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Reviewer: HaDeTo (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Love Story
Yayyyy! You updated, thank youuu. I've been waiting for this update for so long. You didn't disappoint as always. Great chapter. I like the way you describe their feelings for each other. Kellan makes me laugh all the time. But...this cliffhanger was just mean. Soo next time is the big time, isn't it? Please don't make us wait long.
Nadya xx
Author's Response: I'm sorry about taking so long to update. I haven't had the feel to write lately but I'm trying to work through it.
I want to keep things as real as possible between Jackris so writing them the way I do is beneficial, I hope, to the story. Kellan has always felt like the goofball of the group. I think it's the dimples. :P
I need the cliffhanger to bring you back! No throwing fruit. :)
<3
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Love Story
Oh my gosh! When I saw there was a new chapter I squealed..... loudly. I've been checking for a new chappie every day for like, two weeks! Thank you for ending the torture! I loved it, by the way. This chapter has got to be one of my favorites! I love how realistic this story is! Post soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about the lack of updates. I have nothing to blame it on but my being lazy. :/
As I've said before, thank you for always coming back and leaving some love. You don't have to and that makes your read and review that much more special.
:)
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Love Story
If there is an award for best prank ever, this chapter just won it. I almost died laughing at the prank on Kellan. So evil, but so funny!
I am out of words to describe how much I like this story. Your characters seem so real. They have flaws like "real" people do. It makes them easier to relate to, and to like.
I was so happy to see an update. It make me squee outloud when I saw you had updated. Hope you are feeling better, and that the move goes well. Reading this has made me even more excited (if that were possible) for the 100 Monkeys concert next week! Can't wait to read more!
CM
Author's Response: Semen-based recipes FTW! :P
You know that my biggest thing with this fic is trying to keep things as real as possible. I'm thankful that you still feel I'm able to do that.
I'm feeling a little better. Thanks for the love, bb. *hugs*
Reviewer: clh2o (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Love Story
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Really? Really? I mean really? That is where you decided to leave this chapter... I feel like a little kid who was told that they had to wait till after spinich to eat their ice cream.... sad face!
Author's Response: I had to! I needed a cliffie to make sure you came to read the following chappy. :P And spinach is delicious. You should always have that instead of ice cream.
No sad faces! Cuz I sport a happy one every time I see you've reviewed. <3
Reviewer: vfy (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Love Story
Ugh! I was so hoping that we were going to get there on this chapter, but I am greedy like that. I so enjoyed this update and I know the next one will be awesome! I liked the part where he asked about the lack of stereotypical dates and I can not belive the trick with the semen based flan! That was pricesless. I actually ordered the book for a couple friends for Christmas. Fun times in PA!!! I may make a few couples send you a thank you note for the great idea. Thanks for updating! (NessieFY)
Author's Response: I know, I know. Everyone wanted the smeksin to be told, but I need to bring out the cliffie so that I could get you to come back for the next chappy. LOL
The date thing was something I def wanted to address. As much as I want Jackris to be a normal couple, they have obstacle because of the "Jackson Rathbone" name. She doesn't see it as a problem because she's simply happy to be with him and doesn't see him in the celebrity light. He, on the other hand, wants to be able to treat her like he would be able to if his every move wasn't being watched.
Semen-based flan. You can't go wrong. :P
*hugs*
Reviewer: aami_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Love Story
Of course it's a 'DUN DUN DUNNNN' moment. I am very proud of you, though. It only took you 21 chapters, and Story Iris and Jackson are going to get it on. 'Get it on' with the porno 'bow chicka bow wow' music going on in the background. LOVE IT!
And I love the chapter, especially with the semen recipe book and the Twilight cast. Completely fuckng awesome. I couldn't have thought of it, so I bow down to you as a comedy master genius!
And Iris' reaction to the Kellan/Jackson thing was very realistic - I loved it. So, all in all, I loved the chapter, but I have to admit, I kind of hate you in the fact that you are a better writer than me and also for the fact that you kept all us readers waiting for the actual lemon, lemon-y, lemonade goodness. But don't worry, I'm not going to be tracking anyone down with the aid of Google Earth, because I'm pretty much broke, and they don't hand out free air points for being a good citizen. Otherwise I totally would come to Albuquerque, (and oh my God, I spelt it right on the first try) kick your ass, and then we would fly to see 100 Monkeys in concert and from there, we would go all Pinky and the Brain and take over the world. I would want to be the Brain because he has that hysterical voice, and you could say all the funny lines as Pinky.
And - getting back to the point - still absolutely love your story, and I hope that when my hotmail finally gets it's shit together, that my story will be half as cool as yours. Love ya, bye!
Author's Response: Bwahaha! I was waiting for this review. I know how you've been waiting for the smeksin to finally happen.
