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Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:41 PM · On: For the First Time

That was a good first night!   Sorry it took me so long to read it!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Things couldn't get any better with them fabulous chapter!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

I love it!!! Cant wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

love this chapter, i so could picture edward looking all james dean.

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

 I love how you did this chapter specially the rock band stuff, I so suck at that  but I can sing so that saves it kinda....not really. Good work

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Wow Bella and Edward are one heck of a sexy couple!  I love these two, I just know some angst is coming but from what I have seen they should be able to pull through together.

How soon till we get to the prologue?  Is it coming soon, because that sounds like an intense chapter!

Love the Banner!!!

Author's Response:

Prologue is coming up really fast...expect it in the next few chapters...I'm not saying exactly when and giving away the suspense...but it's SOON!

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

They just keep getting hotter and hotter...and I love how Bella is becoming more and more confident as their relationship evolves with her own PERSONAL Slutward...LOL...keep it comin''re doing an awesome job with the story and I love it!

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Rose is lucky! It takes me about five minutes to get pregnant person dumpiness! LOL Very nice, I didn't see the baby thing coming. I'm wondering how we're going to get back around to the first chappie now. You are clever, aren't you?

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Great chapter. I'm glad Trager seems to be getting closer to being caught but with what happened in the prologue I'm still a little worried.

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars


Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

HOLY Fuckin Hell that was one awesome battle of the bands!! It was awesome and listening to your playlist while reading really put me in the mood to Jam as I read. Thank YOU!!!

Author's Response:

that was just a taste...the battle doesn't come until much later and turned out pretty good if I do say so myself :)  Most chapters I feel iffy about when I'm done with them, but the battle I didn't feel that way at all :)  Right now they are just promoting the idea to gain interest.

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

Amazing! I do have a question though, why doesn't Tanya just move into Edwards building, I mean he owns it right?

Author's Response:

At this point, the apartments are all full.  That won't always be the'll see.  

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars

The back can be pretty hot... it is much ignored in fanfics and stories in general...  something about the sensitive skin around the shoulder blades...  *shivers* 

So... Traeger is gone.. kind of... I have a strong feeling he has something to do with the prologue.   What other trials will our favorite B&E go through besides what happened with the prologue?  Or should I ask, how long do you plan on this story being?  I can see all kinds of other dilemmas that crop up eventually...

*yay* for Em and Rose! :)

Author's Response:

I"m nearly done and right now it looks like it will be 58 chapters plus and epilogue....but I have been known to underestimate the chapters from time to time.  When I first started I never expected it to be longer than 40 chapters...LOL!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:32 PM · On: For the First Time

I love it!!! I have been so obsessed with this story ever since I found it!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:29 PM · On: For the First Time

Wow!!!!!! It's about time they got to have some sexin'. Now she just needs to say yes about moving in.

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 08:10 AM · On: For the First Time

loving that i dont have to wait a long time for next chapter...cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:30 AM · On: For the First Time

great part

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:33 AM · On: For the First Time

So beautiful! I loved every part of it! Edward is so sweet, bella really changed him for the better! You are an amazing author

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:11 AM · On: For the First Time

Wow that was... wow. Definitely worth the wait. Damn it Edward why aren't you real?! Hope Bella agrees to move in with him. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: weaverfamily09 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:31 AM · On: For the First Time

Oh and I agree with KTCullen, I will now have to go and molest my sleeping husband!

Reviewer: weaverfamily09 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:27 AM · On: For the First Time

YAY!!! You just made me a very happy smut loving woman! amazing!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:49 AM · On: For the First Time

great chapter!! update soon!

Reviewer: Anamika (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:29 AM · On: The Day From Hell

I am all for impulse control problems in my authors. Thanks!

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 01:34 AM · On: For the First Time

Well DAMN!!! That was fuckin HOT, girl!  I am a swooning mess  who may have to go molest my sleeping husband after that...

Excellent song choices! Also, I don't live far from Lake Forest, and it's suddenly become a hell of a lot sexier than I ever thought of it before!  However, thinking back to the prologue, something tells me this steamy happiness will give way to Angst Central very soon...

Kudos on the chapter...WELL worth the wait!! Now hurry with more! ;)

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 12:28 AM · On: For the First Time

i really hope she moves in with edward...

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