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Reviewer: stmfw53 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

An idea that sort of demanded to be set down, thanks! <><3

Reviewer: TheUnknown1 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

I REALLY LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think it's GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3

Author's Response:

This one has a special place in my heart; glad you enjoyed it <><3

Reviewer: twlight fan 182 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it

Reviewer: twlight fan 182 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad it was a hit <><3

Reviewer: Kittysmith (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1


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Reviewer: Kittysmith (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

sigh <3

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Reviewer: Kittysmith (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

sigh <3

Author's Response:

((hugs)) <><3

Reviewer: Piper2010 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I came across your story and I love it ! Jacob is very sweet and understanding.  I think Bella will always have issues, she is fortumate to have a man like Jacob who sees beyond that . Great job. =)

Author's Response:

AH stories are often problematic IMO because they have too little in common with the Saga (hey, this is supposed to be FAN Fiction!) I really tried to lift the characters - intact - away from the supernatural and explore how they would have developed in a "real" world. Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: AprilNicole (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

the best pretty coked up, thank you for taking the time to write this love story :)

Author's Response:

There's all kinds of brokenness is this world...The Jake in my mind can fix just about anything, but healing only happens when we allow it. Glad you liked it, it's a very special story to me <><3

Reviewer: zayide (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

This should, if you havent thought about it, keep on writing about it...its cute and heartwarming...but it could be further....painfully breathtakingly so...

Author's Response:

Thank you so much (I got your note, btw). So good to hear that this struck a chord -- I have a special soft spot for this fic, even tho' it didn't win the contest :P Every now and again, some more details of theis AU float through my mind - so you never know...I've got other project (slowly) working - so we'll just have to see...<><3

Reviewer: Inkymind (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

beautifull !

Author's Response:

*happy grin* thanks! <><3

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

nice one, different than others i've read.

thank u!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - different is good, right? <><3

Reviewer: icshly (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Somehow it feels like you used a diffirent style when you wrote this one. It's more like a fairy tale. In the way that it's less detailes. Except when it comes to...well, you know. But I'm the last one to complain!

But it feels a little bit weird how you get to know about Bellas problems. It's like, I'm a alkoholic and I don't like myself very much. I think it would have been better to give more hints to the reader instead of just saying everything.

Anyhow, I absolutley love how you ended it. That lumber can be romantic. I found that so SWEET.

Author's Response:

Um, well, not really sure how to respond to that.

Yes, it is a different style, because (a) it's about different characters in (b) an all human universe, who are (c) in a completely different story: it's not Moonshadow. This was, as mentioned, written for a contest with certain parameters. It may sound odd, but we writers don't necessarily have final say in how our characters express themselves.

I'm truly sorry that you were disappointed. <><3

Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh. totally LOVED it-I am a big fan of b/j and it;s going to be hard to watch breaking dawn because of it!!! Way to go-Darce

Reviewer: MissDarcy (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh. totally LOVED it-I am a big fan of b/j and it;s going to be hard to watch breaking dawn because of it!!! Way to go-Darce

Author's Response:

Honestly, I gave up on the movies after the first one (maybe I should give up fic & become a movie director..,) I really prefer the world of fan fiction these days: I can revel in stories that end the "right" way - don't need any silly movies ruining my nice JxB buzz! (altho' a study of Taylau's pecs is, um)...<><3

Reviewer: Charmer216 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

very nice!

Author's Response:

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it! <><3

Reviewer: la vie est belle (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Gah, I'm in love with your Jacob. So perfect, he makes me sick. Love your story, thanks for making me love Jacob even more. 

Author's Response:

That's the loveliest thing about fic: I get to make up the man I want...I'm only 'sick' with longing, tho' ;P Thanks so much for r&r-ing, glad you enjoyed it! <><3

PS: My mother's name is Belle!

Reviewer: k-t-f (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Lost Newf (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lovely story! Very well written and engaging.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was kinda cool to step out of my usual genre...<><3

Reviewer: Becstasy (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love it...I love it....I love it...let me count the, one thousand, two, two thousand LOL. I didn't think I would like it at first but it so sweet with just a hint of lemony goodness...

Author's Response:

Thank you for overcoming your misgivings! I'm quite leary of AH stories myself (they're mostly just Fiction, not fanfiction, if you know what I mean). I tried hard to keep this close to the Saga and IC - I can really see whiney Bella of the books reacting like this...AND Jake also reacting like this!! <><3

Reviewer: dmhgbz (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ending = love.


Author's Response:

Thank you so much, this was real pleasure to write. Glad you liked it. <><3

Reviewer: crystalnicoleyo (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is really a great story, I loved reading it when it was submitted for the challenge. Awesome, Awesome, Awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie! I have a real fondness for this particular fic! <><3

Reviewer: Ava Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

 (Big sigh)I am salivating over this story as we speak.Wish I was in Bella's um "position". A girl can only dream.

Author's Response:

I'm with you,lady! I could certainly go for some  "Jake therapy" myself! Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: Zohinette (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

So lovely, so romantic... I love it!

Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm not much on AH as a rule, but you don't need the supernatural to have a story to tell! Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: northernmoon (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

I found this story sweet and real. I really want to believe in the possibility that bella and jake ever had a chance but very few stories convice me that they could be possible. This is one of them.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It was a pleasant change to write about realistic brokeness & the healing power of a non-supernatural love...glad you enjoyed it! <><3

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