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Reviews For A Better Christmas
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

Such a great story - I absolutely loved it!

Reviewer: Renesmeecarliecullen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 4

this is a cute little Christmas story

Reviewer: rin1591 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 2

i love it so far... i am a little disappointed b/c Jacob isn't around... I imagine he would go 2 days without being around.

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Santa

very sweet, so far.

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 4

SOOOOOO sweet!!! Thanks! Please keep on updating!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

How sweet! Thanks for the Bible story!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Santa

Good job! I hope you will continue to update!

Reviewer: Charmed_Im_sure (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

awww so cute. I love this story its soo cute





Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loved it you did such a great job

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was so sweet! I absolutely loved it!

Reviewer: OXfacficaddictXO (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

So cute! love it :) If I had to say a little criticism I'd say try not to have too much "and then I looked up at my wonderful family, I'm so happy" etc. It has its place for sure, but if it's used too much it's a little annoying. nice job :)

Reviewer: Samanthamariecullen (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

I quite enjoyed your Cullen Christmas story. I am very impressed with your characterization of Renesmee; she's just perfectly drawn and as cute as she is in the books. Plus, I love that Edward and Bella's relationship is so easy in your story, as it should be after all the angst. They deserve their happily ever after, and you've created this little piece of it beautifully.

Reviewer: Mizra (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

Aw, how adorable! I love the piano idea of Renesmee learning from Edward. It makes sense he would want to teach her that.

A couple of things, though, that I've been pondering: wouldn't people in Forks talk? See unusual cars in Charlie's driveway? Seeing a brunette little girl at his house sometimes? Inquire about Edward and Bella and how the 'newlyweds' are doing? Wouldn't it raise some suspicions?

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

This whole story has made me smile!  Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

one of the best christmas stories i have read to date, totally enjoyed every word

Reviewer: manuella (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

Thank you for this Xmas story....


Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 4

Aww that was beautiful and perfect and just what i needed around this time of the year. So cute.

I'd love to read about Edward teaching Reneesme how to ride a bike. I can just imagine his inner glee at teaching his daughter how to ride a bike. Just a thought... :)



Reviewer: musicluvr (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Santa

I love this story! Please update before Christmas! I can't wait to read about Christmas morning with the Cullens & Charlie & Sue!

Reviewer: bellafan1234554321 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

thats so sweat!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

eeeep the thought of santa playing santa is possibly the world's most adorable thing ever. loved this.

Reviewer: Mizra (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

Aw, how sweet! I just finished reading/teaching that story to my class on last Sunday. Kinda sweet and endearing in a way, really. Great work!

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love cheap Christmas present ideas!  :-)  So, here's yours:  I love how adorable this story is.  I really enjoyed the warmth of their celebration.  Nice to see the sweet family moments.  Two thumbs up!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 3

I printed this off to take to the bookstore to read with a girlfriend. I'll rate it a 10 because the other chapters were so sweet and well written. I'll be back wtih a comment tonight!


Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm so glad you continued this story!! Yeah! Lovely to see the Cullens at the holiday time. :)


Reviewer: shamrockon (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

aww yay!! that's sooooo cuteee :D i love this, update soon :)

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