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Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Bloody Brilliant as always Steph!

I hope she does spend a HEAP of Nick's money hehe

More More More!! :D

Author's Response:


You'll see. I will have the totals for you guys in the A/N at the end of the chapter... heeheehee

more coming!

thanks for reading!


Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Absolutely loved this chapter.  My heart is flying.  Even though Rob and Jen have seriously had their hearts broken they are healing.  I enjoyed meeting Lizzy too.  And the phone conversations between Jen and Rob are perfect.  Looking forward to see how she spends Nick's money.  And I'm really looking forward to seeing Jen confront Nick.  I hope she lays him out.  Jerk!!!  I wonder what Rob's reaction will be? 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Yes they are healing.. and have some more to do once Rob finds out the whole story....

i love Lizzy... we'll see her again!

shopping is next so you'll get to see how well she does...

HAHAHA! I like your thinking... who wants to see Rob deck Nick? I wanna see Jen give him the old 1-2!

Oh...Rob's Reaction is coming... soon...

thanks my dear!



Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

I dont think Nick would be that horrible.. but if he as I'm dead sure Jen could deck him with a left hook ;)

Author's Response:

No real nick certainly wouldn't...unless maybe he was hurt somewhere in the past by an older woman....

he made a stupid choice by trying to protect Rob, maybe because he truly assumed she was not something serious...

And yes...*chuckle chuckle* she has a killer left hook....we might actually see it.... *grins*

thanks my dear!



Reviewer: LetMeLove (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

aww what a sweet chapter :)

nick better be showering her with gifts lol

Liz is such a sweetheart

cant wait for the next chapter!! you're awesome!!

Author's Response:

Hehehe! she's gonna have fun to be sure!

And Liz will be a good supporting character come London!

Next chapter coming soon! 

thanks so much for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Love it

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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Ooh, what a lucky gal!  She gets to send naughty pics to Rob, AND get a day at the spa and a personal shopper on Nick's dime.  ;-)

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response:

If only we were all that lucky! 

thanks for the review and rating!

shopping next!

xoxo steph

Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1-Hostage Situation


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Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

I admit I had been holding off reading this fic because of the heartfail I knew was coming.  I knew that I coudn't read it and not know what happened next to so I stopped reading after the chapter where Rob turned his cell back on.  I wanted to wait until all the angst was over (at least this part) because I don't handle it very well (I cry like a baby).  

I'm so happy to catch back up now. I hope Jen takes Nick to the cleaners and back. I am so looking forward to her self-discovery and I love the relationship that is budding between Lizzy and Jen!  I didn't miss Rob as much as I thought I would, but Lizzy helps. Plus, I enjoy Jen's character so much.  I truly felt her pain and I love the blog!!  Great work!! I love this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I understand about waiting. It is so hard for me as a reader to have to wait especially with heartfail... But i love the angst.. a good cry makes me feel better!

I'll be posting the Grand Total Jen spends on her shopping trip in the A/N of the next chapter... I had a lot of fun virtual shopping at SAKS!

Jen is going to figure out a few things while in London, and Lizzy will of course be around in London, so more time to bond!

Glad you found yourself not missing Rob as much... It was hard not writing him physically there with Jen... btuthat will make the reunnion that much better, right!?

Thanks for visiting the blog... It has been a lot of fun to create!

thanks for the review and rating! 

will update again soon!



Reviewer: diagirl01 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Yeah new chapter!

I finally was able to read it this morning, at work, all stealth like.. lol..

I must say though, as I was reading it and got to the phone call I was so freaking tearing up!!! lol, I'm such a dork. I really must not read fan fic at work... but Jen and Rob, finally, FINALLY talk! I just got so emotional and giddy for them. :)


And how cute are the texts!!! It was so hard not to laugh out loud and give myself away! Firs the tearing up and then the snorting in laughter, the good thing I'm being left alone, everyone is looking at me as if to say: don't draw attention to the crazy girl laughing and crying to herself. :) 

I know there is more to say but I'm just in "awwww" mode, I can't think! lol.. totally dazzeled.. *snicker* and now back to staring at the pretty on my phone and eating my lunch.

Looking forward to London!!! ;)



Author's Response:

LOL! glad there weren't any lemons... you would have really had a hard time!