The semen book thing was something I've been wanting to use for a while now. I had it in my had way back when and I thought it was a good time to bring it out.
What is it with you and Goodle Earth? LMAO. I think you be having a crush on that site. :P
*hearts*
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:31 PM · On: I Want To Know What Love Is
Well, here's a neck smoochie then! :) I soooooo love the casual yet somehow very intimate and totally realistic 'i love you' scene..... well, beginning of a scene? I can't wait for her reaction and everything that comes after!!! Absolutely a genius quality chapter!
Author's Response: You know me. I'm all about the realistic aspects of fics, especially RPFs. The more realistic it seems, the more readers seem to enjoy it and I hope that this story is able to pull that off.
Again, thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: WhosThat65 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 12:21 PM · On: I Want To Know What Love Is
Woooooooooo Yooooooooooooo FINALLY!!!!!!!xoxo
Author's Response: Whoohoo! And it only took them about 4 months and 20 chapters. LOL
Thanks for continuing to come back and read. The fact that you do makes me as giddy as a schoolgirl. <3
Reviewer: cherrytattoo (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 01:34 PM · On: OOC (Out Of Control)
please update soon, i'm going through withdrawl!! :)
Author's Response: LOL! It'll prob be another couple of weeks before I can get 21 posted, but I'm trying. RL's being a pain right now so I have to tend to that first. The update will be lengthy so I hope that makes up for it.
Thanks for the love, bb! :)
Reviewer: SportGirl33 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 09:28 PM · On: I Want To Know What Love Is
UPDATE LIKE NOW! I MIGHT GO INSANE OTHERWISE!
Author's Response: No! Don't go all crazy like! I'm writing, but it's a slow process. It'll probably be another couple of weeks before I can get the next chappy up. I'm in the middle of a horrible health thingy and am moving back to NYC. I gots to take care of those first. After that, I'll crank this puppy out.
Thanks for the shouty capitals! <3
Reviewer: bbella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:01 AM · On: I Want To Know What Love Is
Holy enchilada, Batman! This story's the shizz. I *just* jump started on my Jackson crush when I stumbled upon this little gem. I have grown fond (watcha, I'm using big words) of this story because 1) Iris is pura mexicana like mahself and 2) I love the humor in this story. Please, pretty please con un cherry on top update soon. Loves me some Jackson Action. :D
Author's Response: Otra Mexicana! You have no idea how happy that makes me. :D
I'm happy that you found some of yourself in Iris. Being able to relate to a character makes reading fics more enjoyable, which I hope is the case here.
I'll update as soon as I can, but it'll probably be another couple of weeks. RL is kicking my tushy right now and I have to concentrate on that first. :(
Thanks for the read and the review, mija! <3
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 08:45 AM · On: I Want To Know What Love Is
YES YES YES! HE SAID IT! WHOOP!!!!!
Author's Response: That last line got me a lot of shouty capitals. LOL! Didn't expect it, but I'll take it.
*super cheesy grin*
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Touch My Body
I have died and am writing to you from the beyond.
Just kidding, but I need a cigarette, and I don't smoke. lol
Author's Response: Come back to us! We need you on this side. And no smokes for you. It's a horrible habit, one I have to overcome soon. :/
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 12:56 PM · On: More Than Just Friends
We're not on Twitter, but I'll do it anyway because it will make me feel better.
#honestyhour I actually fist pumped when they kissed. I am not ashamed in the slightest. I might have gasped at the straddle and giggled at Taylor's comment also.
Author's Response: Bwahaha! I gots me a fist pump. Yes!
Iris being bold. Who knew? And I really wanted to add something that would remind us all that while Taylor may have the abs of steel, he's still just a kid.
Fist pump right back at ya. :)
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Heartbreaker
Aaaand, crying again. :'(
Author's Response: No! Why the tears? I'll fix it! I promise. *lip quiver*
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Say Somethin
I'm too busy crying right now to comment on this chapter. When I recover, I'm sure I'll have a lot to say.
Author's Response: Why the tears, bb?! There's no crying in baseball! I mean, there's no crying in fic reading. :(
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Did I Do That?
Oh Kellan. He knew exactly what he was doing, throwing those two in a bathtub all wet together. I hope that when Iris and J-Bone have little I-Bones running around that they thank Kellan for his quick thinking. :)
So Iris has repressed the crush (or tried). Now she's going for the avoid. Denying is the last step. I wonder how this will work out? I'm thinking J-Bone might make it a bit difficult.
Author's Response: Kellan may be a giant goofball and prankster, but he definitely knows what he's doing. He's a little schemer, that one.
