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Reviews For The Longest Summer
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Ok, make up your mind.....is the epilogue approaching or is the prologue almost upon us?  Or is it the prologue of the final part of the story?  My head is hurting....

 

Yeah, you've taken it slow with these two but I don't mind.  They have been more than a bit oblivious but that's the way it sometimes goes in RL, too.

 

Thanks for hanging in there for us, even when things are getting crazy for you at work.



Author's Response:

did i say epilogue?? ...if i ever mentioned an epilogue, just replace with prologue (my mind has been confuzzled, i apologize)  but yay-'m glad you're still enjoying :)

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Great update...getting closer, yea! BTW, I work in pharmacy and three ambien would kill a horse, let alone Emmett. But we're talking about the big guy here, so maybe? LOL



Author's Response:

...i take two ambien all the time...

i think it depends how many mgs you take.  mine are each 10 mgs, so...i think if emmett took three, he'd be okay.  he's a giant, haha.

Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

I really love the story but I running out of patients,  Please please give me something to move this.

Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

GAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't freakin' care it's slow, 'cause it's fucking good...so good...

that ending was... so perfect, cute and sweet and romantic, yet not too much, just the right amount. And Campward is so funny always... actually another thing that I liked was the gossip between campers at the sweet display of Emmett and Bella,  it was sweet, funny and yet you don't tear apart the amaizing couples of E/B Em/R...

Congratulations on the promotion!!!!

and thanks for the story! 

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Yep about ready kill them both but I trust you. Really I do.  Congrats on the promotion!  Good chapter!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Edward needs to get it together!

Reviewer: mrsyt31 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

~smiling~

Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Oh these two need some serious help. Thanks for the new chapter. I am starting to feel like it might just happen!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Yep about ready kill them both but I trust you. Really I do.  Congrats on the promotion!  Good chapter!

Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

I love everything that they are going though.. It's cute =)  I mean come on.. Not everyone just jumps right in not caring what happens!  I just hope they figure it out soon!!  Can't wait for more!

Bethanne

Congrads on your promotion!

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

OK....these two are really pissing me off!!!  OK, I feel better now.  Next chappie pleae....

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Yep about ready kill them both but I trust you. Really I do.  Congrats on the promotion!  Good chapter!

Reviewer: xrxdanixrx (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 15 Quebec Overnight

Excellent chapter as usual.

I've decided that Edward is a little punk.  He can be so immature sometimes with his crazy angry outbursts.  We still love him though.

For some reason, I died laughing when Jake said, "Samesies".  It was just so unexpected.  Hilarious. 

I'm so excited that we're getting closer to to the prologue.  I know everyone thinks it's Seth, but I'm still thinking it's Edward.  That laugh at the end confused the hell out of me because I was wondering if it's the same laugh as in the prologue.

Looking forward to the next and see you in the thread!

Reviewer: LiNN- (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 Delicious Scents

Im so angry at the rest of the "gang" for interrupting Bella an Edward in bed! Argh! (Bellas dream was HOT HOT HOT by the way!). :P

And whats up with Seth? What is he trying to do? I dont trust him for some reason I think he is still hoping to "win" Bella over and Im not liking it one bit.

And for the love of GOD Edward, dont go back to square one! Although I am sure that when he said "its not like that" he didnt mean it the way Bella thought he meant. COMMUNICATION GUYS! :D

Cant wait for the Quebec trip! I hope they will continue to take steps FORWARD and realise how GOOD they would be together. :P 

Great chapter as always, eventhough the UST and cockblockings are driving me insane! :)

/Linn

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 14 Delicious Scents

Ok, again i loved this chapter. I cant wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 13 Not-Quite First Dates

Loved this chapter :) i have to get caught up iv been slackin on my fanfic and im trying to get caught up. OK .... on to the next chapter :D

Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 Vodka Lemonade

Hey!! I love your story and I was wondering if you had one of those promotion things that people put on their signatures in the forums. If you do can I have the image code for it please? Thanks so much =D



Author's Response:

wow, thank you so much!  i don't have a special small one that would act as a signature, all i have is the banner...but the image code for that is: http://pics.livejournal.com/evilangel_6714/pic/00004g86

Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 14 Delicious Scents

I hope that Bella and Edward get their acts together sooner rather than later. It's almost painful reading about all their awkwardness and ineptitude....so much so that I find myself, more often than not, skim reading through their interactions. It's a train wreck in the making!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 Delicious Scents

It's amazing how words can be taken in so many and different ways. Edward meant something completely different to what Bella assumed when they were being observed by their friends. Of course both of them feel awkward and have had little clue as to what to say or how to act through the day. They have been busy and still are tied up with work, so so far, no time to think or talk about what might be going on.

However they are going to Quebec... hopefully by then things might have progressed at least a bit.

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 Not-Quite First Dates

Not the evening Edward had planned or imagined, but still a really good one. They all had fun, hopefully Bella and Rosalie are good again.

Jake is fine with Edward going after Bella, Jake and Tanya???? Edward isn't sure of what to think about that one.

The only ones on not such a good place are Alice and Jasper, but hopefully soon enough they will be.

And Bella ended again falling asleep in Edward's bunk, how will morning find them?

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 12 Murky Relations

Yes, I have to admit it, I had completely forgotten about Tanya being mentioned before. But as the chapter went on, I started to think I must have missed something along the way and I did.

Edward depends on his sister a lot it seems and she knows it and loves it. She seems to be a really easy going and fun girl, with a great sense of humor and lots of whit.

She is on a mission, so is Edward and Bella, it will be a hot, hot night, and not only for the weather ;)

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 11 New Faces

Edward's timing was all wrong!!! He seemed to not be able to catch a break, and Bella spent the day feeling conflicted with her emotions on a roller coaster. And Seth? He is a good guy, a great guy, who is willing to take Bella's friendship, since it's all he can get. He is being really supportive and encouraging. And to top the day Emmett shows up. Bella is furious and will take it out on him alone or Rosalie too?

And of course the obvious question, who is Edward going to meet with? Mother, sister, ex, cousin????

Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 14 Delicious Scents

Another great chapter...can't wait for the next one!!! ;)

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 10 Shack Time

Things aren't what they seem or how they look, especially at a distance. Lucky for Bella, it seems Emmett is now getting used to the idea of something going on between her and Edward. And I think Emmett isn't too happy with the idea of Bella hooking up with Seth either.

Bella feels and is in a way lonely. She had imagined her summer as a counselor very different from how it has been turning on. She never imagined Alice being swept off her feet and that has to be taking it's toll.

But things with Edward seem to be looking better and brighter, hopefully ;)

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Aftermath

So the news is out for all the counselors to see, that's except the two in the middle of it all. Bella and Edward are coming to realize what everyone else has noticed for a while. But they are still not acting on it, why? The age difference? The nerves? The fear of rejection? What ever is keeping them from really talking, if they don't address it soon, even the campers might start noticing.

Great that Alice and Jasper are finally together!!!!

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