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Reviews For Blue Moon Dust
Reviewer: enchantedmind (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Hunting

I really like this idea about the twins... and the 'sibling rivalry'.

I'm so voting for EJ - Nessie has had enough attention :)

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Hunting

It's good but am a little iffy on the name.

Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Time

FIX IT!!! Ahhhhhh!!! And what's the other scent?!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Time

that was intense

Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:51 AM · On: On the edge

OMG did he go to the volturi... On his little adventure thing will he find a mate?? OMG you really need to write more!

Reviewer: glissette05 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:54 PM · On: On the edge

OMG!!! Your really evil!

Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 02:29 AM · On: On the edge

OMG EJ!??! Ahhh. Please don't go the the volturi!?

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:11 AM · On: On the edge

poor EJ

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:10 AM · On: On the edge

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens. I can understand why he wouldn't tell anyone that he feels left out. Because if I were him, than any time in the future where they would go out of there way to include me, I would think it was only because I said something.

I'm glad Bella noticed something was wrong, I know the others are wrapped up in what is happening between Nessie and Jake. It sucks for everyone else though because EJ never once said anything about what bothered him, he kept it all internal.

Hmm...I wonder where he is going? Whoa, I wrote a lot, better stop now...Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Vampire_luva (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Surprise

EJ should beat the shit our of Jacob. Like jacob is awesome but really. Or Leah should imprint on EJ. Or EJ should totaly like ignore Renesmee and like act like an ass to piss Renes,ee off .I mean they are twins the best of friends and she juist blows him off for Jacob. So make Renesmee or jacob suffer. OR make both of them suffer!! But on the other hand you are a wonderful writer! You should continue this story. It really is very vivid.

Reviewer: koolchick14 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Surprise

com on give me some more

Author's Response:

I'm trying to get out as many chapters I can and have a few chapters coming soon. It just takes a while for the whole process of writing, getting it beta'd and then posting and getting it accepted

Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Surprise

Aww poor EJ! I want him to meet a lady!

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Surprise

Great chapter! I'm waiting for EJ to tell them off, I wanted him to do that in this chapter! Hope you update soon!

Author's Response:

At the moment, he's really upset so he probably won't tell them off, but thanks for the idea, i might bring it in later

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Surprise

poor EJ

Reviewer: Serious_Vampire (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Surprise

Very creative. Great work!

Reviewer: bpcullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:28 PM · On: I Can't Handle It!

Great story! Can't wait to read more, I love how you portrayed EJ... I really hope he finds someone soon

Author's Response:

Thanks, it's really cool to know that EJ is the way that people think he should be.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:15 AM · On: I Can't Handle It!

Love it.

Author's Response:

Thanks, it's good to know that its on the right track :)

Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Twist

So sad, but I'm happy for neSsie and jake! I want more of EJ!!

Reviewer: xxlilmiztrublexx (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Twist

awwww!!....thats soo sad hes like kinda lonely now he hasnt reli got anyone to hang around with...hopefully he finds a friend soon. post the next chapter asap please!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Twist

Poor EJ.

Author's Response:

I know, it's sad but it will get better for him, in a way

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:47 PM · On: North Dakota?

I think my favorite part is at the end with EJ sighing. I could really feel and see what he was feeling as he looked at his sister.

Kind of like, "There's she goes again."


Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. It's good to know that what I'm writing makes sense :)

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Going away?

EJ reminds me of Edward, in the way with is brooding or sulking manner. I like it.

Hmm telling Edward will be interesting.


Author's Response:

Hey thanks for your comment, it's good to know that he's similar to Edward.

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Hunting

I very interesting story plot. Seeing how I just found this story I have no way of knowing if you have done this yet.

It there a chance maybe in a later chapter that we might see every one's reaction when they found out Bella is expecting twins?

I'm looking forward to reading more.


Author's Response:

I'm definitely looking into it at the moment, as it has been a suggestion of some people, but it will be coming a bit later on when some events happen that cause Bella to have a flash back

Reviewer: barrys1493 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:18 PM · On: North Dakota?

I love this story. What a great idea!

Reviewer: sistergrimm (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Going away?

interesting. i'm curious though how the cullens reacted when they first realised bella was carrying twins. maybe you should write a flashback?

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. That's such a great idea. I will definitely do that a bit later on in the story.

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