Little I-Bones? LMAO
When in doubt, avoid. That's Iris' motto. Sadly, I don't think it's going to work out well for her. :P
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:53 AM · On: The Impossible
*sigh* I'm living vicariously through Iris here, imagining what it would be like to have those lips on my cabeza.... :)
I think that you are writing the cast the way that most people hope they are in real life. :) At least, I hope they are like that. lol
Iris is so friendly and likeable! I'd be friends with her too. Sadly, I am not famous.
Author's Response: Mmmm... Bone lips. Gah!
I hope they're like that, too! And it's not just wishful thinking. It's me wanting them to be able to have normal lives and enjoy their success, not be sheltered by it.
Iris'd be friends with you, fame or no fame. Trust. :)
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Emotions
I agree with you that the photogs are just relentless. It's even more disgusting the pay these people get for the photos. It's not like people will DIE if they don't have a pic of Rob blowing his nose or something. *sigh* If only we ran the world, right?
Author's Response: I can't stand the paps. There's a time and a place to take pictures but invading someone's personal space and life is just WAY outta line. The lengths that they go to are reprehensible. People forget that celebrities are regular, everyday people. For some reason, the public tends to think that they have a right to know what's going on in every facet of their lives. It's something TRULY bothers me.
We should rule the world! *fist pump*
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Anytime You Need A Friend
Being "just friends" with someone you like is SO difficult to do. I do it all the time, and it just eats away at me! I can't wait to see how this all develops. :)
Yay for some Kellan and Taylor bits. :)
Author's Response: Isn't it?! I think it's something people actually believe will work, that no one gets hurt. Little do they know...
I really needed to have all the Twi peeps in there. It helps keep things balanced. It's not all about Jackris and what they're going through. He has co-workers/friends that are in his everyday life and I think it shows just how normal they really are when they take to Iris as if she was just someone they knew growing up.
*hearts*
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:19 PM · On: 4Real4Real
I'm seeing from this chapter that Mexicans and Italians are a lot alike. We cook too much food, clean like maniacs before company, and then worry about there not being enough for everyone (even though there's enough for an army!) or that the house is too dirty (even though people could eat off the floor safely). :)
I think dinner went very well! The cast was able to have a good time and not have to be all prim and proper. I imagine Ben G to be a goof too, but very sweet. :)
TwiMoms are fierce! I am friends with a bunch of them. :)
I know you won't believe me, but it's nice to read a story and identify with the main character quite a bit. :)
Author's Response: A few of my best friends are Italian and we always joke about just how similar we are. Nothing like being domestic to bring everyone together. LOL
Graupner's a total goof. I'm convinced. With that smile and lanky body, it's a given.
I'm happy that you can relate to Iris (me). I've been told that it makes reading fics easier. If that's so, then yay! :D
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:55 PM · On: The Beautiful Ones
I was a little sad during this chapter because Iris is so great, and I hate that she can't see that. I want to give her a hug! I'm pleasantly plump, plumper than Iris, and I know that I am more worried about it than my friends are when we go out places. Suzy is a good friend, and I love how she gives it back to Iris.
"The Bone" hahahahaha. That's just wrong but so funny anyway. :)
Yay for cooking for the cast! :) They probably need a homecooked meal!
Author's Response: All big girls should have a friend like Suzy, someone who loves them in their own way and isn't afraid to tell it like it is. Being straightforward is always the best bet.
The Bone... The Bone!
Nothing like a home cooked meal to bring peeps together. It's all about delish flavors and awesome convos.
<3
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Fantasy
Twi ate my original review, but I hope I remember some of the key points.
I love the Spanish sayings placed in the story. I speak/understand/read Spanish (albeit poorly now because I don't use it as often anymore), and I got all excited that I recognized everything so far! lol
Poor Iris. :( She thinks J-Bone is all about Suzy. :( I am like that too...I can't understand why people even like me most days. Iris uses her humor as a defense mechanism, but I can tell already what a great person she is. I hope J-Bone realizes that soon too.
Author's Response: Twi seems to eat a lot of reviews. It's like a damn cookie monster or something. *shrugs*
I catch myself throwing in random Spanish words into everyday convos and my friends think it's hilarious. I figured I'd have Story Iris do it, too. :P
A lot of girls, especially big girls, have a hard time accepting when something is right in front of them. It doesn't help that Suzy's a knockout, either. Little by little, though, Iris'll come out of her shell. While the joking is a defense mechanism, it's going to help her out, too.
:)
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:22 AM · On: OOC (Out Of Control)
So I'm not sure how I missed that I started this story and never kept reading! Well, late to the party, but better late than never, right?
Author's Response: Dude, I'm just surprised you even came back. Don't hurt me with the future chappys! :/
Reviewer: SportGirl33 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:39 PM · On: I Want To Know What Love Is
Love it! update soon please :)
Author's Response: Awww. Thanks, hon! I'll see if I can hurry myself along with an update. :)
<3
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