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Reviewer: team66fan (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 81

Wow!  Big milestones ahead for Edward. Can't wait to read more.  Love this story.

Reviewer: sweetowl (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 81

Wonderful thanks

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 81

Great great update plsplsplslsplspls update soon!!!!

Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 81

I have been with you for all of these chapters and you have amazing writing ability. Once again an excellent update. The doubts and angst that B&E have is so real. I like the efforts that E is making to make himself better. B needs to practice what she preaches and be open and communicate otherwise, as E heals she will be left behind.

I wonder if Victoria is gone? What about James? Will E now have to go to the court system in Illinois? If so, how will he get there.

Keep up the amazing writing. I am a huge fan.

Vicki

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 81

Edward is handling the revelation erll so far but like Bella i fear that that it would eventually hit the fan one day but I have it would be brought up in therapy and worked out there.

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 81

Another very nice chapter... I've been wondering how Bella was feeling about the sex issue... its a sad situation... I wonder if Edward will ever be ready... thats alot to take in... they will need to discuss that with Dr. Webber huh???

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 81

Ahhhh, Bella's hormones are getting the best of her.  Will she  be talking to Edward about possibly getting somewhat intimate with her.  I hope so.  I am glad that she and Edward had a good time out with Emmett and Rose.  Maybe at the party, Bella and Edward could try to get a little closer.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 81

Edward is handling the revelation erll so far but like Bella i fear that that it would eventually hit the fan one day but I have it would be brought up in therapy and worked out there.

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 81

Very good I love the edge to the chapter of waiting for the other shoe to drop but I also liked the lighthearted scenes.

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 81

Please tell me that Emmy didn't tell Rose.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 81

The double date was cute :)

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 81

Uh oh... she's not gonna tell him... something's gonna happen...

Another great chapter, as always. Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 81

:)

Reviewer: CyraBear (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 81

Right on.  I feel a UST moment coming up.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 81

Again, Bella is doing a great job with Edward.  She is being patient with him but knows that he needs time.  She knows and understands him so well.  I hope he is able to talk to her soon.  And she does need to explain what happened with Jacob.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 81

Great chapter!

I think that if Bella doesn't tell Edward about what Jacob did, then when it comes out later, it's going to be bad for both of them.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 81

very very good chapter keep up the greta work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: akemi (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 81

i'm glad edward got a chance to go out. i'm just really worried abt what's going to happen when everything catches up with him. that bitch knew what she was doing when she told him abt his father. poor edward. his whole life could hv been totally different if his father was still alive. i'm pretty sure that's what's running through his mind. also he has real blood out there somewhere. i wonder what's going to happen abt that. will edward and bella track them down? will he want to? i know carlisle and the rest of the family will help him if he asked. 

Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 81

awww...i'm so proud of Edward! And i hope they will do some intimate things soon :)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 81

Oh I hope Bella tells about Jacob...I think Edward would be able to take although he may want to pummel Jake for his actions. I am psyched the double date went well =) I can't help but wonder if Victoria ever told Edward Sr's family about Edward...pfft probably not...

Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 81

Awww, you're so nice - letting Edward have a little breather!  Don't stop now!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 81

God knows I know all about not wanting to rock the boat.  But I imagine that underneath that quiet exterior, Edward is a seething mass of curiosity regarding Phoenix.  And knowing him, he's probably built things up horribly in his head with regards to what had happened there.  But at least they've had a nice night out with their double date.  That's something.

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 81

That was a really sweet scene with the four of them out for dinner, but I do think Bella should tell Edward about Jake.

Another brilliant chapter.

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 81

Hmmm, I hope we get EPOV next. ;) Thanks, Nancy (Hurray for Rosie!)

Reviewer: totallygone425 (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 81

GREAT Chapter as always!!!! Keep em coming!!!!!!

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