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Reviewer: liverlover (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 11:31 PM · On: One Shot
Wow. That was spooky and powerful.
The one niggling question that I have always had about Alec and Jane, where are they from? Those are not very Italian sounding names. Hmmm.
Speaking of names. Isabells. Nice.
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:43 AM · On: One Shot
Why on earth don't you write some more stuff about Jane? This is the best thing I read in quite a while on Twilighted, and I read A LOT. I'd heard about this fic plenty, nominated for a various number of awards in the fandom. I just don't know why it took me so long to get to this. I suppose I thought, Oh, another author who tries to give Jane depth and I think that people should leave this character alone in general because they butcher her.
But you did WELL! Brilliant! Wonderful! Really realistically, really spectacularly done. I can't give you enough compliments, and I'm gushing but I love a gushing review. XD Aro's character was spot on, and the wording you used, I just felt a shiver down my spine.
'Master Aro glided toward me then. "With her look," he whispered as he raised his hand and softly brushed my cheek, "she will bring men to their knees," he finished with reverence.'
That is so...agh. Not enough words in the language. I think this has to be my favourite one-shot by far. PLEASE write more about Jane! lol
Author's Response: OMG, I think I love you! You're so sweet! Actually, I have written more Jane, in fact I've stareted a continuation of this fic from Alec's POV, called "Creating Alec". It's posted on Fanfiction under the penname LoreliD http://www(dot)fanfiction(dot)net/~lorelid
There is also another Jane o/s posted there called Deceptive Little Flower, it's a Jane canon lemon.
You are really making my week, here. I hope you know that.
Much Love,
Lore
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:29 AM · On: One Shot
Bravo! This was a realistic glance on the Catholic Church and its hypocrisy. I especially enjoyed your showing us why Jane hates Bella Swan so much in New Moon. Of course it had to be something more than the denial of power, at least a bit more... :D I really loved this story, very, very much. Thank you for sharing! Wonderful writing, too!
Author's Response: Awww, your review made me so happy! I'm thrilled you liked my dark version of why Jane is who she is. I also always thought there had to be more to her hatred of Bella in New Moon, so that's exactly why I named the nun Isabella. I so happy you enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me!
xoxo
Lore
Reviewer: rose angel (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 03:41 AM · On: One Shot
WOW,this is great. I've been looking for ages for a good jane background story and this is the best so far and the most realistic. Great job
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! You're making me Bella blush! I had a lot of fun writing her and I'm sure I'll play with her again. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I love hearing from my readers! <3
xoxo
Lore
Reviewer: GoldenNomad (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:20 AM · On: One Shot
Always wondered what could've made Jane such a sadist. Those events would certainly make her want to elicit revenge and pain. Thanks for a quick read!
Author's Response: I have to say that I am really really sorry and mortified that I hadn't answered your review. To be honest, I don't login to Twilighted very often and I didn't get a notification that you had left me a review. I'm so sorry, it is my strict policy to reply to all reviews within a few days. I guess better way late than never?
I also always wondered about Jane and how she came to be who she was. I'm glad you found my version to be realistic and enjoyable! Thank you so much for taking a moment to comment and thank you for reading it, I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea.
Again, sorry for the delayed reply.
xoxo
LoreliD
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 06:51 PM · On: One Shot
the writing style is brilliant and i liked how the story progressed, going back to as she was human, and to her change. i am curious as to what happened to alec in this time.
xx
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so happy you enjoyed it and I am in the process of writing the Alec point of view. I hope to have that posted soon.
Reviewer: beck943 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:02 AM · On: One Shot
I wasn't sure if I'd care to read about Jane's past life, but you made me care - excellent plot line and writing style!!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was my intention! IMPO, the lesser known characters need a little love from time to time. :) I'm glad you liked my take and thank you for taking the time to leave me a review, it always makes my day! :D
Reviewer: AngeAiles (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:35 PM · On: One Shot
That was fantastic. Creepy, gruesome, disturbing, and horrifying, yes, but FANTASTIC. It really gives insight into Jane's psyche, and I can very easily picture it flowing into the story written by SM. Two thumbs up :).
Author's Response: I'm so thrilled that you liked it! I always wondered about Jane. I wrote this for a contest, so I'm just thrilled to hear such nice things being said about it! Thank you sooo much for taking the time to write such a detailed review. It means so much to us authors. :D
Reviewer: LightStarDusting (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:52 PM · On: One Shot
Amazing, amazing, amazing! I honestly feel honored that I got to beta this piece and so glad that we found each other through PTB. I cannot wait for more! Alec, come tell me your story of woe. ;)
Really good stuff.
Author's Response: Aww, you're so sweet. :D Thanks for the kind words!
Reviewer: firelove (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:26 PM · On: One Shot
Wow! That was truly a terrific read!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:01 AM · On: One Shot
Damn, this was absolutely excellent! I love your writing style, it really did compliment the fact that Jane is from a much earlier century. And the details and descriptions are just mind-blowing...sure, some of it is, as you said, like a really grotesque train wreck, but anything less would not be an accurate portrayal of the character. Once again, loved it, and I hope you plan on writing more stories in the future.
Author's Response: thank you so much for your awesome review! Being that this my first time writing, your praise means so much. I am considering expanding it after the contest is over. Thanks again for your kind words and for taking the time to leave a review! :-)
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:13 AM · On: One Shot
Wow. That was wonderful writing! And she's a sadist. I figured haha
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, she is a sadist....I just always wanted to know why. :)
I'm glad you liked my take on her and thanks so much for taking the time to review, it means SOOOO much to us writers!
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