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Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:38 PM · On: The Unexpected

So much sexual tension between them too. I do not trust that guy how dare he follow them around . I have a bad feeling something is going to happen while Edward and the boys are away.

Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment

LOL and good thing too.  My heart broke for Bella when she heard Edward's voice.  Such great writing, you totally suck me in!

Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:33 PM · On: The Unexpected

So close...but no cigar....darn it!!! Why Emmett, why??? Loved this chapter and can NOT wait until you update!! I'm so happy their together!!



Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:26 PM · On: The Day From Hell

That was GREAT!  How romantic and hot!!!!

The little boy Bella treated the other day bothers me though....I hope it's not abuse, and I hope he's going to be OK. 

Good good job, keep it coming!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:19 PM · On: The Day From Hell

Can you spell "wake-up call" Edward? LOL Great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts

I really really like this story!  Very original, and the characters are just right.  Great job so far!


Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:10 PM · On: The Unexpected

Great story but it is so tough to have to wait for an update even though you update quickly. Just had to let you know how fantastic I believe your story to be!


Reviewer: eiseman04 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:07 PM · On: The Unexpected

Awesome chapter .  Loved that Edward got some loving, but was disappointed that Bella's special time was interupted by Emmett.  Can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:32 PM · On: The Unexpected

*fans face* THAT. WAS. HOTTTTT!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chappie!!!!!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:31 PM · On: The Day From Hell

I just wanted to stop and say that I am really enjoying the story so far and can't wait to continue it! :) 

I'm so glad that so far, Andy's okay.  YAY for Edward and Bella smooching. :)

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts

OH I'm so glad that they already have feelings for each other. Nothing better than some sexual tension and a hostage crisis to bring people together! LOL

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:05 PM · On: The Unexpected

Great chapter. Hope Bella, Alice and Rose are okay while the boys are gone. Can't wait to read more. Bring them home soon! Please update soon.

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:30 AM · On: The Unexpected

Love it more with every chap!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tkdalton (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:29 AM · On: The Unexpected

more, more, more! I can't believe how addicted i am to this story. I compulsively check for updates every few hours and when i find one i can't help but laugh out loud. Please keep up the great work!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:21 AM · On: The Unexpected

Great chapter!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

Just came across this story and I like the premise so far! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:38 AM · On: The Unexpected

"This, Bella, is known as a Claddagh ring."

LOL @ having such a ring in the fic when you mention that Trevor looks like Angel.

Good thing Bella isn't blond, because then we'd have to picture her as B.


Author's Response: know I've never made that connection!  Nobody else has ever mentioned it either.  YOu must be a true blue Buffy fan!  Thanks for pointing that out though...that was great!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:38 AM · On: The Unexpected


Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:13 AM · On: The Unexpected

 YEAAAAAAAAAA... MN my home Im liking the plot line so far. good work

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:02 AM · On: The Unexpected

I liked the ring alot. Very nicely done. Why do I get the feeling that all will not be quiet and simple while Edward is gone? Are you going to kill Andy? It kind of feels like he's on the block. Like on Star Trek, when 3 main characters and a random new character - that was really likeable - beamed down to the planet they were at. Just wondering...

Love this!

Author's Response:, Andy isn't random fourth guy who will die.  Things are however not going to be all quiet on the FDKK front though.  Hope you enjoy the next two updates....much happens!  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:11 AM · On: The Unexpected

I loved this story. It gets more interesting with every chapter!!!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:49 AM · On: The Unexpected

omg thats so messed up bellas gonna have blue balls lmao anyway love the story cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:10 PM · On: New Heat and Old Flames

Thank you for this great story, please keep goin` :)

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Femmes Night Out


this is a fabulous story! Discovered it yesterday evening and sat up reading until 1 am, and still have plenty of chapters left. Really like your writing style and the plot is very good. I like that Bella is a doctor, that's a new fresh idea. Also, for once Edward has an understandable reason for the way he behaves, often he is just emo and angsty and deems himself unworthy for some obscure reason that doesn't make any sense to anyone but himself. Having experienced abandon, I can well understand he doesn't dare feeling or falling in love.

I also very much like the introduction of new characters such as Andy, Sabrina and Krista, sometimes I get a bit tired of Lauren, Jessica and Angela.

Just waiting for the drama you hinted at in the prologue...

Author's Response:

I had a few people that were upset to have new characters, but I felt the same's always the same people over and over and I wanted my world to stretch a bit beyond the Twilight universe.  I"m glad you are enjoying the story!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:03 PM · On: The Inner Sanctum

now i am apprehensive...  i mean, this doesn't sound good!

on another note, the whole "come to my penthouse" shit was great, right? Come and make yourself at home! *sighs*

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