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Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Epilogue: Soiree
That was an awesome ending to this story. I loved the truck that they gave her. It is so Bella. I half expected something to go wrong at the party since Bella's 18th birthday has ominous associations, but it was great. Thank you for finishing this story. I look forward to the next book.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Epilogue: Soiree
Absolutely beautiful, I can't wait for more. I have you under my favorite authours and look forward to book 3 to be started.
Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 07:42 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
NO PLZ POST BOOK 3 BEFORE UR NEW ONE!!!!!!!!ICVE BEEN WAITING SOOOOOOOOO LONG IVE READ BOTH STORIES TWICE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Calliope23 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:07 AM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
I can't wait to read the epilogue!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:01 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
i love jasper and bella's friendship! its too funny, he makes an amazing brother!
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 08:45 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
Post book three first!!! I love mind-reading Bella!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 11:16 AM · On: 23: Outnumbered
i hate that edward is so stubborn and pigheaded! he needs to just do it and get it over with! then it will be ok!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 04:48 AM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
so finally Bella's gotten through the hard skull that is Edward's head... sometimes it seems like HE'S the one shielded.... from reality heheh
Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 09:34 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
OMG!!!!!I LOVED IT LIKE ALWAYS!!!!!
cant wait for the epilogue!!!!!!!!!cant wait for the next one!!!what will it be named??the opposite of eclipse rite??oh and emmett probably got bella a truck just like her old one but re-fixed it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I actually couldn't find an opposite to eclipse but if you find one tell me. At the moment book 3 is titled Dark Sun. Your mostly right about the gift.
Reviewer: as63926 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 07:23 AM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
If I'm being honest, the venom and Bella's clumsiness was a puerile stretch at best. Everything else was good. The story can get a bit eccentric at times and doesn't hold my interest at others. It sometimes reads as though you have writer's block and you are just filling space. Your first story was much better, but I still have read this through, and will continue to read. The whole Bronte thing is ridiculous to me. I hope this didn't come off as something that is criticizing and disrespectful, it WA meant as neither.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 07:00 AM · On: 1: Thoughts
wait did i confuse u or wat and wat is moBS lol
okay i look forward to the epilogue
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:50 AM · On: 1: Thoughts
good one I like it :)
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 04:48 AM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
Okay, Bella is just being plain mean now! She didn't like Edward leaving and now she is treating him like shit!
I know he deserved to be yelled and screamed at but come on now she is just playing head games!
I can't wait for Hidden and Captured to get worked on but please do book 3 before your new story!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 04:22 AM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
i can't wait to read what happens in Hidden and Captured, I have both favourited, And new things to read yay!!:D
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 10:35 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
Loved it so much.
I don't know what Em got her but my guess for Edward would be his mother's heart charm and a bracelet or a car... Am I RIGHT??????
Can't wait for book three I love your unique spin on things.
Author's Response: Sorry, but you're wrong, good guess though.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:53 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
i loved this chapter poor eddie is getting cockblocked lol 1 2 3 4 Go Bella!!!! lol
and i loved the part with jasper too
emmett : a car or something idk
edward will give her some diamonds of his mothers or something
well until next time
is there one more chapter and then the epilogue or just the epilogue
Author's Response: Up until I read MoBS, I had never heard the word cockblock and was totally confused. Your close on the gift ideas ;-). Just the epi left which I'm working on.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 08:06 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
i frickin love you :D im so glad i got to read this so shortly after reading the other :D damn edward and his idiotness haha i mean come on how much of an idiot is he i cant wait for the epi and am soooo glad there are still two books for you to write if you still plan on doing all four which i really hope you do you are amazing doll i love this sooooooo much :D
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 07:41 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
This was a good chapter. I liked Edward and Bella's showdown at school and Bella's revelation of why she has been keeping Edward at a distance. I don't think he quite gets that he needs to do some serious grovelling to make up for the many ways that he has hurt Bella. I liked Bella's gift to Jasper. I thought she was going to give it to Carlisle for some reason, so that was a surprise. I hope you will start posting book 3 first because I am really enjoying this series. Thank you.
Reviewer: Robin Jeannene (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 07:13 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
Loved it lol. That makes total sense, that whole venom thing.
You should post book three emediately if not sooner :D What's it gonna be called? What's the opposite of eclipse?
Author's Response: I nearly pulled my hair out trying to think of a title. Problem is we have no idea if its a solar or lunar eclipse and there is no definiet opposite. I asked for halp from readers a while back and got a really good one - Dark Sun.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 06:44 PM · On: 24: What Have I Done?
We NEED book 3 to start soon. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 06:00 PM · On: 23: Outnumbered
yay :D i love you :D im glad bella didnt accept his ultimatum in my opinion it wasnt a proposal i can't wait for the next chapter and how you are going to fix it but i have faith in you :D you are brilliant doll :D
Reviewer: Orak (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 04:51 AM · On: 1: Thoughts
Reviewer: Orak (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 04:40 AM · On: 23: Outnumbered
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 08:37 PM · On: 23: Outnumbered
Good for her!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 08:34 PM · On: 23: Outnumbered
I like it. In NM, it irritated me that she turned him down because "I'm only eighteen, what will people think?" But it was rather irritating that he proposed as an ultimatum. As a condition; when common sense said she would have to be changed anyway.
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