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Reviewer: THBS (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:15 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Oh, I love it when an author is way ahead! It means faster updates everytime! :)
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:12 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
wonderful as always. This keeps me entertained at work!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Poor Ethan :(
And poor Andy, hostage to Eddie's emo ass! Lol...wah wah, I'm an asshat, listen to my tale of woe and angst!! (Edward is the KOA - King of Angst!!!) Lucky for him, he's getting sprung. :)
Momma D is right on the money - she does need an estrogen fest and time away from the Cockblock Club!! Maybe if someone else grabs at her tail feathers, Edward will come sniffin' around.
Time to party, sistas!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
What a HO that Maggie is! and a bitch of EPIC proportions!
What a DOUCHEBAG Edward is! have you noticed this is a recurrent theme in fanfic, that of Eddie's douchebaggery? gah!
What a sad day Bella had! At least that kid's dad isn't wailing on him. Wasn't there a Bruce Willis movie w/ Samuel L. Jackson as a villian named Mr. Glass that had that same disease?? Like a superhero flick? hmmm....
I hope the guys kick. edwards. ass.!!!! Dumbass. >:P
Edward, there are NONE so blind as those who refuse to see!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:44 PM · On: The Day From Hell
P. S. I think that little boy's dad is beating on him. :( Is he going to be our gunman????? Will Edward save the day?? Will Gotham City be safe again?? Stay tuned tomorrow!! Same bat time, same bat channel! 8)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:42 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I'm with you! Screw holding back already-written chapters! why torture us???
I will review my ass off for you, so keep those chappies comin'! :)
HOORAY A KISS!!!!!!!!! poor Edward - he is mentally cockblocking himself from the glory that is Bella. What's his story? Why is he so emotionally stunted? bad childhood or something??
HOORAY for Andy waking up! Everybody's calling bullshit on Edward this week about Bella. His poor brain must hurt as much as Andy's! Buck up, Buttercup - you're in lurve! :))) And we saw right thru his extra gestures of pretending to be Bella's boyfriend so he could get into ANdy's room...and Bella is right, he DOES pass by the Bellas to get to the Barbies. Dumbass!
Edward's conversation in his head cracked me up. Poor dude is losing it. 8)
Onward to the next chapte I go!!! woot woot!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
oh, Jasper is wise :) I feel for Bella, that she let "Slutward" slip out in her sleep....I went to school with three very hot brothers; the youngest one was in my grade. I ran into him after college and we got chatting - he had FAR surpassed the other ones in hotness, and I told him so! (being shy and all.) Well, he says to me "oh, when we were in 4th grade you told me I was the ugly one." I nearly CRIED!!! He was never ugly - they were all always fine - but I must have been being bratty or kidding - I had NO memory of saying that at all, but he did - about 12 years later! I felt like total SHIT! Luckily, if your story has a HEA, Bella can spend forever reassuring Edward that he's no longer slutty at all. :)
Please manage to fit in a chapter describing Jasper dancing naked. Even if it's not relevant to the story. haha! :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
Damn, I was hoping that Bella took a drunken swing at Silicone Barbie!!
Edward is so damned delicious...of course he's slutty. He's been gifted by GOD, for chrissakes!!! Seriously, how hot can 1 guy be? somewhere, to balance things out, there must be a complete OGRE living under a bridge, picking at his boils and such. Alas!
I like the premise of your story - unique story line! Nobody dies, do they???
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Loved it all!!
OOhhh SWAT action is hott!!
I hope Bella heard Eddie's little admission, even tho she was supposedly asleep.. *___*
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I freaking LOVE this story and can't wait for more.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
LOVED IT!! Ha ha poor Eddie - jealous much?? He SO deserved seeing the shoe on the other foot!!
I donno about this Trevor guy. He prolly the bad guy huh? SWAT gonna have to take him out?? Is he the one in the Prologue?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
Great chapter. I'm glad the boys are safe. What's Trevor's job? Is it somehow related to the boys being called out? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
oh yeah....
first off LOVE the visual of David Boreanaz circa Buffy as Trevor...I could totally visualize it!
second....MAKE EDWARD work for it!!!! and he should! What he did to Bella was downright cruel.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Puppet Master J
the SOB needs to do some MAJOR groveling and to see that miss bella is one hot commodity and he'd be LUCKY to have her.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
haha Assward!!
love me some Mama D!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I fully expected serious groveling and NADA...i'm holding out for faith!!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Wow oh Wow...EPOV really did add to the story and it is so nice to know what is going on with both of my fav characters. It seems Emmett was not as blind as I previously thought and have to laugh that he started to notice how things were after Bella became legal. I sure wonder what him and Jasper did to try and get Edward to realize his love for Bella. I wonder if it hurt them a bit to see Slutward, maybe even want to kick his ass...sigh. The SWAT stuff was cool and had me a bit nervous at times thinking and hoping that no one would get shot. That was some serious stuff...
EXCITED WAITING FOR MORE...
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
WOW yeah Edward really fucked up!!! something tells me MAJOR groveling will be involved.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:37 PM · On: The Day From Hell
What an amazing first kiss!!!!! Love the dynamic between your edward and bella...love the angst, ust, drama, suspense and the romance....can't wait to see what's next.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
!@*%$!# Slutward!! And with Mag the Hag??? WTF!?? UGH!! Bella SHOULD have kneed him!!! And the Ho's comment about the "mousey doctor" ??? !&@(#! bring him by & I'LL knee him!!
Kudo's to Bella getting in a word to Edward about his "chosing THEM every night of the week" on her way out! *evil laugh*
Wow good chapter. Eddie's lucky to still be alive & with his balls intact O___o
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
Ok so was so excited about the Femmes night out that I had to rush to this chapter...so sorry sometimes I can't control my need to know what happens. I could not be more happy with hot the night progessed and laughed and cheered like crazy seeing Edward pull his head out as they say it. Trevor seems like a good guy but he makes me wonder...not a good thing. I sure hope Edward starts fighting or he's gonna miss out on something good with Bella. I absolutly love how devious Jasper and Alice are...the are the fuckawesomest friends. I am so in love with your characters and how they are interacting. This story is just scintilating...
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
Oh i love the UST you have brewing here...how neither of them sees how the other perceives them but EVERYONE else does! classic!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
Oh wow...I REALLY love this premise so far!!!!!
Reviewer: wordsof4ever (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:44 PM · On: The Day From Hell
*giggle* oohh THAT was sudden & unexpected!! LOL sexy too
I'ma likin' this story already!! ^___^
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