Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 8
great story!!
i really enjoyed it and woud love to hear more!!
Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 8
oooh shes going to be changed??i love ur story!!!!
Reviewer: taramisu (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
Absolutely fantastic. Painful, but satisfying.
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
Beautiful story I liked Bella's reaction to his return she truly had grwn and changed and I liked the changes a balance of her not withholding her true reaction to his return but the also truth of the matter that there was damage that wont be quickly fixed just because he says he learned his lesson and lied. It felt true the highest compliment I offer as well as beautifully told.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 8
This was SO incredibly beautiful. I loved this story so very much. Your characters are so compelling and so real. The dialogue was heartfelt and sincere. I do hope you continue to write Edward and Bella stories. You get them so well!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
Okay, more
I hope J is totally out of the picture
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 8
This was a really incredible story! I'm so glad it all (mostly) worked out for them! Great job!
~Jazz~
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 8
Aww very nicely done. But I'm not ready for this to be over yet :( I loved this! Well done, I hope you write more.
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 8
Aww great chapter. Loved it. :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
Nicely done. Didn't expect it to only be 8 chapters but in a way I'm glad it was as some stories are dragged out too much ;)
Achilles
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: shelbymay (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
I love it!!!!
Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
lovely.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
OOOhhh good chapter! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: dazzling_facade (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
I liked how you put lines from both the book and the movie in this chapter, it made it even clearer to see in my head :) UPDATE SOON!!!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh wow, go Bella! I always thought she took him back too easily. Plus people won't think she's pathetic, either. Even though it's nice when they're together, I like this! Making him squirm a little! Can't wait for more!
~Jazz~
Reviewer: Niniel (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 7
I've been looking for quite a while for a story that fit my view of how it might have happened had Edward returned to Forks on his own as he said he would have soon had Bella not jumped off the cliff and set a whole other set of events off.
I believe I've found it in this story.
I love the descriptions and you've had me wincing several times (and for me this is a good thing. Very good in fact)
The moments are so tense and voulnerable and a lot is in the air, but not spelled out. I like that. You have a wonderful balance in not underestimating your readers, nor making it all too floaty.
I will be following this.
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Please continue! I appreciate this realistic turn of events.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 7
This was tender and hearttfelt. It was wonderful!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
This was amazing. I feel so captivated. There is such an intensity between them. It is magical!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
Brilliant chapter. I love this story!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
Poor Edward. I hope he pounces her on his first opportunity.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow. I love this intensity!
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
| 
