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Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 20

I'm still with you.  Love you.

 

Em



Author's Response:

Thanks! Love you too, Emily *hugs*

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 20

This story is all about the family relationships. I love it. It is so different from any other story.

This chapter shows all the love within this family and rings true. From what we have seen of Rob's family, it fits.

I will be sad to see it end, but I will be there all the way!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That review just made me blush... hehe. I'm glad you think the relationships are realistic, that's what I'm aiming for ;]

Thanks so much for reviewing!!! They mean so much to me.

Reviewer: Michrob (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 20

I love this story.  So glad you are back.  :-)



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks! Glad you like it.

Reviewer: gte0121 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 20

I like your story.  It would be nice if you updated more frequently. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. My beta has been dealing with a few personal things, so she is not able to valdiate so quickly right now. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 20

I would like more chaos, although fluff is nice I rather enjoyed when he started forgetting things (like his physiotherapy).



Author's Response:

As much as I enjoy the lemons... this story is much more angsty and dramatic. But I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for reviewing =]

Reviewer: glissette05 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 20

yey...lol XD



Author's Response:

haha. thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 19

Sorry about the delay on reviewing this chapter.  It was great by the way.  I'm so happy the Rob is healing and they're moving him to another hospital.  Those damn paps and the questions.  Grrrrrr.....   Rob had a normal reaction that anyone would have after being in a car wreck.  Yeah I was like that to after I had my car wreck and that was fourteen years ago.  I still make sure everyone has their seatbelt on before I even move the car.  I thought it was cute when Rob said he was going to miss Nurse Kate.  Awwww someone had a crush.  I really don't think Lizzy is going to take to that conversation to well.  I think she's going to be a little upset.  Great job on this chapter and I love it as always.

Congrats on your nomination on RPF too and thanks for letting me know I had some too and I didn't even know.  I'll be voting for you my dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love you!!

Penny



Author's Response:

Those damn paps... lol. Rob definitely had a school boy crush going on there.. haha! Thanks so much for everything, Penny! Love you!

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 19

Thanks for updating! I like both your stories. Very good and intriguing!

Update soon!

Hugs,

Louise



Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter should be up sometime this week. =]

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 19

This was a nice change. It feels like Rob is making more progress. I love how the family is so close.

Remember Me was great! I thought they did a wonderful job with the movie.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the change. It was a bit refreshing to write. And wasn't Remember Me amazing!? I fell in love with it. haha.

Reviewer: akaalice (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 19

I love this story. I loved the way you wrote Rob's panic attacks. I am so glad Rob is slowly improving. He needs to have some visitors again though...Please keep it coming...maybe a longer chapter next time, please. Update soon and don't forget Fresh Breath. I love that one too...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review! Honestly, it's getting harder to come up with chapters for this story because I know it's coming to an end and I am not really sure how I want to bring everything I have planned together. Rob will be getting another visit pretty soon. =]   And I am so happy to hear you enjoy Fresh Breath! That story doesn't really ever see the light, and it's good to hear some feedback on it. I'm hoping that once I post it up on this site- after this story is finished- I'll have more motivation to keep it going.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 18

Poor Rob. I just wanna cuddle him and make this all better for him. I really do. But despite that fact that my heart aches for him, I'm still very much enjoying this story. It's so unique, and that's one of the many things I love about it. Keep up the great work, girly.

Mwah!



Author's Response:

I give you permission to cuddle Rob, haha. I'm glad you enjoy, and that you think it's unique. That's what I waa going for and to get your aproval means so much to me. Thank you for all the wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 18

Phew! Well, I finally caught up. I like this story so far.

Poor Rob. He's so pitiful. Keep updating, it's getting interesting.

Hugs,

Louise



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're caught up and liking it!! Things are getting a little shaken up for Rob, but the worst is pretty much over. Thanks for reviewing!! Muah!

Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 18

poor rob... :( i want him to walk around again and charm the ladies. :) not hurting himself :(



Author's Response:

Haha. Yes, I think we all do. But I'm pretty sure he could charm the ladies from anywhere. lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Michrob (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 18

I really love this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks so much for reviewng!

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 18

Love this story.  Panic attacks very scary and nothing to laugh at. Looking forward to a new chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I used to suffer panic attacks, and you're right, they are nothing to laugh at. They're terrible. But I'm glad you still like the story!!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 18

Poor little Rob!

I like the way you change out the POV. Is he getting better?



