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Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Aaaaghhh!!!!  I didn't want him to go!!!!  I think, maybe, Rob was steeling himself because he didn't like the thought of being apart from her...  Tell me I'm right.  I don't think anything will happen to Rob, but she is probably right about her intuition - something is going to happen that will keep them apart.  There, I said it but I don't like it.  What I do like, though, is this story - you are a Rob-genius.  I'll say it again, this is the best, best, best.  Fantastic!

Reviewer: mandy07 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Keeping up with the story and am loving it !  Love the nosey neighbors could be open for somemore snide remarks, but PLEASE!,PLEASE!, don't let him die like James Dean!  I would settle for comatose. 

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Gah-caught by neighbors!! Which is so funny, because the whole time I was reading it, I keep thinking about her neighbors.  Well, she DID seem kinda loud.  I would too. LOL!  Oh, and poor hungry Thor!! :-(

Glad he found the sweet spot.  Yup, long strong fingers would do the trick!

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Oh no, I shudder to think what might happen and if Marisa is right about the whole intuition thing. Gosh, I hope it isn't anything too tragic **scratching head**

I loved the chapter and feel sad now that Rob had to leave. Hope we get an update soon.

Hugs,

Louise

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

I love this story, it is my top favortie so far. Please have a happy ending. I couldn't take a sad story at this point.

Reviewer: PintoBean (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Great chapter!

I hope Rob and Marisa talk about what they're are feeling and about what they want in a relationship. Or hell, maybe their status.

I'm afraid to even guess what Marisa's terrible feeling is about.

 

 

Reviewer: Rosa33 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

OMG...the wait for the update is always sooooo worth it!!!

Every chapter is even better than the last one...god,i love all the sex part LOL

The sex on the counter was just...O_O

Seriously....and now i feel sad because he left,and i don´t know if

something bad is going to happen to him...no,please...=((

You´re awesome,you know how to keep us awaiting for more....Take care

and keep it coming the good work..=))) xoxooxoxo Dukesa31

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

This is so incredible.....excellent! Love reading a story about Rob and an older woman.....as I am about the same age as the woman in this story. Makes me feel like we still got it and can be attractive to a younger man!  Keep em comin...I'm dying for more!

Reviewer: krypto (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Scilla, I lurve this story and can't get enough of it.  It is one of my favorite Rob stories and you write him so well.  You are a f*ckawsome Pattin hoor and i <3 you hard.  Elvis is a lucky man.  In case it isn't obvious I am a ROaR lurker and have posted a couple of times there as Pattinslut.  Please don't make us wait too long for the update.  The suspense is already killing me.  Thank you so much for this story.  I consider it a gift to sluts like me. *facepalm*

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Love it

Reviewer: MyRobbie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

So sad! Great job with the whole weekend, scilla. Kitchen counter sex rocks!

Reviewer: cbrand1996 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Thanks for the update. I am thinking that a car accident would be a bad thing to happen to poor Marisa again. My guess is that the papz will find out about the juicy cougar news and Rob will get scared... IDK. But I will wait patiently for next chapter. Thanks!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Holy Hell........ I need more!

Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

This chapter was GREAT! I think Rob wants to break it off with Marisa, but eventually he will realize that he can't live without her...or something like that. Keep writing, please! I love your story!!!

Bethany

Reviewer: IGD (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

So he's a back door maaaannnn!!!! woo hoo that was great Scilla, but now Im worried how could anything bad happen to those 2, here comes the angst!!!! great story its progressing really well, my 44 year old ass loves the peach!!!!

Reviewer: Sweetnobody (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Very hot as ever!

You really evoked those awful angsty feelings you get in a new relationship when you don't know quite where you stand.

Hmmn a twist in the plot.  Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Hi Scilla!!  Great stuff as always!!  Loved the counter sex and the bed cuddling.  Super cute when he fell asleep watching the "telly".  BTW, I love when he talks durtty too.  Please don't hurt Marisa too much - she's been thru so much already!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!!  From a fellow PattinH00r.

Reviewer: buff802y (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Good chappy:)

Reviewer: novelidea (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Between him saying "At the Moment" and entering her into his phone as Mrs. Robinson, I think Marisa will have her hear broken. It seems as if this is a cougar experience for him, but that's it.

I do like the story, just don't see how it's going to be good for Marisa.

Reviewer: Silton (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

OK - I just read this whole story in 1 day.  Needless to say, nothing else got done.  You can thand RaoR for the rec - saw you posting in the comment section too.  Keep up the good work - I enjoyed the weekend.  I hope you are not planning on hurting Robbie because I might have to bust out the tissues.  Just the thought of anything happening to that perfect man makes me weepy.

 

Reviewer: Tigerlily74 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

"I only have eyes for you at the moment" gee Rob, way to inspire confidence. At the Moment? Is she just a fling? From some of the things he said it sure sounded like it.I think she might be setting herself up for disappointment. CAn't wait to see what surprises you have in store for us. Hurry up with the next chapter! I'm on the edge of my recliner.

Reviewer: sam0204 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Your titles crack me up!  So sad their weekend is over, but I look forward to reading what else you have up your sleeve!

Reviewer: corporsl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

I'm loving your story and hanging on by a thread here! Don't make us wait too long  between posts, please - it's agonizing!

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast

You are taking us on such an amazing journey!!  Love it! The armpit killed me, I would sooo do that too!  :-)



Author's Response:

Yay Shell, sooo glad you're enjoying everything. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shellgogo (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

Holy cow, that was hot Scilla.  I loved the stats too, so true!!!  But, when he said it was now his personal mission in life-oh my dear God!! 

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