Can I tell you a Kelly Clarkson story?  I was at her concert a few years ago around Halloween.  She and her band had a pumpkin carving contest.  Do you know hers was?  A man lying on a table with his shirt open, getting waxed. Totally the scene from 40 year old virgin, but with a pumpkin head. And she had a little machine that kept yelling "Bah, Kelly Clarkson!" The whole place lit up with laughter, it was possibly the funniest thing I had ever scene. Google "Kelly Clarkson Pumpkin", trust me, it's hilarious.

Good Chapter.....

Wow I am speechless!  How can you let it hanging like that, I hope that there isn't a DOA and they are all ok!!  Hurry up and let us know soon the suspense is killing me!

ok so Im thrilled that you updated so quickley... not so thrilled to be left hanging! Loved the chapter cant wait to reed more

OMG! What an incrediable chapter -- so many ups and downs! Then the ending! I can't wait to get the next chapter. Thanks for writing

holy crap i hope it isn't edward, emmet or jasper!!! will they be ok!? and how did james know about bella and edwards fight if he left before they had it?

i started reading your story 2 days ago and finished it seconds ago. i really like this new story, new topic, but also the way you writet. you make the characters real and living, so that i'm completly in the story. there are some favourite chapters of mine, one when they first tell each other 'i love you'. it was wonderful written, i'm going to re-read again after sending you this review. there are others, but i just want to let you know that i love reading the story so far. i couldn't get it out of my head, i had to read more, can't stop. and i think you'll understand that i can't wait for the next chapter. i know the latest one is pretty new, but i really really hope that you're going to update soon. i want to know how these two are going to sort through their problems and come together, again.

so i'm waiting for the next chapter,
some greets from a dear reader, annmary

i am all caught up and i am sitting here shaking mad at what a farce the cullen family is.  hurry up and update when you can. i cant wait!

Oh hell tell him to sit. Tale a chance girl and go with it. I am sure Jake is not far behind and things will get ugly. Or they fall into each others arms find a room and have wild and crazy sex. That is what I vote for. Love this story, can't write any more I need to read.

 

Lilly

Good Chapter......

when will edward get his head out of his butt!? and i really hope that no one saw bella and james together and thought bad things about it! like a set up by tanya?

yay an update !!

 

Edward get your rear end away from your face ..NOW!!

 

Great update ,can't wait for more