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Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Crankward

I can appreciate Edward being a bitch, but still, That's no bueno!!  Thank goodness for Bella, but we knew there was going to be another bump in the road, so continue on my dear!

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Crankward

Yeah, pain plus not getting any equals dickward!! LOL Nicely done, but I seriouslly hope the jackass Peds guys gets his. Oh, and also that Edward's got a fucking sterling reason for giving our girl the boot!

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Crankward

awwh, everybodys frustrated :[

sigh, hope bella shows tht jerk of a doctor! :P

top 10? wow...wheee more to read! :DDD

Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Crankward

cant blame the poor sod, it would suck being in a cast with people poking at you all day!

Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster

how heartbreaking!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

OMG I just love the fact that you put in one of my favorite show!! I love Psych!!! Thank you Thank you Thank You!!! Your Bella is an amazing person and Edward is just so damn suportive that it warms my heart. I cant wait to see how this all works out for them. One question though...how did Trager know Tanya was pregnant?



Author's Response:

YOu learn that answer to that mystery next chapter :)  Glad to see another psych lover!

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Equivalency

Good chapter, Bella is steadly making progress which is good.  Glad the nightmares are starting to subside Edward could use the sleep so that he and continue healing.

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Disturbed

awsome new banner!!!! great chapter love bells emotion!!!

wtm

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Equivalency

I'm glad to see Bella is slowly recovering her PTSD with and without Edward right by her side. She needs to trust herself again and regain her own strength, which she will with time, but she's coming to the realization that her family, friends and especially Edward will be there for her through everything, but that she also has the strength and will to get through it herself! Great chapter!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 03:11 AM · On: Equivalency

Wow we had Mama Esme not we got a dose of Papa Carlise!  Don't mess with those Cullen parents!

I absolutely love this story! 

Well knowing Edwards personality he his going to blow his top soon since he obviously isn't being allowed to rest to much and we all know he isn't the type to just lay around and do nothing!

Can't wait to see that!

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Equivalency

    So Bella gets to continue on... good for her. Thanks.

Happy to see that Rose and Emmett are getting things ready for their little one.

Can't wait until Edward gets released.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Equivalency

Great chapter - good to see Bella working it out, but not magically cured! Also glad that you showed some different personalities in Edward's co-workers. Not all of them will be so taken with Bella that they'll be respectful. Even though she is awesome. The compromise seems like it makes a lot of sense and I'm glad that she'll be getting back to work soon. It'll help the story progress and help her find a way to work through the memories the more active she is... Never saw Psych but you give a good summary. I like Monk and House, so it sounds like a similar type that I would like. :)

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Equivalency

You know, when I saw that Carlisle was one of the three on Bella's review I wondered whether he would be considered too close to her to be objective. There's a reason family members are restricted in that sense. Sure, he's not actually related to her, but he's known her for a while, and since she's living with Edward, wouldn't that make her his de-facto daughter-in-law (or niece)?

Which is not to say he couldn't be objective (obviously he could), but the perception of objectivity is as important as the objectivity in question. Mind you, I loved it when he took Dr Vandis to task.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Equivalency

great chapter;)

Reviewer: kellbell0 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Equivalency

just informing you

both psych and bones have made it across the pond on pay tv :)

and that im totes loving carlisle in this chapter !!!

Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Equivalency

Love the update!  keep it coming!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Equivalency

oh, thank goodness Bella still gets to be a DR!!!

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Equivalency

Love me some Bones.  It is one of my favorite shows too!  Glad Bella got to stay in her internship... great chapter!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Equivalency

I smile when I realize that Bella isn't being penalized further because of such a horrible traumatic experience. Excellent chapter ... and so pleased to see your blog. I bookmarked it :) I'm gonna have to watch it for your future stories ... and partake of some of your previous ones.

Eager, as always, to see the next chapter!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Equivalency

i am so happy for bella... that she doesn't have to repeat her intern year!

Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Equivalency

Way to go for Carlisle standing up for Bella.

Reviewer: GarrettsGirl (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Equivalency

oh, my god! i love that show so much! i'm not home when it plays, but we record it, and i watch every single episode! most amazing TV show ever. i love the USA channel in general.

another show you might like if you like psych is monk. it's also about a detectve, but he's older, a widow, OCD, and extremely phobic of everything. like, when he walks down a street, he has to touch all the posts, but then he has to wipe off his hands. so his ability to notice little things that aren't right, because of the OCD, is why he's such a great detective.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Equivalency

Great chapter! I doubt I would be progressing any better than Bella, but she is doing very well all things considered. I love how Edward threatened to kick that guys ass once he was all better. I also love the way Dr. Kellison and Carlisle tore into the other doctor for not wanting to promote Bella. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Equivalency

Make way for Dr. Swan!  Poor Eddie.  Can someone get him some pain meds please?  I'm glad Bella is letting him sleep tonight.

Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 06:19 AM · On: The Day From Hell

I love that you have impulse contol problems. I usually wait to read a story until it has 90k plus words because I get so into it I can't stop. thanks for feeding my habit!

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