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Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

so i am reviewing cause i want you to write more chapters but i am horrible with constructive criticism but ill try my best so here it goes....

You story is great so far but i think it need a little more drama you should end the chapters with really big cliff hangers.... and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUH-LEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER

Reviewer: --Jakes-Girl-- (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Please keep going! I love twilight/Harry potter! And this particular story is amazing! Creative And not too "out there-crazy"!!!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow that was too good can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: vintagelove (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Are you ever continuing this?

Author's Response:
I am, i have just gotten really caught up with things. I actually have a few RP sites now so trying to keep up with those and writting has taken over me! i am also a nanny in real life so sometimes the kids i takecare of take over my time as well, im sorry but i am working on it!!! i promise!

angelica

Reviewer: Indie-kid (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 3

i love this fan fic!!! but it would have been cooler if Kassandra's name was Bella any ways keep up the good work and write the next chapter soon!!!!

Reviewer: bedward4ever (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

Thats the tightest cliff hanger ever PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS I LOOOOOOOOOVE THIS FAN FIC thanks u u write awsome :P

Reviewer: vintagelove (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yay! I'm super glad i reviewed then.

Part of why i love this so much is that its one of a kind so I don't keep getting it mixed up with other stories (like all the Jabob/Ness ones lol)

Well, that and its really good =)

Reviewer: RarelyPureNeverSimple (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

hey this is great!!
really good twist with the whole forgetting stuff.
possibly have sirius try to jog her memory,
have rosalie forget who emmett is, alice forgets who jasper is, esme forgets who carlilse is, edward forgets who kassandra is.
lol
plaese keep writing!!!!
i love you story!
P.S don't take the rating personally, i never give ANYONE a 10

Reviewer: RarelyPureNeverSimple (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 2

this is pretty cool!!
i like it so far

Reviewer: RarelyPureNeverSimple (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

great start!
really well written, soz but thats all i've got for now.

Reviewer: vintagelove (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooh my heavens. I love this. Update?

Author's Response:
working on it....i got kinda disappointed bc i thought that no one liked it, but since YOU do, im gonna finish up thenext chapter! thanks!!
angelica

Reviewer: Twilight_Luver666 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

I was wondering why you wanted her to forget Sirius. I mean why him? by the way, LOVE THESE!!!

Author's Response:
Thank you for loving them! i was considering not continuing but you make me want to keep going!
uhm, hm...i wanted Sirius to feel some pain. he still loves her deeply and the fact that she forgot not only the bad things but alos the GOOD things is killing him. I think im going to have him come back though and maybe have her start remembering things...dunno yet. im working on the tranformation chapters. but he DEFF will have a decent role in this story.
i cannot thank you enough for your review! LOVES! angelica

Reviewer: Frivi (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2008 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think you have definite potential-your sentences were well formed, and everything was orderly. It was quite interesting, in fact.
The only extremely major issue I have with it is Kassandra. Not that it's any of your fault, but I just have major problems seeing Edward with anyone other than Bella. While it is a little, erm...odd for me to imagine the Cullens at Hogwarts-I've never read those books, so I guess I should probably give them a try-, I think I could manage it if Edward would be with Bella. But, then again, maybe I'm just being too picky. o.o

Author's Response:
thank you so much for your review. i was very hesitant about writting this fic and VERY hesitant about putting the Cullens at Hogwarts. I write ALOT of HP fan ficiton, mostly in the Marayders era, and I wanted to try it.
the reason why i didnt use Bella was bc i could never see her at Hogwarts. I love her to death but i think shes a clumbsy Muggle, lol. and i wanted to see how it would pan out with Edward with a vampire... I appreciat your review so much. I hope that you keep reading and reviewing! thank you once again...
angelica

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