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Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

Ok, first of all, your story caused my first Freudian slip, my son kept letting my dog into the playroom while I was reading this chapter and I had to keep getting up to close the door. I finally said "Would you stop letting Rob into the room?" Yup, the dog's name is NOT Rob!

I loved the note and the rose, but kinda bummed that Laura had to become just a be0tch. I guess I can feel for her, but still, "Hey, he just isn't that into you."

I loved the sweet, shy Rob and how he wants to make sure Marisa is sure, and not think that he is taking advantage, too cute.

BTW, I prefer cider at the pub too :)

Can't wait to read about the date!

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

OMG! You are killing me!!! I can't believe she turned him down! But it totally rocks, I love twists in the story and I know that won't be the end of it!

 

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 9--I'll Be Your Lover Too

Ahhh. my favorite, Musical Rob, and Rob on a bit of pot is quite a thought too, so giggly and adorkable. I loved the chappy, looking forward to the lemons coming :) I'm glad Marisa gave Marcello the brush off, he was starting to bug me too..

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 8--Orgasm Muse

Wow! What a rollercoaster this chapter was! First wet Rob, massaging, and self satisfying fantasies, and then total turn of direction as we learn about Marisa's tragedy.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Ojojoj (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture

Oki!!! Just a very, very quick one!!! Thanks for making (on RAoR yesterday) me take the plunge to pop my Rob-fic cherry to this absolutely delish story Scilla. Jesus. Will never look at Rob again the same way. And I mean that in the best of ways. ;-) now I'm off to next chappie, longer review later! // Dr C

Author's Response:

Dr. C, you made it, so happy you're here! I'm glad I was able to pop your Rob fic cherry. No glittah lube needed, right?! Can't wait to find out what you think of the rest of the chappies. Muaaa.

Reviewer: AnnLinny (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

If this story ends soon I'll cry!!! ;o)



Author's Response:

Ding, ding, ding, ding! You're my 1500 review. So floored. Thank you so much for all the love and support over on the OTI forum. I'll get that snippet of ch.32 ready for you. Huge hugs and please keep reviewing.

Reviewer: jacobson33 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Yay, so glad to hear that! I'm working on ch.32 right now. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: RenaBug1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 13--Rob the Ripper

The Jack the Ripper tour sounds interesting...and scary!  I'd need Rob to get through it as well...yikes!



Author's Response:

Jack the Ripper is sooo scary, thank goodness Rob was there. I cannot wait for you to read ch.14. Brace yourself, it's a long one twss. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hugs.

Reviewer: RenaBug1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture

Terribly romantic!  Loved the boat ride!



Author's Response:

Thanks bb. Swoon, right?

Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Laura? Does Clare like Marisa more now that she feels remorse for her? Love the fic! Keep it up :)

Author's Response:

Hi peacheschica, love your name, btw. All of you guys have really good guesses, but you'll have to keep reading to find out who "she" is. Clare definitely empathizes with Marisa more now. But will she warm up to her now? Too soon to tell. So happy to read your review, please keep it up. Hugs.

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Great chapter Scilla.  I don't know who "she" is, but I can't wait to find out!  Loved all the detail regarding the premiere and of course, the details of the love in the service elevator and then at Marisa's were made of WIN, as usual. 

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

featherme, so happy you liked it! I'm all about the deets, baby. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: VintageRobLover (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Another great chapter.  I love all the details you include in your story.  Ooooh...can't wait to see where the "She" twist takes us.



Author's Response:

I'm all about the details, no doubt. The "She" twist should be interesting. Thanks so much for reviewing. Please keep it up, twss. Hugs.

Reviewer: YoungCougar (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Interesting chapter. I like the twist coming up towards the end. Can't wait to read the next chapter...



Author's Response:

So happy you want to read more. Thanks for reviewing! Can't wait to find out what you think of the next chappy. Hugs.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 6--I Prefer To Drive Manual

I loved the whole stick shift play, and musical Rob... totally got me right there. Loving the slow burn, feeling bad for Laura though, maybe she should give Tom some attention. :)



Author's Response:

naturaladdict, bb, you're here! I squealed when I saw your name in the reviews, made my day. I'm glad you're enjoying the slow burn, 'cos there's plenty more of it, but don't worry once the lemons start, they don't stop. Yay! Squeal, again, naturaladdict is reading OTI. Please keep reading and reviewing. Muaaa.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia

I loved the whole grape bit.. and the "oh you know how not ok I am"... thud. I am wondering where the inspiration for the Simon character came from though...

