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Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Gearing Up and Getting Off
ACK!! I havbe to go check out your profile now! I forget if you said you had pics up of her dress etc.
Author's Response: Oh...I have pics of her dress, but I'm saving them utnil the wedding chapter....you get to see it the same day Edward does...I know...I'm mean :)
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:15 PM · On: On The Hot Seat
awesome very emotional. Swept me right along with it. as always very good.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 10:05 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
Wow... Varner is one evil SOB. I'm glad that Bella was able to stand up to him even if it was extremely hard to do.
When Emmett wasn't in the courtroom, I didn't even think abotu Rosalie. I hope she will be okay!
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Pressure
utoh! I wonder why her knowing how to shoot/charlie teaching her would adversely affect their side.... hmmm
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Rock On
absolutely breathless! I wish that I could have actually SEEN that happen!!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 07:46 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
She is so brave.
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:42 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
I knew Rose and the baby were the reason Emmett wasnt there.
Reviewer: emabuell (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 06:20 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
This story is amazing. you write it very well! I'm sad to see the end is near but i am so in love with this story that I look forward to the rest!!!!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Gearing Up and Getting Off
Wow ... excellent phone sex & love the surprise return!
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:35 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
I creid with Bella, I cursed with Edward and I screamed with joy when Demetri made his finally point. I developed preeclampsia with both of my pregnancies and know all will work out fine with Rosalie. Besides, no one could expect you to add thagt much drama to their lives with everything else that has happened. Right??? I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:32 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
Good job witha tough chapter. I loved the thought of E kneeling waiting for her. So Hot! I would love to be her. :) The court part was good as well. As usual I send my thanks for the fun chapter.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 04:04 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
i hope bellas side wins, and the baby is ok!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 02:58 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
Great chapter. I'm glad the first half of the trial is over and Bella's given her account of that day. Hope Rose has a safe delivery. Can't wait to read more. Hope they can win the case. Please update soon.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 02:47 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
This is a pet peeve of mine, people who sue other people or companies for the sake of suing or getting an easy buck!
Well written chapter though I don't know legalize either so you did good!
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 02:41 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
As a lawyer in training i can offically say that i enjoyed this chapter greatly. I always get excited whe i see that you've updated. It makes my day. When you said that Emmett wasn't there i knew it had something to do with rose and the baby. That would be the only thing that would have kept him away. Now i have to wait to know about Rosalie and the end of the trial! uh! please update soon!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:47 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
I just hope Rose and Emmalie are going to be okay. Pre-eclampsia is not a good thing.
Man I wanted to throttle Varner! It's lawyers like him that give the legal system a bad name! (I made my legal studies teacher crack up when I first did the subject--she asked what the first thing we thought of when we thought of Law, and I said something along the lines of "lawyers finding loopholes to get clients off.")
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:24 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
Great chapter! That Varner guy is a jackass. I'd love to smack him a couple of times. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: jasonsbaby (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Gearing Up and Getting Off
i really kike this story i cant wait until you update again please please do it soon thanks
Reviewer: nycbella (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Gearing Up and Getting Off
I have been reading this story for the last 3 days and I have not been able to put it down. I am no literary critic, but I would have to say that you are an Awesome writer. You truly kept me interested and hungry for more.
Your story line has been well though and it's development it's just Greeeeeaaaaaaaat!!!!!
I LOVE IT......
UPDATE SOON PPPPLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE!
Reviewer: Dum-Da-Dum17 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I love this story and I LOVE how you write. It's so heartfelt, real and exciting!
Reviewer: teamjacobxxx (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Gearing Up and Getting Off
this is actually my first review but as you're getting so near the end of this story i felt i just had to comment!
this is without doubt my favourite twific ever! you're an amzing writer and i will be so sad when it's over but i know you've probably got this amzing perfect ending and i can't wait to read it!
i also can't wait for those one shots at the beach house - please do them!!
i love this story and thankyou for writing it!
Reviewer: fan (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Perfection
You know i have read alot of stories that take place in chicago, but you are the first to actually put places that actually exsit now when i drive by them i think about your story. I have a feeling you might live here or have lived here in the past. i always wanted to go to La Luce but never went i hope ur right and there lasagna is great i will tryit out and let you know.
By the was your story is great. can't wait to keep reading it
Author's Response: Thanks. I've never lived in Chicago, but I do live downstate and have visited quite a few times. Between that and a little net research to refresh my memory or bring a few more details to sweeten the plot, I've been able to do a passable job I guess...lol. Please let me know about LaLuce. If it's as great as everyone says, I may have to make a point in going there next time we hit the city! Thanks and I hope you enjoy the rest!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Gearing Up and Getting Off
I wondered if the 'Getting Off' part of the chapter title had anything to do with a lemon!
Never mind Bella needing to laugh, I totally cracked up at the mental image of Edward telling Emmett to back off, defending his right to have phone sex with his fiancé. It was about time though. Understanding Emmett's desire to protect his baby sister and not want details of her sex life, that's one hell of a double standard.
I hope to have my story(ies) finished soon, but I keep running short of time when I can write, and hot, humid weather is not conducive to writing (especially when it's by hand, which a lot of my stories are)
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Puppet Master J
The boys and the girls are pullin a fast one... I really enjoyed Jaspers POV.. So sweet with Alice and his comments about Edward had me rollin. Can't wait to see how the night progresses.
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
"The boy is a lost little puppy, for lack of a better analogy. One day he'll grow up, but until then he's going to piss all over the carpet and give you, puppy dog eyes in apology, before doing it all over again" I loved this! HAHAHAHHA! Great and so true for Edward here...
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