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Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 12- Help Me
Okay the boss is in a meeting WOO HOO!!!!! So I got to read this amazing chapter. I just loved this chapter from his pov. So damn heartbreaking how he was feeling. Awwwww he is in love with her. He needs not to worry she loves you to idiot!!!!! Bwahahaha. I think the talk with Lizzy helped him a lot. She needed to knock some sense into him. I loved the fact that he never took his eyes off of her. Awwwwww *swoon* Playing the guitar watching her. Damn it this is sweet. I can't wait for her to come back inside so they can talk. I also loved that he made her lunch and tea and wasn't going to eat it until she was back with him. Talk about devotion. Such a sweetheart. You have to give me more of his pov's I love them. Looking forward to getting to the next chapter. *looks around corner* boss is still in a meeting. After I hit submit going to next chapter.
Oh by the way. Thanks for the email. I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!!!! Damn surprise me more like that. I love surprises!!! *hint hint*
Author's Response: Aww! thank yo so much bb!
I am LOVING writing in his POV! so there are more...and will be posting them as outtake series eventually- but for now they are teasers and rewards for certain chappies.. Hey I'm not below bribes! hahaha!
So glad you likes this chapter. i loved writing it. I ove me a sensitive and devoted Rob! GAH!
thanks hun! see yo on the next one!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
No death threats but a general "AWESOMENESS" vote from me! I wondered whether we would ever see a RPattz fic that has this type of angst. (JTO is my fave with angst but this comes CLOSE) How truly heartless of Rob! Don't know whether I like your written version of the man right now. Poor Jen! I hope she comes up from the ashes and shows him!
WOW!
Update NOW, Please!!!!
Author's Response: OMgoodness! thank you so much- to put me even in the same sentence as JTO, i am truly humbled.
I love to read angst, but it was hard to write this with all of you in mind. I have a true appreciation for good angst writers now!
And it's ok if you don't like Rob right now... all will be answered very soon inthe next chapter- which i am submitting today- so we should see it hopefully before new years.
thank you so much for supporting my little story. You guys overwhelm me!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
What the hell? You left it there???? Fuck me....
Angst is good. Nobodies life is all chocolates and roses. It gives you something to fight for. Lets you know your alive and not livin in a dream.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review and rating.
I couldn't have said it better- life is a trial. and sometimes it absolutely overtakes you in the worst way.But you rise from it.
Stronger and more determined.
Update is coming soon! with answers i promise!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
Ok, I'm back. I decided to post a second review (and I promise, it won't become a habit) instead of a reply to Steph.
Part of the reason this chapter was so hard to read, and what I ignored in my last review, was Jen's reaction.
I went through a similar breakup many years ago, and I remember it well still. Eight years of dating and one engagement ending suddenly, too much around to serve as a reminder, etc. Differences, other than the amount of time together? I had friends who supported me with more than the occasional lunch. Still, I remember the cycle -- only mine was eat/sleep/soap operas. (Yep, that one works really well if you have someone else to go get the snack food for you!)
Anyway, Steph nailed it, and I wanted to acknowledge that in a review. Good job, girl.
Author's Response: Thank you my dear. You brought me to tears...
My first love (not so coincidently named Mike) crushed me several years ago. so the feelings, while so long ago, were there... am i cheating by telling you all this... that this isn't some grand work of fiction that i pulled outta my patooty?
No...the tearing pain and utter loneliness, the empty shell- that was me for some time...high school sweetheart. ended in a letter from Okinawa... thought he was the one... which is why New moon is my fav... the catharsis involved in feeling these feelings is intense, and yet, i feel better for it...
my mode was work/sleep/maybe eat. I became a workaholic and shut off my emotions... cold hearted bitch for years... until i found my hub... it took 10 years to find him...
so i heart you hard. i know how it feels. this chapter really set me into a depression since writing it. i have just realized (this morning) that i was depressed because i wrote this a month ago and have let it sep into my soul until it posted- and i was so sure you all would hate me...
so thank you. for trusting me, for the wonderful feedback..seriously i am crying right now... i love you guys so much.
and I'll get us through this. i promise.
big hugs!
steph
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I am crying. It is as if he broke my hear too.
