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Reviewer: silvervolvogirl (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Just wanted to let you know that I LOVE your story! The story itself is amazing but it's also a refreshing change to read a story with correct grammar and spelling! Once again, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story! Hope you're feeling better.
Author's Response: You make me so happy, thank you! Please keep reviewing.
Reviewer: buffalocruz (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
I knew it! Him losing his phone explains his lack of communication. It all sounds great. The relationship is moving along....
BTW: Garlic is a natural form of antibiotics. Make some fresh garlic bread with a little salt & olive oil, lightly bake it in the oven and eat it with lots of water. I'm a mother of two and I swear by it!
Author's Response: Rob's a good guy, so his excuse had to be along those line. Thanks for the consistent reviews and for the home remedy!
Reviewer: southernlady (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Yea! I wasn't sure how you were going to explain his silence so that she could forgive him. Glad he drove to see her as soon as he could. At this point I think she should throw caution to the wind and just let herself feel. I'm looking forward to him saying he loves her - he should say it first.
Author's Response: Great poings Southernlady. I reaally appreciate you taking the time to review. Please keep it up!
Reviewer: AmyH (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation
Whoo, this is great already!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Please keep reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: singergurl (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Im dying here!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Sorry you haven't been well,I hope you're well on the road to recovery.Please keep 'em "coming"!.I live for each new chapter.Take care,darlin'!!!
Singergurl
Author's Response: Hi Singlegurl, working on the next chappy. Can't wait to read your review. Thanks for the well wishes, the antibiotics are working their magic.
Reviewer: robskitten (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
I really hope there will be some really hot, steamy sex at Rob's house, maybe a little declaration of love, even, to keep the romance going. However I am realistic enough to know that there must be conflict and angst for a story to draw the reader in. I really hope that the age difference doesn't become too much of an issue because of the influence of friends, coworkers, or family. You're doing good; keep on writing!
Author's Response: Hi Robskitten, very well said. It's true that Rob and Marisa will need to figure out how to navigate the age difference issue. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherels (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man
Excellent touch with the song lyrics! I'm very into connections like that. And the pool scene...GAH! I'm going blind sitting at my desk and I'm not getting up from this chair. And it's all your fault. :)
Reviewer: heatherels (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast
Excellent shower scene! Or should I say "Egggcellent" ? I don't want their weekend to end. Ever.
Reviewer: heatherels (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally
Beep beep beep....______________...flatlines.
Um...thank you. Exhaling now. I have no words.
Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
This story freakin' rocks my world, Scilla! Bravo! Now start writing the next one!!!
(wonders what the person with Rob's phone will do with the info on it???)
Author's Response: Thanks so much babe. You rock my world for reviewing so consistently.
Reviewer: RobCatCdn (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Great chapter Scilla! I felt so relieved that it came down to something so simple and entirely believable ... we've heard Rob say he forgets stuff all the time. It put a big smile on my face. Always so well written and I love your lemons.
Nearing the end of the chapter I kept thinking ... Rob don't forget to tell Marisa where you live but then new cell. was mentioned and HELLO ... marker! Well that was original. :-)
Can't wait to see what happens at Rob's house! <3
Reviewer: heatherels (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 12--The Grand Gesture
Oh dear LORD Scilla, you're driving me nuts! I've read other fanfics before and they were raunchy and great. You have this way of really making it seem REAL. I can't even look at him the same way because of your words! I know...I know...it's fiction! You don't know him. Lord knows neither do I and I'm am married woman...but FUCK. He is so freakin' hot. Is it possible you're words have made him HOTTER? Yes...it very much is.
Wonderful!
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
I almost always read stories that are complete first and I actually thought this one was before I started it - now I have to be tortured waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter. This story is nowhere near finished. It's going to be along one. So, stick with me and enjoy the ride. Thanks again!
Reviewer: heatherels (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?
UM...making out standing up against the wall...I'm loving this scene! GAH! How am I supposed to get ANY work done? And even though it's driving me mad, I like the cat and mouse thing. I like the anticipation. And you've made his "character" so very sweet and manly at the same time. Just like he seems in real life. I wonder if he reads these....
Great Job! Next....
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 21--Stage 5 Acceptance
Ugh
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 20--Stage 3 Anger, Stage 4 Depression
Every woman should have a hair stylist like Alfonso - you did a great job with his character. :)
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 19--Stage 1 Denial, Stage 2 Bargaining
I hope he has a good excuse!
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale
I'm exhausted just from READING about their weekend! So how many times did they do it???
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog
My New Years Resolution this year was to review every chapter I read! So Happy Belated New Year!
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man
Wow - so long fingers are the secret, eh? I'll have to start hanging out in piano bars! LOL!
Reviewer: heatherels (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia
Gah! I feel like I'm there! I can smell the breeze...taste the food and wine. And Rob's eyes...again, GAH! You are so descriptive. I like the pace! And I keep comparing myself to bold and brave Marisa. Whatever will she do with the young stallion that is Robert? I can't wait to find out...
Author's Response: Hi Heather, so glad you find this story! Please, please keep reviewing. Thanks!
Reviewer: addicted2twylyte (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast
I just LOVE that he's on a mission to make her come! Very juicy writing, my dear. Good work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Please keep reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: IGD (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Phew! stopped breathing there. Awesome chapter, cant wait til she gets to his house. Although she will probably have to clean it before they can do the dirty LOL
Great stuff Scilla
lots of love, Sue/IGD
Author's Response: Oh, you know it's going to be a big 'ole mess, especially since he's been out of town for so long. Thanks so much for your consisent reviews. Muaaaa.
Reviewer: johns1 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Hey Scilla...boy he had every excuse in the world, and they all sounded plausible. I'm assuming he couldn't try whitepages.com because she didn't have a land line! *wink* I'm not liking that they had sex and he was the only one to get anything out of it....time restraints be damned. (How did you let that happen?) Seriously, it was good, and thanks for cutting back on so many "Marisa's"!
Author's Response: LOL. He did try the whitepages, but she's unlisted, remember. She may not have had an orgasm but the emotional reconnection was enough for now. But don't you worry, Rob will more than make it up to her. As for the Robs and Marisas, I went back and edited some of my previous chapters as well. The dialogue is much more streamlined now. Thanks for the feedback. Please keep reviewing.
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...
Hey Scilla, tis me, FluffyLiz. Just wanted to read this chapter again, because I so enjoyed it the first time. You know how much I love your story, probably because this is the "realist" Rob I have found in FF. Can't wait for Ch.23, which is going to be brilliant - all that Rob lovin' at his place ... yumm!
Author's Response: Hey Liz baby, thanks for the review! Yeah, I try to keep Rob as close to what he has shown us, although sometimes I do make him say things "real Rob" probably wouldn't say, just to keep it interesting. There will definitely be some good Rob lovin' at his place. He has a lot of making up to do. Thanks for everything!
Author's Response: Hey Liz baby, thanks for the review! Yeah, I try to keep Rob as close to what he has shown us, although sometimes I do make him say things "real Rob" probably wouldn't say, just to keep it interesting. There will definitely be some good Rob lovin' at his place. He has a lot of making up to do. Thanks for everything!
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