Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
Good! It's actually ridiculous how happy I get when I see the update email for this story in my inbox.
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Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
I understand Bella wanting to leave but that's dumb considering the danger she's in. She's supposed to be a doctor she should be smarter and make better decisions under pressure.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Like you said, once you introduced Tanya you could see it coming. I liked you senario though, Tanya was mistaken and not being clingy and Edward stopped anything before it was further misconstrued. Good Job, can't wait for the next chapter. I REALLY do appreciated how quickly you update. ;)
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
AAAAAAAAAAAARGH! YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Author's Response: Sorry hon, but the next chap is already in queue :)
Author's Response: Sorry hon, but the next chap is already in queue :)
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
CRAP! You're seriously trying to give us heartfail, aren't you???? This chappie was deliciously torturous and I am fighting every urge I have to go to ffn and maybe just reaad the next chapter to make sure it's okay...But I love you for updating so quickly on here and I don't want to betray you...although all bets might be off after a full day of trick-or-treating and perhaps a few cpn morgan n hot ciders... I will promise you this, whether I cheat or not, I will continue to review each chapter. Deal?
Anyways, of COURSE Edward wouldn't cheat...Bella is just so fragile/sensitive about that subject that she thinks that it's the other shoe dropping like she expected. I'm so glad Tanya isn't conniving, and came to Edward's defense. That was a refreshing twist on the situation. And, holy shit, how about Edward's mom???After all the mind-fuckery he went through over her, no wonder he wanted to talk to Tanya! And I love Bella, but it was bad, bad, BAD for her to take off on her own...I hope she's not being followed!!!
Another awesome chapter in this amazingly compelling story!
Author's Response: I would forgive you if you did. I hate it when you guys have to wait for a cliffhanger knowing that the next one is out there. It is int he queue though and with any luck will post later today or tomorrow. And it will resolve the immediate tension at least :)
I'm glad you liked the chapter. I really wanted to write a better Tanya. She's till damaged as you'll learn more later, but she's not evil by any stretch...a little pathetic maybe, but not evil. thanks for the review!
Reviewer: the_other_cullen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
AHHH!!! SO GOOD!!! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER QUICK!!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Tanya always ruins everything *sigh* great chapter as always.
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Thanks for the long chapter. Yeah, Edward is unlucky. And like always, Bella goes running. But I know it is leading up to something bigger.
Reviewer: VivianDarkbloom23 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I hate hate hate misunderstandings like this :( :( But I trust you! I do! And I knew in my heart-of-hearts that they wouldn't be happy mushy in love for the *entire* story ;) So carry on!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Oh Assward.. when are you gonna quit being the dipshit for once?
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Damn! Drama!!!! They just don't get a break do they! Good chapter.
Reviewer: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
WoW... yes a drama cliffie. It was interesting, of course I have no knowledge of SWAT so... but well done, and I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
OMG! His mother and Tanya were in on the whole thing, weren't they? It was all a ruse to make Bella be on her own! There must be a mole in the security - CRAP! It's not Andy is it????
I love how you keep me guessing!!! =] Update soon, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:08 AM · On: The Inner Sanctum
Well I'm managing to pop a chapter in here before my day gets started and I have to say it's a great chapter to start the day off with! LOL Loved that Edward let Bella into his "inner inner sanctum" but a bit worried about this thug. Why am I not surprised his name is James? LOL Can't wait to read more, but will have to wait until later. Love this story!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
OMG... this is insane!!!
Reviewer: indianagirl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Personally I don't think I would have walked away. I probably would have stood there and watched and stared at him until he saw me then turned around and left. Or i would have stabbed her with a fork lol Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Great chapter. Can't believe Bella had to walk in just at that moment. Hope Edward can convince Bella that it was a misunderstanding. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Ow! That's one nasty cliffhanger! I hope I don't have to wait too long... And what was that about his mother?...
Definitely can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Okay, I know you have a plan but I am pissed!
Please don't drag this situation on and don't make Edward the "bad" guy all the time!
Bella really needs to start believing in herself a bit and instead of running from situations face them!
Please, Please don't make us wait for too long for an update!
Author's Response: Never fear...resolution awaits in the next chapter
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
whoohoo! A visit from the Drama Llama
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
awww, talk about bad timing:(
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
NO hate, frustration yes. *bangs head against the wall* stupid boy, stupid overly dramatic girl!! Bella needs to grow a pair and learn to trust! After everything Edward has done, I can understand the instinct, but come on WTF where is the TRUST?!?!?!?! THis relationship will not work if they have no trust!!! *growls* they need counsling... *mutters to self as I finish my wine*
Author's Response: Never fear...only the damaged can grow with time. If I didn't start them off with trust issues and a little immaturity, then where could I go with the characters as the story progressed? ;) This doesn't drag out long at all....resolution awaits in the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
can't wait to read more
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
omg that so messed up thatnk god tanya said something for once i love that bitch
Reviewer: rocknredbrit (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Wow! You are doing great with the SWAT information (though I know nothing about it so I would believe it all anyway). Over used plot point? maybe, but if it fits in organically to the overall story line, then it is better than trying to force something else. I adore this story (and your frequent updates!)
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