Author's Response: Thanks my dear! I am sorry you are crying (but I am also happy- isn't that sick?!).
poor jen and rob...
updates coming!
thanks!
steph
Reviewer: lillred (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1-Hostage Situation
She isn't able to have kids???That's what docs told my sis in law..I now have 2 nephews and a neice....
Author's Response: ooooh! you get my thoughts going!
My thought so far and they have been vague because i don't have the mediical research completed yet....
The doctors told her the damage to her reproductive organs from the accident was extensive enough to prevent her from having kids..maybe they removed her ovaries, maybe more... i haven't done enough to make it concrete in the story. only that she was told she would never have kids again.
i have been researching hysterectomies, and have found that that route would be difficult for Jen... and jeez hasn't seh been through enough.
but your idea puts ideas in my head... although i am not sure i could handle the drama of 23 year old rob having a kid....
hmmmm...thanks for responding back.. i hope i don't sound like i am short changing you with this....
thanks
steph
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 11- Hearts
Damn girl!!!!! *still looking around for boss* I really have to wait to read this when I'm not at work. Smut so much smut!!!! not good while at work, not good at all. FUCK ME!!!!! Him making her breakfast awww so sweet. Then bloody hell the smut!!! Food everywhere!!! *THUD* The bath was sweet, but when she ran away the look on his face *sniff sniff* WTF WHY THE HELL DO YOU HAVE TO RUN!!!!!!!! Well what the hell am I talking about, my characters run too. Okay I understand!!!!!! Go on Rob go find her this instant. DAMN IT GO BRIT-BOY!!!!!!!! Loved the chapter. Will try to get another one done.
Author's Response: heehee!
Yeah,,,smut is hard to read at work ain't it? my students get a giggle out of my intense face when they see me reading it in the corner of the theatre (honestly i have lots of dead time during tech rehearsals... i need the diversion- but apparently I make a face...who knew?!)
thanks for the comments. glad your boss is still MIA! hahaha!
and yes.. he needs to go after her and tell her how he really feels!
thanks for the review and rating bb!
steph
Reviewer: LetMeLove (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
omg. I loved this chapter. It was so well written. I cried and I felt the emptiness that she was feeling. Great job. And I think the woman is totally Rob's mom. I thought it would be Stephanie, but then I saw "sea of green". same eyes as Rob. I would like to read a Rob's POV for what was going on but that may take away from her pain and agony any lonliness. I hope you can update soon!!!! pretty pretty please
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I haven't stopped crying this morning, and I am truly overwhelmed by everyone's responses.
I am conentrating on earlier RPOVs-working my way thru so i can post them as a seperate story- but I DEFINITELY WILL be writing this period of time in his POV. i may even start today- as you all have just overwhelmed me- in the best of ways.
so thank you. and the update is coming- submitting today!
steph
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
Soooo not nice. That was heartbreakingly difficult to get through. Please update soon & explain!
Author's Response: I promise my dear! answers in the next chapter...
and it is coming... super quick turnaround. submitting it this morning, so we should see it very soon!
heart you!
steph
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 10-Realizations
Okay I'm trying to catch up while I'm at work. *looking around for boss* God I hate this sneaking around crap. Anyways, I enjoyed this chapter and the little snippet from Rob's POV. Awwww that was so damn sweet that they are both dreading the end of their time together. Damn I really enjoyed the loving on the porch. Damn that was sexy as hell. I also loved their convo about their lives. *looking again for boss* Well I would wright more, but I don't want to get caught here. Alright another down I think I have 11 chapters to go FUCK!!!!!!!!! I hate getting behind. Great chapter!!!!!
Author's Response: heeheehee! thank you my dear! glad you liked the RPOV!
as a reward... sending you a little love via email as thanks for reviewing chapter 10!
mmmm.porch lovin... (god it seems like so long ago!)
*poking head up, looking for your boss too...giggles*
thanks hun! see you on the next one!
steph
Reviewer: jmink (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I just wanted to let you know how GREAT this story is !!! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm thinking the woman has to be Rob's mom ?!?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and rating!
You guys have made me so emotional with all your reviews! thank you so much!
