella mean by "technically" she's still a virgin but there was that one time....

Hmmmmmm.  I wonder what it is and how Edward will take it.  It doesn't sound good.

Great chapter.  Can't wait for the next.  And thanks for the speedy update!  What a nice treat!

Reviewer: nanuvamp (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 71

awwww

♥edward

♥this story

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 71

When we were in college, I used to cry when my now husband had to go home for the weekend. Thanks for the update. Jacob, huh?

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 71

Great chapter!

I don't think either one of them is going to cope well while she's away. Hopefully everything will be okay, though.

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: LarissaCullen01 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 71

What's with the "Sure, technically, I was still a virgin, and compared to most girls my age, I had next to no experience when it came to that sort of thing. But still, there was that one time..." :s:s:s
Please don't let her have had sex!
It's just doesn't feel right :s
I'm totally freaking out!!!

Besides the 'virginity-issue', I still love this story.
Loner is definitely my favorite!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 71

God I remember that. When 3 days away seemed like the whole world was ending. Sigh. Youth...

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 70

Good chapter can't believe how far Edward has come keep up the great job

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 70

I think you are doing an amazing job with Edward. The emotions he feels and his reactions seem very real. Keep up the great work. I always love reading your updates.

Reviewer: emeralddahlia (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like the length of your chapter...;) I get distracted by long ones!

Reviewer: Emiline (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

He like says fuck too much lol. Love it though.

Reviewer: samanthaharris (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

good story

Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 70

so brave Edward ....

Thought you did the therapy session well .

Edward will need all the family whilst Bella is away ....

 x x 

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 70

This separation should be an interesting for them both, I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 70

Great Great chpter pls pls update soon!!!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 70

God I just wanna take Edward and hug him, and squeeze him, and love him. It breaks my heart knowing what he went through.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 70

Oh dear lord am I proud of Edward...he made it thru the first session! That is fabulous!
*Happy snoopy dance time!* I am so excited...Oh oh I just realized to that Bella is leaving for three days. This is going to be so hard on both as they are both dealing with quite a bit of emotional baggage. They are both facing thier pasts but at least they have each other now...

Reviewer: rpattzgirl11 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 70

Ohhh poor Edward...I have a feeling things are gonna get rough with Bella gone...

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 70

Edward is definitely going to be successful this time.

Reviewer: dazzled09 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 70

Great chapter once again. I wonder how Bella and Edward are going to cope with out each other it should be interesting. Can't wait to find out. 

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 70

If you are not a counselor, you missed your calling!  Well done!

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 70

awww...

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 70

thanks for the chapter. Post soon :)

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