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Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Reality

LOL, that was priceless. Dickward really needs to grow up, my 15 year old know better than that. Good chapter, love the ending though. :)

Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Reality

I love this kind of bella don't take no shit update soon

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Reality

haha i love this so far

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Reality

I always hated the way Edward treated Carlisle and Esme here. I want to smack him upside the head and say, "Dude, what the fuck is wrong with you! You don't talk to your parents like that!" But it serves a purpose and I know that things get better.

The interaction between Bella and Edward is hilarious! I would totally do that to a customer if I was allowed to.

Waiting for your next update sweets!

Author's Response:
Yay, first review for the chapter is my review h00r <3

Reviewer: hermeyb (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Homecoming

so far, so good. I like a good playboy edward story.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Homecoming

Great chapter. I'm glad we got to meet Rose and Emmett and their family. Brianna is so cute. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Homecoming

It's sounds interesting so far the fallen son summoned back . Let the fun begin.

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Homecoming

Just found this fic, and i'm really liking it.

Can't wait to read how B/E meet.

Please update when u get a chance.

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Homecoming

This can only get better from here. And I'm so excited to see where you're going to go with this! WOO-HOO!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Homecoming

I love how Edward is into ice hockey since he's been living in Chicago. I'm from Chicago and all I have to say is go Blackhawks!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Homecoming

No worries about the crack remark...I don't do it either but I imagine it's just as addicting like fanfic is for me. I love this already and can't wait to see what awaits Edward in Forks...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Prologue

Ohh I love how you put it in the form of a newspaper article...it was very enlightening. James and Edward are cousins?!? Whoa this could get very interesting...

Just found this story so it is a treat...

Reviewer: BellasMommy (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Homecoming

oooh i enojy!

this is going to be good!

update soon please!

Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Prologue

i like the different take on the family dynamic so far...

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Homecoming

Interesting setup. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: BellasMommy (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Prologue

i like it. it was a different beginning and i really liked that!

i cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Homecoming

Edward with the kids amuse me. I'm sure Edward's confrontation with Carlisle will even be better.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Homecoming

i am one that put it in my fav's after the pro

love the story and sense of humor

Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Homecoming

I'm liking a lot. I'm watching and waiting for more...

Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Homecoming

I can't wait to read what Carlisle has to tell Edward.

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Homecoming

can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sportress (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Homecoming

Your story has totally captured my interest. And i am very pleased that you have included the ferry ride that would take you to the penninsula to forks. No one else seems to add that, and if you drive all the way around it is a real real long trip. A friend of mine, who works for the govt and deals in maps and land mass, actually asked me...can you see the ocean from your house in seattle? I had to explain to him NO, i cant see the ocean because it is 3 hours away from me. and he said...i thought seattle was on the ocean. I sent him a map of the US. LOL most people think Forks is just a town in the state, they dont realize that the sound separates us. Thank you for bringing it up.

Author's Response:
Truthfully, I love the ferry ride and the drive from Seattle to Forks. I have visited Seattle/Port Angeles twice over the past couple years so I'm trying to use as much detail that I can remember and I'm glad it's appreciated. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Homecoming

Well if this story keeps getting better ill gladly do crack just to keep the updates coming (jk)

Author's Response:
Hahaha...no crack is needed I assure you.. updates will come fairly quickly right now. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Homecoming

Oh how I love Emmett! Seriously, he's some crazy ass shit! Hehe... now I'm going to be a review h00r for you sweetums...

I can't wait for your next chapter to be up!

Author's Response:
Yay! We're each others h00rs...yeah that came out wrong lol. Thank you sweets...and you know I do love Emmett <3

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Prologue

i'd love to see where this is going.

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