I am so glad you are loving this story!
the new chapter will be up very soon! promise!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I will not threaten you with dead! If anything you have written this chapter very well, cause I'm really mad! I don't have words for what Rob did.
I don't care what kind of excuse Rob has, he should have called her. There is always a phone available, from a friend or even a payphone. If he really wanted to contact her he could have. He knows her phonenumber, where she lives, her store, her internetname etc. Even if he wanted to break off contact, he could at least be a gentleman about it. She's done nothing but go out of her way to please and protect him. The way he handled this is really effed-up. I don't think it was his original intention, but apparently things have changed in his time apart from Jen (probably Nick and the paparazzi-attack). I'm guessing Rob pulled an Edward after being accosted by the paparazzi, in deciding he would protect Jen from his world by making a clean break He was probably cheered on by Nick who didn't like the relationship to begin with.
I think Jen let him in too deep, too fast and she's paying the price now. She shouldn't try to hang on to Rob so much, it will only prolong her suffering. Not to say I wouldn't do the same, it's always easy to know best when it doesn't involve you personally. I can really feel her pain and despair, you wrote that perfectly.
As for the mystery woman, guessing from your explicit description of a lilting voice and green eyes it's Rob's sister or mother! On the other hand it's hard to picture it, cause why would they visit a girl with whom Rob has spent not even a fortnight? On the other hand nobody but his family and Nick knew about them being together.
Please update soon, suspence is killing me!
Author's Response: My.... I was so touched and awed by your review, i red it 2 times before responding. Thank you soo much for your words...I am glad you are mad- really.it hurts me but it fills me with awe as well that I could convey the feelings necessary for so many of you to react.
I couldn't sleep last night, up till 230, then up at 630 to check on you guys....
Your comments about Rob are so touching... yes... he had her phone number...
surely he should be a gentleman and call her to at least dump her... and the comment about him pulling an Edward- love it... truly i do- with the right influence (i.e. Nick) he could be persuaded... of course he is also a very strong willed young man who doesn't like to be told what to do.......
Jen is in way too deep... I suspect she haas been in love with some form of Rob since before she met him.. and really- wo wouldn't fall hard for him once he is there with you? i know it would be hard for me....I am so happy to hear you could feel her pain- it touched me deeply as well. I have been so depressed since writing this chapter- it took me until last night when i started reading your reviews to see it...
I promise there is resolution...I promise there are answers in the next chapter...
I love your theories and comments on the mystery woman...you are exactly right... why would his family come see her if he left her and it was just a fling.... but who else is there? but maybe.....
update is coming. i am submitting this morning... i can't stand having you all suffer... i really can't .
Thank you so much for your review! I am truly humbled by you guys!
hugs and kisses!
steph
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
gah! Who took Rob's phone!!!!????
I think it's one of Rob's sisters.
Author's Response: Ooooooooohhhh! your theories are INTRIGUING!
Thanks for your review! the update will be up very soon!
steph
Reviewer: lillred (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I'll bet she's pregnant
Author's Response: GASP!
oh my goodness... that would be a big twist!
but alas... she is unable to have kids...but wow! that would be HUGE!
thanks so much for reading! you guys are the best readers EVER!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: EMCullen17 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I just wanted to add to my last review. When I re-read it wasn't very flattering. I meant that her pain (and mine!) is so awful. You've captured it beautifully and it is written so well--that's why everyone is feeling so much for this story.
Author's Response: I figured I would respond to your second review more than the first, as this one made me cry! nono..well maybe a little, but for good reason!
NO offense taken a tall from last review. It's funny by beta was IM'ng me while she read it and words like THIS IS AWFUL! and THIS is HORRIBLE kept coming across the web... and i thought (small voice)- really? sad face.... but no, when felt what you felt and what many of you are feeling and i jUST LOVE YOU GUYS FOR IT!
I love you guys, so much. and to have you all react so strongly to this story. honestly there have been 32 reviews in less than 12 hours and that is without bribes!
I am absolutely humbled by you guys.
so thank you so much... I'll make this right i promise....
The next chapter is being submitting today- so it will be up soon!
