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Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

Oh good. Hopefully now they can both move pas the emo guilt-fest stage of 'I'm no good, it's b/c of me, You should leave me' blah blah blah. I love this story. I know I say that all the time, but it's so true! =]

One question, and not that I expect an answer: are they going to be pulled apart again by any crappy situations or misunderstandings? Gah! I don't knwo if my mental health can take it.

And I still say the crime boss is Elizabeth's new hubby, as well as Tanya was with James... that's how he knew about her. Yes, I'm suspicious! you should be around me in RL!

LOVE this story! Please update soon. Last thing I'm gonna say. =]

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

love the update:)

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

you are awesome..3 chapters updated so soon...thank you!

Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

I was excited to see a update when I woke up this morning YEAH!! I am in tears though, great chapter. I love seeing bella with esme that was awesome keep it up

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:05 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

Aw man!! Not Edward!! Dang it! & Bella made it out without even a scratch!

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

i hope he wakes up soon!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Underneath It All

Ohhh so here we go!!

Reviewer: photo2008 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

WOW!!!!! I have to say this is one of the best stories I have come across. i am addicated to this story as i was to books wanting to know what happens next asap. You do a great job!!!!Hope you update soon can't wait to see waht happens next.

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

well, of course Edward will survive!  And they will have a stronger relationship because of it!  I sure hope they catch Trevor, that guy needs to get his balls blown off the pansy ass!!!  Grrr, so glad we had those to chapters back to back, I might have hunted you down if you hadn't ;)

Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

So happy to see an update so soon! This is one of my fav fics and am glad to hear there is still lots to go!

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

loved it!!!!!! one of the best chapters yet. especially liked bella's memory and she realized that he was feeling that connection but didn't really know what to make of it because he did not want to admit, even to himelf, that he could see her that way 

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Focus Fluctuations

*Breathes a sigh of relief* All I can say is Thank You that Edward will recover in less than a year. This whole chapter was a rollarcoaster of emotion for me. The angel kiss flashback was priceless, I loved it...I LOVE IT ALL!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:42 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

.... I'm crying, this is soo good. I'm just so attached to these characters, they are like my friends!

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:40 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

cannot wait for the next update, i freaking love this story.  love thew new banner.

Reviewer: M-O-N-I-C-A (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:21 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

im crying n ur awsome mke the wedding a fary tale...tons of love from ur #1 fan in norCal

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:40 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

oh no, DRAMA!!!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:34 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

i love that new banner!! update soon!! great chapter!

Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:25 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

OMG... Talk bout a cliff hanger... This is not nice at all to leave us all hangin' with Sexward's life in danger :( HURRY and update next chapter soon, please, please, please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Underneath It All

evil evil evil cliffy ... and a horrible one at that

love the way Edward takes care of Bella when she's an emotional wreck, but now he's gotta save her

thankfully the next  chapter is already up so I'm off to read it too

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:00 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

OMG that was an awesome chapter, but I have faith in you that Edward is going to be fine. Surely they can't come this far to have one of them die. Can't wait for more!!! Love this story!

Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:55 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

this story is awesome......but i wont be getting any sleep tonight now that i read it.

what a cliffhanger

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Underneath It All


Reviewer: annierw (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:37 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

HOLY HELL..that was awesome!!! I love this story...Please let this story have a happy ending!!

Author's Response:

Don't worry...I drag them through a ton of muck, but I'm a big fan of the Happily Ever After....or at least the realistically happily ever after.  :)

Reviewer: flossy_00_05 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:17 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss

I just wanted to say that I love your story. This one had me on the edge of my seat. It also made me a little teary eyed.

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Underneath It All

uh oh, here we go! Can't wait!!!

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