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Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:31 PM · On: The Day From Hell
This was a great chapter. I loved B &E's kiss and I'm so glad Andy's going to be okay. I wonder what Emmett would think about Bella and Edward together. This is a great story so far.
Author's Response: I"m glad you liked it. With any luck the next chapter will be posting tonight as long as my v beta can get to it! She said she would try. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:28 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I am soooooo LOVING THIS STORY! Just found it and am very happy I did! Update soon please. I can't wait to see what happens....
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it! It's been fun to write. I will probably be posting a chapter a day for a while until I catch you guys up to what I've written so far, after which I will do my best to post at least a chapter a week...but who knows, but the time I finish posting I'll have it all done and there won't be any wait between chapters :) Anyway...glad you're liking it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: familyof4 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:58 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Don't you dare hold off posting. This story is so good. I love it!
Author's Response: don't worry...I'm pushing them through as quickly as the system allows :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:55 PM · On: The Day From Hell
that was so sad with andy... but i'm glad he is doing better... i just wish that edward and bella will admit that they love each other... well tell the other person how they feel.. maybe that will happen when the prologue incident happens.... great job so far and i can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It will be a bit of a rollercoaster for a while, but trust me they will work it out eventually. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:14 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I'm enjoying the story, and I appreciate how fast you're posting. (I don't usually get to review, because I have a one-year-old who likes to try and type every time I get the keyboard out! She's asleep now, so I can tell you now how much I love your story!)
Love,
Rachel
Author's Response:
I feel ya...I have a one year old and a four year old....but I keep the pack n play up to give me some hands free writing time :) Glad you love the story and I hope you keep enjoying it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:06 PM · On: The Day From Hell
This is an AWESOME story.
I just wish there were more chapters to read *HINT HINT* Ha ha.
xxx
Author's Response: Oh don 't worry...I'm already up to 49....I'm posting as fast as the process will let me since you can only post one chapter at a time. Thankfully my validation beta is speedy getting through about one chapter a day :) Glad you are enjoying and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:42 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Isn't life funny,when it comes to love. Everyone around you can see it but you are blind to it when it's right in front of your face.
Author's Response: Yeah, and these two have been fighting the attraction so long since it was illegal in the beginning that they're having a hard time getting out of that mindset. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:26 AM · On: The Day From Hell
You know, impulse control problems work in my favour when I'm loving the story!!! It's great! You're doing an awesome job and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks...I"m so glad you are enjoying it. Next chapter is in queue and the next two are polished and waiting for their turn. It kind of stinks you can only put in one chapter at a time, but that's how it goes I guess...LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:17 AM · On: The Day From Hell
I really do like this. I was a social worker assigned to a task force for a decade. Most of them are slutwards LOL
Author's Response: LOL...you know slutward is actually based on a guy I went to H.S. with. He was such a sweet guy, kind hearted back then. He moved to Arizona and joined SWAT and is a total cocky self important narcisisstic slutward now. So when I started thinking of the storyline slutward was a blaringly obvious choice. Glad you are liking it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:51 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Impulse control is no good ... update now .... pullleeeeasse!
This is so good and I so want to know what happens. The whole scene with Andy was intense & I love the E & B kiss as he wakes up!
Author's Response: I'm posting them as quickly as the system will let me :) I'm glad you are enjoying and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:20 AM · On: The Day From Hell
well, i still want more...especially more edward and bella! and i can't wait for the boys to come and rescue bella-bean. i kinda already have a scene in my head (with a lot of edward-action) but since it's your fic (and the idea, i think, is pretty great!) i'll wait for your updates...opefully they come soon!
Author's Response: well, I hope you enjoy it. That chapter was a particularly hard one to write when I got to that point. Hopefully you like how it all comes out in the end. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sommer (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:47 AM · On: The Day From Hell
This one is right up my alley - med. interns, living close to testosterone bombs, quick wit etc. Keep it coming! I so need a new thing to be addicted to, it never were the same after "In the blink of an eye" got finished. Best wishes from me :-)
Author's Response: Well I'm glad it's caught your attention and fed the addiction! I hope you keep enjoying it and thanks for the review! Next chapter is in the queue and hopefully will post tonight, and I've already got the two following double polished and ready for submission. Hope you keep enjoying the ride!!!