Thank you so much for your support!
Reviewer: EMCullen17 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
WTH!!!! This is so awful, I didn't think it would get worse after the last chapter--but it did!!!
What is going on with Rob? I am hoping that it is Nick sabotaging all of this and that it's not really Rob that just acted on a whim with her.
Is it his Mom? It must be Clare.
Please, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
Reviewer: Rismow (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
What happens next?? Please please update soon. Love this story - obviously I can't wait for more ..
Author's Response: Thank you my dear!
I am submitting the next chapter in a few hours... which means we should see it before the new year... maybe sooner...:)
thank you for your support in reading my little story! I heart u!
steph
Reviewer: jailer97 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
i couldnt even fully read the chapter...it was too heartbreaking. when i get the courage ill try again....awww, jen..arghhhh ROB!!..how could you?!
Author's Response: Oh my dear! find the courage... there is hope maybe at the end!
and i promise... the update is coming! you won't have to wait long!
and i love you for sending me 2 reviews on this chapter...
i heart you!
steph
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
Your location had better be not only undisclosed, but damn secure.
HOW could you DO this to US????? I have never been so distraught at a cliffhanger in my life! Only if you told me Rob's phone had been taken and someone else had written the text would I feel better now. But I don't think that's going to happen....
Ok, so either his mother or one of his sisters have dropped in for a little chat. Are you really going to make them wait a long time? Would you do that to Rob's family? Huh?
(Will guilt work where threats don't?)
-- Deb
Author's Response: "Honey? Did you lock the doors? and the windows? do you mind if i go sleep in the man cave tonight? I don't think they'll find me there..."
Oh Deb... How could I hurt the Pattinson family so?
I PROMISE. the next update is coming... being submitted and should post VERY soon. i couldn't leave you guys hanging for that long...
I am so sorry you were distraught (but the damn harpy in my head that thinks this crap up is jumping for joy- down you evil witch!)
I promise... the answers are in the next chapter.
i heart you... watch out for the booby traps i set by my front door....
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: jailer97 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
please update before the new year i NEED to know... im gonna go crazy until you update
Author's Response: I promise... the next chapter is done and being submitted in a few short hours... it will def be up before the new year...this is too heartbreaking to leave you guys until next year!
love you hard!
thanks for reviewing and reading!
steph
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
i think it was nicks idea to get rid of jen. rob just did what he thought was best for her.
Author's Response: OMg you are so cruel! heeheehee...
i love it!
thanks for the review and rating!
updating superquick! so answers soon!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: lillred (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
OMG OMG OMG You gotta update soon!!!! I LOVE this story!!!
Is it posted anywhere else??
Author's Response: I love you guys!
yep.. i am up at 130 in the morning my time, witha dreaded gym appointment in 7 hours... but i can't sleep, because I am so worried (and excited) to hear you all!
I will be submitting as soon as i get back from the gym, which hopefully means it will post before Tuesday or Wednesday.
i don't post anywhere else unfortunately.i am a twilighted H00r... but i promise...answers in the next chappy!
love you hard!
steph
Reviewer: Chime (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
OMG....I cried through the whole thing. It can't be Rob, it has to be Nick doing this I just can't figure out how. Please update soon, I don't think I can take too long of a wait.
Author's Response: Awww... i'm so sorry you cried thru the whole thing (the evil nasty harpy inside me though is jumping for joy-the evil witch!)
I love you all so much... your theories are great! all will be revealed in the next chappy- which will be up super quick I promise!
Thanks for the review and rating!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: MissMON_ika (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I'm crying buckets. My heart is broken. Excuse me while I drown in a pit of despair for poor Jen. :(
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and ranking!
i am crying right along with you for poor Jen!
Will be updating super quick!
hang in there!
xoxo
steph
Reviewer: Mischiefmaker17 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
Um, so mad at you right now...wtf is going on here...update soon, you're driving me crazy! Lol love this fic, must know what happens!
Author's Response: It's ok.. Be mad at me! i hate leaving you all like this I do!
Will be submitting tomorrow, so we should see an update super quick!
answers in the next chappy I swear!
thanks so much for reviewing and reading!
xoxo
steph
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