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Reviewer: carebear31374 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

WOW GREAT FIRST CHAPTER

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

Trading princesses for land or peace, has gone on about as long as people have been around. Politics, I guess. It kind of looks as if Jacob and Renesmee had an instant connection, that should be interesting.

Reviewer: Twilighter001 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

update soooon!!!

Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

Humm... I must say you have intrigued me so far... No huge glaring plot holes have cropped up either. Hooray! I'll have to come back for more :)

Thanks for sharing! This has a ton of potential...

Author's Response:
Haha, it would be pretty facepalm-worthy if there were huge plot holes in the first chapter, now wouldn't it? lol.

Intriguing potential is the name of the game at this point. We'll build up to the plot later. Enjoy ;)

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

Wow! Interesting concept and beginning. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Are we really 2,000 years in the future or is this some sort of fantasy timeline from the past since this seems to be taking place in the Middle Ages?

Author's Response:
Holy heeby jeebies, I'm not even sure where to start! I guess first, thank you for all the reviews! I think I got more and more excited with each one, haha :D

As for your question - no, it's not in the future, or in the past really. It's just pure fantasy, and the dates are only there to show the passage of time.

Reviewer: buffyk0604 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

This chapter alone has me hooked! Please update again soon! Love it!

Author's Response:
Thanks! Sorry it took me so long to reply, couple chapters down the road now I guess, haha... ._.; Anyway, I wanted to thank you for the nice review, & I hope you've enjoyed the rest of the story since! :)

Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

Ok, so I normally stay away from JacobxNessie fics, but your summary caught my eye. And... I'm not gonna lie, I'm totally, totally hooked. I love the plot and your writing style! So sad there are only 2 more chapters for me to read before I have to wait for more! :)

Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! You know, it's actually comments like this, of people saying they decided to take a chance on a different pairing or different sort of story, that are my absolute favorites. Thanks for giving it a chance, reading, and especially reviewing! <3

Reviewer: sim777 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

Oh my gosh - I really am intrigued by this amazing story!!!! It's just so magical and the creativity that you have put in this story is so excellent. It is something really different from any other fanfics I have read and Im impressed!!! I only started to read it today and Im so happy I found it! I'm a big Nessie/Jacob fan - so YAY!!!

Author's Response:
Haha, wow, thanks! Glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: Foxtrot (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

This is interesting. I hope you update soon.

Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it ;) ...There is quite a bit more now, of course, just because I am so fail at responding to reviews :headdesk: Sorry!

Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: The Big Bad Wolf

i have never read a story of nessie and jacob. but this one cought my eyes. im looking foward seeing how this turns out.

Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sorry this reply is so late... I realized I had missed some reviews today, so I'm trying to rectify the problem and respond to everyone. I'm so glad you decided to take a leap and give my little story a chance, especially since it's not your usual pairing. And thanks especially for reviewing! I really appreciate it :)

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