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Reviewer: Twihardgirl246 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 96

I LOVE IT!! Just getting better and better everyday :) I'm so freakin proud of Edward. Bella too. Please update soon!

Reviewer: cellibelli85 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 96

Thank you for the chapter.

I like that you take your time with the progression of their physical relationship. Edward needs time to accept that it is something normal and not something wrong. This chapter showed once again how much progress he has made. 

Really like how Bella is so understanding and patient with him.

Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 96

Excellent chapter!

I think their date went rather well. :)

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 96

This was sweet. 

Reviewer: ECsfan (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 96

I love it  that feels so comfortable with Bella! You are doing such an awesome job with this!!!! It amazing how true love can heal a broken soul!!!!!

Renee` in AL

Reviewer: b7u3 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 96

very sweet. can not wait for the next story.

please do not be too long for the next chapter

Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 96

Yay Edward! You go boy!  I am so happy for him that he is starting understand that is a regular teenage boy with teenage boy hormones and that is ok.

Reviewer: Mishefishe (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 96

This is a beautiful story. Thank you so much for letting us take this journey with you.

 

Mishe

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 96

Edward's level of comfort and his sense of safety, especially around Bella continues to grow and develop with each chapter. Every touch and caress is another milestone for him and for them as a couple. Love that Alice and Esme helped him with the picnic.....love that he allowed them to help. Thanks for this Nilla, you are doing a beautiful job with this story.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 96

Very nice!  I love it a lot, and I look forward to more soon.

Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 96

Lovely and sweet.

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 96

aww lovers ;)

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 96

Wow.  That was a major step.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: smartasssbich (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 96

Beautiful innocent Edward. Bella must be on cloud nine. I still want to torture James but at least he didn't completely ruin our boy! He will get through this. He's so lucky to have found Bella. She's exactly what he needed. So sweet!! 

Reviewer: musicluvr (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 96

That was a great, realistic progression of their physical relationship. It's also nice to see them have some time together without the weight of his past bearing down on them so much. I know they have a while to go yet before they get "there", but it was a relief to see them have some relaxed, fluffy romantic time.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 96

they are so sweet! i love it! they are learning together and loving, the way its meant to be!

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 96

what a sweet, romantic chapter :)

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 96

If I remember correctly, Edward hasn't done any masturbation, which makes sense. But he probably needs to get comfortable with his own body's reaction to pleasure before he can handle someone touching him more intimately. Or maybe he will trust in his body if Bella is the one bringing it pleasure. I don't know, but the first time he has an orgasm will definitely be eyeopening for him.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: kalenaa (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 96

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 96

Well done B! I'm so glad she can calm him down.

Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 96

Wow - ok, he's clearly made up his mind what he wants!  Good for them.  I like the return to the meadow - and this time the memory will be way better than the last two.

Thank you for the new chapter! I hate to even hear talk about the end coming! It makes me saddish. But seriously, this made my Friday. Until next week!

Reviewer: 112myboys (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 95

Although I am apprenhensive about Edward meeting his mother, I do think he is absolutely right to want some answers. He needs some closure. Why she abandoned him to that monster, why she never searched for him. I do hope it doesn't end up setting his progress back. I am so happy for how Edward has been interacting with everyone. He doesn't see the how much he has changed but he has :) Thank you for a great chapter.

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 95

I've just finished reading these 95 awesome hapters and so far I'm completely loving your story. You really portray the feelings and emotions of the characters well :)

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 95

I've just finished reading these 95 awesome hapters and so far I'm completely loving your story. You really portray the feelings and emotions of the characters well :)

Reviewer: crystal tibeault (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 95

Wow i didnt see that coming.........Well  guess it would help him get on with his life in one way! Can't wait for the next update!!

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