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Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
I can pretty much guess whats running through Edwards head
" Fuck my life"
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
I love Bellas sarcasm she put Edward in his right place.
Reviewer: twilightisluv (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
just adore this story looking for more so keep it coming
Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
haha classic. Bella's surer got some guts. Just found this one and decided to give it a go. Looking forward to more, and I gotta say I love Edward in this, such a bastard.
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
Oh, how I love it when she fucks with him!!
Now, is it Jessica the receptionist that you're talking about here? Cause I always get a bit confused when I read that bit.
Anyways, you know I love it, and am awaiting the next update!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
LOL...oh how I love how Bella's devious little mind works. I bet Edward has never had a woman throwdown with him like that. Silence is golden is it not? It's ok Edward needed to be brought down a peg or two regardless of what a crappy day he's had. I can't wait to see what happens next...Please update SOON
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Reality
That's funny. "Ring the bell for service."
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
Way too good. I love her inner child!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Annoyance & Amusement
love this story
Reviewer: twilightisluv (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Reality
LMAORORTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it~
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Reality
Loved it.
Their encounter was excellent.
Can't wait to read B's p.o.v
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Reality
I like your writing style and the end of this chapter is just to rich. "Ring the bell for service" can't wait to read Bella's POV
Reviewer: fanofcullens (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Reality
looking forward to next chapter
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Reality
LOL...Carlisle is right...Edward is acting like a spoiled brat. That man needs to suck it up and grow up. Oh how I would love nothing better than to see some sense pounded into Edward. *Snicker* Fiesty Bella is exactly what someone like Edward needs...
Reviewer: lilac17 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Reality
I really liked this story and the way you wrote Edward's POV is just amazing!
Reviewer: LoveLocked (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Reality
I'm totally loving this story!!!!! Its really funny. Please update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Reality
Wow, didn't know Carlisle had it in him to yell and issue ultimatims. Way to go Carlisle. Jerkward deserves a wake up call. Haha, this Bella seems like she might be very spicy and show Jerkward that the world does not revolve around him. Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Reality
Great chapter. As much as I love Edward, I'm glad he's being taught a lesson. I like your Bella so far. Hope she tortures Edward a little too. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Reality
Fantastic chapter. Seriously, I was glued to my computer screen, never blinking.
The drama between Edward and his parents was very powerful and intriguing. I thought it heart-breakingly harsh when Edward said 'Fuck you both' to his parents. That moment was very indicative of the depth of Edward's immaturity & cruelty.
But it was the very cute way that he first met Bella that left me all smiles at the end. I can't wait to see where this goes from here.
Please post more asap. I love it already.
Godspeed.
Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Reality
can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Reality
this is a really good story i love it already
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Reality
Edward is such an ass in this..HAHA hopefully Bella can set his ass straight...looking forward to the next post.
Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Reality
update soon please!!! love it so far!
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Reality
hahahaha! I love your bella already :) ready for more
Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Reality
'“Son.”
“Father.”
The Cullens, men of many words.'
I loved that part!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
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