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

Loved the restaurant chapter, and lecherous Jack and shy and drunk Rob. I could really feel the electricity going on between Marisa and Rob and so wanted them to kiss, but looking forward to some less "professional" time in Tuscany.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

I love the slow burn, always have... love the little "in his american accent" and loved a little Jack in the story too.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

Loved the first chapter, Scilla. Mr. Rob... LOL! You really captured the sense of how I imagine someone would be effected by meeting Rob for the first time, especially one that wasn't a raving lunatic for him, like myself.

Great descriptions, I could really visualize the scene and engross myself in the story, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Oh Scilla....I cannot even tell you how special it felt to get a special shout-out for TC1's tales from the Eclipse premiere...*sniff* *sniff*...GOD your love makes it hard for me to breathe...to even have a small little piece of this story that i LOVE SO freaking much makes me verklempt baby!!!! and to sit at Buca de Beppo's in Pasadena and tell the tale of the ECLPISE AFTER-PARTY to the RAoR Hoor extraordinaire was even more EPIC...

Now back to the impostant stuff...your writing....this f*cking chapter removed all the moisture from my hoo-ha...seriously...GAH!!! You may need to start adding a numbered panti-liner warning or sum such shizz...like this chapter requires 3 panti-liners...F*CK me girlfriend...you are seriously cumming into some epic channeling of Marisa and Rob shit...this chapter was out in orbit...the elevator...the premiere...the after party...the loveseat...F*CK...perfection Scilla...

And your descriptions of the platforms at the after-party...RIGHT-the-fuck on...it was like you were there...tee hee hee...more perfection baby!!!! GOD...it made me tingle for the smile from ROB....damn it girl...I lurve you so hard...what an epic night...etched in stone by this chapter....I LOVE it and you so much....

Hoor sisters for eva~~~



Author's Response:

TC1! meeting you was beyond epic. I had so much fun with you and love you sofa king much, you have no idea. This chapter pretty much wrote itself, thanks to all the premiere deets you shared with me. Couldn't have done it without you, bb. Hoor sisters for eva, for sure. Muaaa.

Reviewer: mirkbar (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

Wow. I have read my fair share of fanfic, but the peach pie dialogue was, by far, one of the best I have ever read. It was hysterical, and I think I woke up my husband while laughing out loud. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story thus far. Let me tell you something, you can certainly write the lemons, honey. I have never read lemons with strawberries in them, and I kinda liked it. I have to admit that this is my first review *bows head in shame*, but the fact that you built up all the tention and angst in the first several chapters, was what got me hooked to this story, even though I was wanting romance, and sexy times to happen right away!!  BTW, thanks for incorporating the sexpenders and beanie- that is priceless. I'm really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Mirkbar, you made my day, what a wonderful review! I'm so happy you're enjoying many aspects of this story. Much more to come. I look forward to reading more of your reviews. Thanks again. Hugs.

Reviewer: tasteslikecherryade (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Hi, I stumbled across this story and now I'm completely hooked. Very very sweet and very very hot ; ). 

I enjoy your cliffhangers a lot. A great way to keep people waiting impatiently for updates.

The obvious guess for the intruder would be Kyle. But I suspect you're going for the shock factor and will take me by surprise. I'll take a random guess and say it's Marisa's friend from Spain....

 



Author's Response:

Welcome! So glad you found OTI. Good guesses on the intruder, but my lips are sealed. More will be revealed in the next chappy. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: buffalocruz (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

It can't be Kristen, can it??? 



Author's Response:

Kristen, interesting idea. Keep reading to find out. Thanks so much for reviewing! Hugs.

Reviewer: buffalocruz (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

It was great!  I had been so busy with my day to day life duties that I hadnt read for a while so I kinda forgot how good this story is!  Rob was being so cheeky it made me grin.  LOVED it!  So you met him in person...  Lucky biatch!   Is he sexy in real life too? 



Author's Response:

Totally understand about RL, but I'm glad you didn't forget about OTI. It's only going to get better and better. Love cheeky Rob, he's my favorite. I met Rob in person briefly last November. This last time at the Twilight Convention, I didn't meet him, I was in the audience for his panel. But, in person, back in November, he seemed shy and unassuming, pretty much no game. I think he really turns it on for the cameras, and I'm sure in private with his girl, but as for out in public, nope, just shy, adorkable Rob, that's all. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

It's Kyle....right??  (wink)

Nice, Scilla!  Felt like I was there!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chappy, Jan! Kyle?...Maybe, Maybe not. (wink). Thanks so much for continuing to read and review, bb. Muaaa.

Reviewer: Tiggertoo (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Another terrific chapter. I love Rob and Marisa together. I loved that they snuck away at the premier, horny and bold move on their part. Now you have me freaked out about the next chapter. Hope everyone is safe!



Author's Response:

Tiggertoo, thank you! Rob and Marisa can't stay away from each other, so much passion there. Next chappy should be interesting. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

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