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Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:40 AM · On: February 29, 2008

you had me at EPOV...

it's only the first chapter and I'm dying to read the rest of the chaps!

luv it!

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 04:45 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Babe's right, what can we do to get you to continue with this story. I want to know what happens... Please continues. Pleassse...

Reviewer: Babe (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:33 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Have you totally given up on this story!?  I am so disappointed, as it has, so far, been my favorite of all of the AU/AH stories on Twilighted.  What can we do to tempt you to continue?



Author's Response:

I haven't given up. I've started writing again. Hopefully there will be a chapter in a couple of weeks.

Reviewer: tammypz (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:49 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

LOVE this story...I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:41 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2

Seriously I know how crazy this probably sounds, but my breath literally hitched at the end of this chapter during Bella's true confession lol...i love this story already

Reviewer: starlit skyes (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:20 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Wow, I really love this fic! The plot is great, the characterization flawless, and altoegether great writing.

Of course, the romance but of it is moving a little slower that I would have liked, but it's subtle, and I love it.

The smut wasn't too explicit, and I love that, too.

I like the gardener ... I like how you put the characters from the book in here, and just changed their status, sort of, but kept them in character.

I especially loved the bits when bella spills the wine on Jessica, and the bit when edward and Bella get drunk

Great job, great writing!! Please, please, please update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:32 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008

awesome story so far.  Staying up way too late to read it.

Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:22 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008

wow that was steamy!

Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:34 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008

great chapter.  I can't wait to read the next.

Reviewer: tnkrbellsam (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 10:33 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed this story.  I've re-read it twice, in hopes that when I come to the end of this chapter, you will have updated.  I have to know whats gonna happen between Bella and Edward.  Do the Volturi come for her?  Does Edward finally admit his feelings for her?  Shouldn't Alice have her baby soon?  I need answers.  I love this story, and how its written and I can't wait to read some more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your great review. I can't answer your questions, but I enjoyed reading them.

Reviewer: msthing211 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:42 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Love, love, love this.  Please add more...especially Bella/Edward LUV scenes.  Great story!

Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:15 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Hi! This is a wonderful story. Keep it going!

Reviewer: zoegerava (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:29 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I really enjoy this story and was wondering if there were gonna be any updates any time soon.



Author's Response:

It will be a couple of weeks. I had an unplanned absence from writing, but I have started writing again.

Reviewer: SunMoonStars (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:18 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Time to update please!!! You are killing us here!!!!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 03:22 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

sigh. I am just loving this story. can't wait to see where you go with them next!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:32 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Yum.



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 12:37 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

Holy cow - my first time reading this and omg I am on pins and needles here...

Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 02:42 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2

Great chapter especially the last part!

Reviewer: fmlife (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:56 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008

i did enjoy this double chapter



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: fmlife (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:49 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I absolutly LOVE this story!

Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:27 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

thoughts?hmmmm!!perfect.all the story is excelent.write more!!i can't wait to read more of it.

Reviewer: DazzedByRob (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:07 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

oooof the secrets....

 

ps. hottest pda session everr.. yea



Author's Response:

Ha. Thanks.

Reviewer: Kricket (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:07 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

I'm totally hooked on your story and can't wait to see what happens and when.  I'll be waiting for updates!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008

Blissfully awkward.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:37 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I just found this and I'm hooked! This is great and really well written - Can't wait to read more.

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