Author's Response:

Poor Rob, indeed. But don't worry too much about him ;]

And I'm glad you like the POV switch. Most people find it confusing and don't usually like stories that change POV.

Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 18

Ohhh... This hit so close to home.  I have pabic attacks too.  I had terrible ones in the hospital after my stroke.  I always throw up when I have a panic attack and once I start I can't stop.  It was horrible not being able to get up and move around while having a oanic attack in the hospital.  I was so worried after the stroke that I would not be me anymore.  I still sometimes feel like a part of me died (that was 4 years ago).  The physical trauma is actually easier to get over than the psychoogical trauma.  Thank you for the brilliant and sensitive writing in this story.  It touches me deeply, it truly does.

 

Love,

Emily



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I'm sorry this story has to bring you back to such a sad and frightening time. But, I am glad you are here to lend your help. Thans you!!! And I hope your family is doing well. HUGS!!

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 18

Alright I can sleep LOL!!!!!  The beginning was funny to me because of all the things coming out of his mouth.  He was so cute.  For everything else, I was extremely sad for Rob.  I do hope that he starts to get better soon.  I understand fully about the panic attacks.  I suffer from them too.  Not the greatest thing.  I don't have them very often, but when they do come on it is very hard to control them.  My heart goes out to him.  Again I love this story and it is very well written.  I'm very proud of you my dear and you have been one of my most faithful reviewers and readers so I'm returning the favor to you.  Love you.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Hehe. We needed some funny to acompany all this drama. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I used to have panic attacks too, but they got better over the years. My cousing still has them though and that's where I got the idea for rubbing his stomach to calm him down because that's what they have to do for my cousin. Thanks for reading this story and reviewing. I'm glad to be one of your readers and so honored you read mine.

Sleep well!

Reviewer: twilight_writer1220 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 18

Hey! I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewd in a while but I have been keeping up with this story as well as Coffee. I'm just going to come out and say that I am in awe of this story because of how emotional it is. You are very gifted in getting people to be emotionally connected with it and develop feelings for your characters. I really can't wait to see how everything progresses.

By the way I was laughing so hard at Rob at the beginning of this chapter! "My arm tasted like watermelon." and "I can't remember my abc's."

Xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! That really means alot and you just completely made my day. I never really planned on writing this story, let alone posting it. But to know that I have touched people emotionally really makes me feel somewhat important. So thank you for being such a faithful reader.

And I loved the beginning, too. haha. We all needed a little comic relief.

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 17

Hey Haley, sorry it took so long to review this and I'm not going to throw anything at you.  I'm just worried sick about Rob right now.  It is breaking my heart to see him like this and I'm praying that he is going to be alright eventually.  I know he will.  I loved this chapter and the emotion you have shown us. Very well written.  Have I told you lately that I'm sooooo proud of you on both of your stories.  I love this.  Love you girl.

Penny



Author's Response:

Haha. I love you so much! Don't worry too much about Rob... I could never do too much damage to him. lol. The next update should be up soon. I submitted it a few days ago, so it shouldn't be too much longer.

Reviewer: akaalice (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 17

I love this story (and your other one, Fresh Breath). I am anxious to see what happens to poor Rob. His relationship with his parents and sisters are so touching. Please, please update soon. I know RL gets in the way but...anyway if you can please update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy the story. And the next update is waiting to be validated, so it shouldn't be too long.

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh, shit! What's wrong with him? Please tell me it's nothing serious! Don't worry, sweetie, I'm not planning to throw anything at you.  Lol. But I am a bit nervous. *bites nails while waiting for the next chapter*



Author's Response:

Haha. Things will be explained in the next couple chapters, don't worry.

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 17

You had to stop there?!! I hope this is not too serious. He has been through so much!



Author's Response:

haha. sorry for the cliffie! He has been through a lot, but things will get better, don't worry. There's always going to be bumps in the road...

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: WildPhoenix316 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 17

This was a good chapter,sad but still really good.I hope he get's to go home soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! He won't be going home for a little while, but don't worry... there is a setting change in a bit.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 17

I think you described th MRI well.  They gave me xanax every time I went to have an MRI and I'm not claustrophobic at all.  They offered earplugs, but I said no.  The machine was LOUD.  I was curious about the scans, but they never showed them to me.

 

A million hugs back!!!!

 

Emily



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I wouldn't be able to handle an MRI. I am extremely claustrophobic. I get dizzy just thinking about it =/

But I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks again for your help. I'll send you Rob for the rest of the week. Just have him back to me by Monday. haha.

Love ya!

-Haley

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