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Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
This chapter was the perfect length, I think. So glad they worked it out. If Tanya hadn't spoken up, Ed would be dead! Loved this chapter, will the boys take care of Tony's son?
Reviewer: savemesuperman128 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
This is my favorite story! I absolutely love it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
ARGH!!!
Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
i think i'm going to cry like big croc tears!!!!!!! i really wish you could have done that bit of Bella's point of view from Edward's POV too... usually i hate that kind of repetition but with something so... so... i think the word i'm looking for is something so heart-felt that was just beautiful!!!! i am truly ashamed of myself though because i used to comment somewhat religiously with everystory that i would read but i kinda stopped!!! ***Hangs head in shame*** :( But you can be looking out for Wolfie's review from now on because i really love your story you are an amazing writer!!!! not only are you writing this incredible TwiFic you are also updating regularly so in my book you earned so many points!!!! i have to say that one of my biggest pet peeves is when people start of with a couple of utterly amazing chapters than its like they fall off the face of the earth so like i said thank you!!!!!! and just to clear something up Trager is like AKA Mr.Clean right the guy that was working with Trevor and the mob guy's cousin right???? because if not i might have to go back please write back!!!!! i love the character that you gave my favorite person in this story the protective big brother that hits then asks questions when it comes to his baby sister...Emmett... its funny because i think that all brothers because mine is only 5 years older than me but is really protective which at time is very annoying but hey at least i understand how Bella feels!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!
PeaceLove&Twilight
Wolfie
Author's Response: To answer your question...you are spot on...Yes Trager is Mr. Clean/ mob guy Deluca who they busted on the call out's cousin, and working for Trevor the new doc who has been hitting on Bella. Good tracking, I'm so glad you're enjoying this so much and I hope you enjoy and keep reviewing because I love reading them even if I don't usually have time to reply to them all! Thanks again!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
omg that was so horrible when she thre the ring at him - emm saved the day yay - im so happy they are back together and is really messed up what happen with edwards mom - bitch needs to get smacked lol anyway cant wait for next chapter
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:08 PM · On: The Unexpected
Hot, Hot, HOT!!! LOL Great chapter, but I'm more anxious now that the boys have left town!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Tager scares the crap out of me!!! I can't imagine living in a city large enough that people can watch your every move and never be detected. But, I guess to so degree this could even happen in a small town like Forks WA.
Love your story and hope you are getting tons of new followers such as myself.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Nice. Drama, explainations, and misunderstanings taken care of. I did wonder though how Trager could get out of the building without being seen. Jasper was still downstairs and I'm sure the other exits were watched by some sort of security. But all in all a good chapter. :)
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Great chapter! Poor sad Edward! Talk about breaking my heart; made me want to rush over and hug him. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:22 PM · On: New Heat and Old Flames
Aww a jealous Edward! LOL Glad these two are managing to talk out their difference of opinions and to be frank I'm a bit glad that Jake is on the bodyguard detail, especially if there's some corruption inside, Bella's gonna need him!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
YAY, i don't mind misunderstandings when they are dealt with quickly. what i hate is the: i'm so upset that i can't even fight with you bull that lasts forever and is complete with interfering "helping" friends that are actually helping keep them apart longer. so glad you didn't do that. keep up the great writing. can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
damn good chapter, I life the fiesty bella
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Bonding and Plotting
Ooohhh and the plot thickens! Love the lovey dovey relationship w/ B&E, but more excited to see what happens next with James!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Yaaaay!!! I'm clapping my hands like a 3 year old!
Reviewer: rfortu01 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
i am really loving this story. its great.
rene
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
great chapter keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
shit u cant just leave me like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:25 PM · On: The Unexpected
that was hot!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:57 PM · On: New Heat and Old Flames
i love long chapters so no worries!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
love the drama! hope Bella forgives him.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
So I found this story this afternoon and I am already inlove with it. I love that this story has everyone in different jobs and not in forks. Can't wait to keep reading good job so far
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
With Emmett & all their friends knowing the truth, they should have no problem convincing her. Shoot tanya herself even said what happened & that she kissed him. So unless this Bella is pathetic or refuses to listen, (or Trager gets her 1st) all should be fine.
Can't believe she took off! Most of us REAL women woulda confronted his sorry a** & took the bitch out!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
OH MY GAWD!!
Kill me with the mother of all cliffies why don't you. I see how it is!
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I'm sorry I take it all back, I love it!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:06 PM · On: The Unexpected
Oh man!! I'm surprised he didn't up & quit! Wow go Andy!!
Glad Bella saw Trager & is now taking Edward seriously about the possible danger
Oh this is getting good!
Reviewer: snj2391 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Im not going to yell yet...Love your story though
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