Reviewer: dawnee Luv (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:38 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Love it! You don't have to wait a couple of days. Don't even try to squash that impulse control problem. It's not really a problem as far as I can tell. Keep em' coming! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
Author's Response: Will do! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jennchris821 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:27 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Great chapter, I am so loving this story
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm glad and thank you for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:44 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Amazing story! I love slutward.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Blakely (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:38 AM · On: The Day From Hell
That kiss was HOT!! I love the confusion that is going on with Edward and Bella. They clearly love eachother. I love how everyone else seems to know it too. I am curious to see how Emmett feels about this. Keep it coming!!! I love this story!!!
Author's Response: You'll find out in a little while. I don't remember how many chapters ahead, but we get to see an Emmett point of view that I think you'll enjoy! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:12 AM · On: The Day From Hell
I am really enjoying this story as it is so different from some of the other fanfics out there. I am really intrigued by the relationship between Bella and her boys, and I can't help but wonder when Jasper will meet Alice ?!?!?!
keep up the great writing and I can't wait for the next update, already added to my author update alert :)
Author's Response: We have a few more chapters before that happens. I think it's chapter 7 ;) but don't quote me Glad you are enjoying this and thanks for the review!
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Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:45 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Damn -- Bella really did have a bad day. It was great seeing her in doctor mode and I think that 'her boys' were impressed too.
I really like this wake-up-from-a-coma-and-and-offer-wisdom Andy. I worry that it is going to take so much more for Edward to listen.
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Edward takes the hard road a lot of times. These two have a bit of arollercoaster ride to get through before they finally figure their things out, but I promise to keep it interesting. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: edreader123456 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:23 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Enjoying your story. Can hardly wait for the guns to come out.
Author's Response: Yeah, It takes a little while before I bring out the guns, but when I do it's a doozie! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: DSCH (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:23 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Really really well written- even with all the turns in the plot/background information on Bella and Emmett's life, it all flows well and is easy to understand. Plus, Protectiveward makes me happy :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I've really had fun writing this story. When I started it it was pretty far out of my comfort zone...I'm like Bella int he fact that I don't curse most of the time, so to write with so much cursing was a stretch for me at first. I'm glad it's been so well recieved and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:20 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Oh thank goodness Andy is ok!! And that Kiss, WOW!!! I wouldn't mind me a little Edward kiss like that, mmm, even in writing he is on HMF!!!! Loving where this is going!!!
Author's Response: LOL...he's going to have to work for it a while first, but expect a lot more fun sexy Edward times to come :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:08 AM · On: The Day From Hell
so far looks good, cant wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Hope you keep enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:46 AM · On: The Day From Hell
I'll totally keep reviewing if you keep posting!!!! I'm loving this story! It's my daily dose of drama. ;) Kind of like your daily soap opera viewing. *wink wink*
Now, OMG! They KISSED!!!! (And Andy was awake to see it *squee*) I'm so happy Andy is going to be ok. I liked the use of him and his "I almost died so listen to me" way of telling Edward how it is. I have a feeling if Jasper had tried to tell him the same thing it wouldn't have been recieved as well. And poor Bella. Talk about a crappy day! Will we hear more about her little patient and how he's doing?
This is really, really good!!!!
Author's Response: There will be a few more ups and downs before it's all settled, but it's good for Edward to have to work for something for once...right? Also we will definitely see Ethan again later. Glad you're enjoying our little soap. Next chapter is uploaded and I have a feeling I might get a little yelled at, but just remember, it all works out later ;) It seems like my valid beta is getting these out sometime in the night or early morning for me, so hopefully it will post sometime tonight :) Thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:08 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Really well done. IT is FANTASTIC! I have been so sucked into the story that I cannot wait for further postings. The whole premise is excellent. I don't care that you fast tracked Bella for her medical degree. I like the way you have set this up. Post more soon! Glad you have impulse control problems. I would def read whatever you can post as soon as you can post it.
Author's Response: thanks...I'm so glad you are enjoying it so much! I tried to make this as realistic as I can, but that's not always possible, especially with the scant medical/SWAT knowledge I'm working with. I do my best though! (PS...we will totally be seeing the boys in action later on a time or two)
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:41 AM · On: The Day From Hell
This story rocks! I love it already and I can't wait to see these two get their acts together already :-)
Can't wait to read more!!
~Thanks
Author's Response: I"m so glad you're liking it. You'll be glad to know that it's already mostly written and should go up pretty fast:) Thanks for the review!
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