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Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:13 AM · On: You Were Meant For Me

Sigh....so wonderful.....again. How will they handle their week apart? Do we get to know what Jasper whispered into Edward's neck? I think I can guess.:) Such a drag that Edward has to leave just as they are finally making progress, but perhaps Jasper may have not been so eager without a deadline. He could have talked himself out of spending the whole weekend. Their little jealous moments are sweet and telling. They are just adorable. I have not forgotten that there is something fishy going on with Emily though. James..growl. Another fabulous chapter, thankyou. :)

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:49 PM · On: You Were Meant For Me

Great chapter! I feel for both of them. Edward, for having to wait to tell Jasper how he really feels about him. And Jasper for being scared to embrace what is right in front of him. I hope he can soon. Cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:43 PM · On: You Were Meant For Me

excellent chapter.:) saying I love will be easier the more you say it Edward:)

Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:12 PM · On: You Were Meant For Me

Okay, I think I need a cold shower. Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: livedays (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:06 PM · On: You Were Meant For Me

u write beautifully

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:37 PM · On: To Make You Feel My Love

Yes!  At least Jasper threw Edward a bone and told him about Paul.  They both should compare notes about their exes.  Since they won't, I'm glad they are having a good time getting to know what they like and how they like it sex-wise.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 05:35 PM · On: I'm No Angel

These two have issues and they haven't felt comfortable enough with each other to divulge their relevant back stories with one another.  This is why I dread the updates.  I feel like the shit is going to hit the fan in a dramatic way eventually.  However, they are so cute together.  Hanging out with Bella baby certainly has given Edward a chance to "try it on" for effect.  I am sure he aches for that in his life.

Reviewer: mrscrab3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 03:33 PM · On: We Belong

This story is my own personal brand of heroin. I'm reading it again after nearly reading the entire thing twice last week.

Edward dying to tell Jasper he loves him is breaking my heart. The walls are slowly crumbling though. I nearly wanted to murder Jasper in the previous chapter though, glad he's coming around. Will he go to Memphis with Edward?? Ooooh, the anticipation.

Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:31 PM · On: We Belong

Well I just finished reading this story so far, and I ust say that I absolutely love it. I look forward to reading the next update. I love the lemons, and how both of them have messed up lives, unwilling to share with each other, yet they're still somehow making it work.

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 04:01 PM · On: We Belong

excellent chapter. hopefully soon Edward will feel comfortable to tell jasper how he feels.

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 02:46 PM · On: When You Say Nothing at All

another great chapter. I like the way you have them really dealing or not dealing with things so real world.Not the happy happy joy joy that they meet and fall inl ove and their baggage just disappears. and Lemony goodness of course

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:44 AM · On: To Make You Feel My Love

great chapter.showing some trust

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 06:04 AM · On: I'm No Angel

nice chapter. very real and heart arming that they can share something like that :)

Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:21 AM · On: We Belong

Oh, I LOVE these boys. They are so close, so warm, so hot and so meant for one another!!! I had to get up and make myself some Earl Grey this morning because I can't stop thinking about them! Last evening, I had to wakey wakey my hubby for some shmexin after reading this! Wowee...My favorite story! This very long chapter was a wonderful description of a very luscious weekend. The ceramics class was just....whew!!!

Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:54 AM · On: We Belong

These guys are awesome together! Great that J finally seems to trust himself to let E in a little, and what an amazing weekend they've had... *fanning myself*
Great chapter!

Reviewer: Captain Jezebel (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:39 PM · On: We Belong

I loved this chapter very very much. It seems dear Jasper possibly felt something shift, when he was missing Edward all week. Then fate put Edward with his reach at the end of last chapter, in the form of Kate forcing him out of the house. Perhaps Jasper took this as a sign of some sort, because he was slowly opening up in this chapter.

He stayed the night, hedidn't rush out the door in the morning, he made love to Edward, even if he doesn't know that's what he did. He was affectionate, calm, sweet, loving, in no rush to run away. Edward gave him the opening to just leave and go be with Lee Lee, but Jasper asked him along, and threatened him with a Emily's wrath if he didn't accept.

He seemed very comfortable all weekend, playfully teasing. But I feel a major step was in what he was hinting about James. He seemed to want to voice his concerns to Lee, but make a point to Edward. Like he was using code to give him clues as to what happened with Paul. He seemed like he wanted to say something without saying it.

I loved the pottery class, the sexy teasing, and the time with Lee, she is such a sweetie, and I fear for her with the sinister James looming. It was so adorable for Edward to offer his time to teach her more about photography. I think Jasper loved seeing how he was with his sister, offering, and meaning it, hugging her and meaning it, caring about her, and meaning it.

One worry ...Edward put his phone number in Lee's phone...James is not going to know that Edward is her gay brother's boyfriend. Is he going to go apeshit on her? I am so scared of something so innocent causing Lee, trouble, will she be too scared to tell Jasper? Will she call Edward instead? Will Edward blame himself? Will Jasper? Am I just reading into small, insignificant things?...probably.

The finish to the weekend was so laid back and loving, the touches, the fucking (yummy), the meals, sitting on the couch chillin together. I loved it all, and the whole time Jasper wasn't trying to rush out the door. I loved Edward's sweet mental 'I love yous', I know he is so scared to let them out, and I felt his fear, but also his love. *sigh*

You've done it again ladies...you've coaxed a long winded review out of my dumb ass. Can't wait to see if Jasper feels comfortable going with Edward to Memphis...we shall see.

Love you dolls, and love these boys...oh and congrats on the Slash Award *jumps up and down and squees*

xoxo, Jezzy

Reviewer: coryoplayer (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:05 AM · On: We Belong

W-M
Wow that chapter was so long and took me so long to read it that Twilight logged me off before I could post a comment.
Loved the chapter!!!!! But, you've got two stubborn guys there who don't want to confess their real feelings for each other!!! Just fess up guys!!!!
Absolutely loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!!!!!
Cory

Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:41 PM · On: We Belong

It's a beautiful tentative dance. This is the most romantic story. Gorgeous. I live for your updates. (well not really but I love them a lot) :)

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:18 PM · On: We Belong

let us hope this was not an isolated incident, but a turning point.

Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:42 PM · On: We Belong

Best chapter yet - Jasper's trying, Edward's being patient. It was blissful.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:20 PM · On: When You Say Nothing at All

poor jazz :(

Reviewer: cary871 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:55 PM · On: We Belong

I really love this story so much and I am so excited about this chapter cause Jasper is finally starting to open up and be freer with sweet little Edward. Smiles They will be moving in together soon! I can feel it smiles. 

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Take a Chance on Me

excellenet chapter.I am glad they were comfortable enough to let go:)

Reviewer: dorothys ruby slippers (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 06:15 AM · On: When You Say Nothing at All

GAH!!!  I adore these two.  This is slash at its finest!  Love it!  Can't wait for your next update, and to see where you take these two!

xoxo,

drs

Reviewer: Captain Jezebel (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:08 AM · On: When You Say Nothing at All

Ladies you had my heart breaking, and my eyes tearing for the majority of this chapter. I felt Jasper's despair, but more than that, I felt his past pain, and the pain he was currently causing Edward, even if it wasn't EPOV.

I felt it in the small words Edward used during their brief phone conversations, and the akward, Seth/Embry moment. The confusion on Edward's face. The way he reacted in bed after Jasper told him he missed him. *sigh* I am so scared for these two.

I am also quite scared for Lee Lee, and the James situation. I fear for James' life when Jasper finds out what a dick he is...and I know he is a dick, I can see it.

Oh ladies I adore you...you know this.

xoxo, Jezzy

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