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Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:34 PM · On: For the First Time
Well DAMN!!! That was fuckin HOT, girl! I am a swooning mess who may have to go molest my sleeping husband after that...
Excellent song choices! Also, I don't live far from Lake Forest, and it's suddenly become a hell of a lot sexier than I ever thought of it before! However, thinking back to the prologue, something tells me this steamy happiness will give way to Angst Central very soon...
Kudos on the chapter...WELL worth the wait!! Now hurry with more! ;)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:28 PM · On: For the First Time
i really hope she moves in with edward...
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Finally Edwards head is at least headed in the right direction! sheesh
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:44 PM · On: For the First Time
Looooooooooooooooooove the lemon! It was awesome! One of the best I've read... woo hoo! Can't wait to see what life is like when they return to Chicago ....
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:27 PM · On: For the First Time
Wow that was h-o-t!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:18 PM · On: For the First Time
wow! that was hot!
i hope she agrees to move in with him... i feel like a ring might be coming~ it's just a feeling.
amy
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:00 PM · On: For the First Time
Holy fucking shit that was hotttt, damn where can I find a edward like that, I love it. Can't wait to see what happens when they get home
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:39 PM · On: For the First Time
Well, that was one amazing night!!! I've never had a man try so hard for me....have you???
Author's Response: Not quite that hard, but my hubby did a pretty sweet job of wooing when we were first getting together. Unfortunately with marriage the romance sort of disappeared :( But during that first year, he was forever doing sweet things sort of like that for me. *sigh* When he proposed he actually printed out flying hearts that I had to follow up the staircase to his bedroom where he left hearts all of the bed and on the headboard was a silk flower arrangement he made himself, a basket full of chocolates, and to CD's I really wanted. (it was valentine's day) He had wanted to propose that night, but a blizzard kept him from getting out to his mom and dad's in the country to pick it up. So instead he printed out a picture of the ring, cut a hole in it and used it to propose instead. It was so sweet!!! I'll remember it as long as I live :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:22 PM · On: For the First Time
*Looks at screen worried it's going to burst into flames!* Dear Lord honey that was one HOT HOT HOT HOT NIGHT!!! Is it warm in here? I see snow out my window but do believe it's warm. That first time was definatly worth the wait
Author's Response: LOL...I'm glad you approved. I couldn't drag out their sexual tension for so long without coming through for them when they finally got around to getting to business! LOL! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:13 PM · On: For the First Time
wow, i hope she moves in with him, keep up the great writing
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 11:55 AM · On: For the First Time
that was amazing btw but r u gonna do tha chapter again from epov??!! please!!!
wtm
Author's Response: No, I thought about it originally, but I was afraid it would be boring to do that, so I never did. I just finished my last polish of the next chapter and am about to put it in the queue :)
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment
love that bells and ed are going to such trouble to help tanya
wtm
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:38 AM · On: For the First Time
wow - that was just beautiful and well worth the wait!!!!!
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:36 AM · On: For the First Time
That was beautiful, romantic, hot, and every girls fantasy come true. AMAZING !!! i've read the chapter, three times already becasue it was soooo good!
and the fact that you update for us so often is also AMAZING :)
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
great song list, love it.
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:49 AM · On: For the First Time
awwww, it was the perfect first time.
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
much better, thank you very much.
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
omg. wtf.... going crazy here. i know you said there is a purpose, but damn they just starting living in bliss. please dont let this drama play out toooooo long. dont think my nerves can take it.
Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:00 AM · On: For the First Time
I love this story.. can't wait til you catch us up to the prologue.
Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:50 AM · On: For the First Time
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!! That was Perfect, Powerful, hot, hot, hot hot, very romantic, perfect and did I mention HOT!!!! Thank you, this was the best chapter ever!
They are both so perfect!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:09 AM · On: For the First Time
what a change for Edward
makes me all ooey gooey inside ... yum!
Reviewer: chloeswan (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 08:01 AM · On: For the First Time
ahhh so romantic!!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:58 AM · On: For the First Time
OMG that was an awesome "Friday" on a Monday morning if ever there was one! LOL This is truly an underappreciated story and if I was savvy enough to figure out how to do those banner thingys in my signature this would be the story I'd put, but I'll just have to say by word of mouth that this story is truly awesome and deserves the highest praise! And thank you so much for updating so often! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:51 AM · On: For the First Time
omg!! *sniff, sniff* that was so sweet!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 06:43 AM · On: For the First Time
OMG! Is he going to rent out the Plaza for the proposal? Geeez! I'm going to make my husband read this as a how to manual for romantic evenings. The lemons were good too! Fortunately for me, my hubby does fine on his own there! LOL Really good chapter! Now I suppose the feces will hit the fan... =]
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