Awww! I am so glad the phone calls and texts got to you! thye are definitely going to be a great way for these two to ACTUALLY TALK, rather than get sidetracked...hehehe...

and you know your co workers are over there playing pogo or Vampire Wars! so you go ahead and read and giggle! heeheehee

thanks so much for the review! 

London soon!


Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Great!  Still don't trust Nick though!

Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see more of Nick coming up...

but for next! oh I hope Jen can find her inner Alice...

thanks for reading Laura!



Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 23-Rescue Me

Loved Liz!  Great!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I love Liz! She'll be around more!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 22-Alone

Okay, so, clearly Nick somehow got ahold of Rob's cell phone. I'm surprised Jen never expected that maybe Nick had a hand in what was going on (or not going on, as it were).  And Rob's sad puppy dog face was clearly because, somehow, Nick managed to do something to make Rob believe she didn't want to see him anymore.  I think it was Rob's mom coming in, which will be interesting if true! Reading glad I got behind...Back to You coming some time this week now that I'm healthy again--I was sick as a dog since the 18th :(

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry you were sick! So glad you are better now!

can't wait for the new installment...

Yeah..jen should be thinking its Nick, right? she should be getting in that Mustang and driving her butt to LA, regardless of her internal issues with the city... but alas...silly girl... insecure as always... 

and Nick...yeah...he's sneaky enough to do something like that...

thanks Laura! 


Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 21-Goodbyes

This was just right for maximum heartfail!

Author's Response:

sigh... yes i like some hearty doses of angst and heartfail! heehee!

thanks for reading and reviewing!

anxiously waiting for your next chapter of Back To Us!



Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

I love this story so much.  Great chapter.  I started drinking Darjeeling, is that weird.  LOvvvveeeee!

Thank You,



Author's Response:


HAHAHAHA! who woulda thought... Glad I didn't go with orange Pekoe (although that is quite yummy too if not hard to find!)

Thanks for supporting this little story! and thanks for the review and rating!

next chapter will be up soon!



Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Great chapter again! Loved the texting. You give great banter! Suck it Nick (great idea by the way of his tab). Looking forward to the shopping and some more naughty texts!

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! I love the bantering... there will be more to be sure.. it's a good way for them to do the relationshippy stuff they didn't do while on the island...

Suck it Nick! I love it! thanks! I was really afraid most of you would think she was selling out... i am glad you guys understand she is not. This is the tip of the iceberg... Jen's going to be coming out of the corner with her gloves off!


Shopping next, and definitely more texts and phone calls!

thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: rc301258 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 23-Rescue Me

This is one of the best stories on this site. Thank you for sharing your talent and your creative mind with all of us! Jen reminds me a little bit of Bella, because you know how insecure Bella always acted. They both allowed one word from "Rob"/Edward destroy the best relationship they've ever had, well almost. Did you intend for this to happen or are the parallels that I've drawn between the two of them coincidences? Please let me know! 

Author's Response:

You made my blue monday! Thank you for such a wonderful compliment! I am truly humbled by it! It has been an awesome experience writing this, mainly because of the wonderful feedback and support of readers like you! and really I am not just blowing smoke.... I would have never gone as far as I have with this little story if not for all of you. SO THANK YOU FOR BEING SUCH A WONDERFUL READER!

Jen is a little Bella, maybe not intentionally (although I think a lot of us have some part of Bella in us). her insecurities definitely set her up for Bella-isms. But hopefully she can learn from it? I think losing Rob will make her stronger, more willing to fight for Rob (I never really got that so much from Bella. She was more willing to lay down her life...which is noble too... But I think Jen has a little more fiestiness in her to come...


Thank you so much for the review and rating! It really made my day today! thank you!



Reviewer: wendywhiner (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

So I checked out the blog and found it to be moving and can feel how lonely Jen is through her blogging and it makes the story that much more believable....very cool.

I also loved all the sexting going on and the fact that Jen gets to pamper herself and go shopping on Nicks dime is brilliant!!!  Can't wait for the reunion!!


Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am so happy you checked out the blog! It has been a nice tool for me during the process! Yes- you can definitely see the loneliness and respect Jen has for Rob. i really enjoyed the RTP entries...

Love technology today! even apart, they can be together! heehee it's going to help bring them together in a way they didn't on the island.

Shopping is going to be fun! I'll have the grand total she spent on the A/N at the end of next chapter.. i never had so much fun shopping!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Yeah!!!  What a wonderful chapter:)  I love Liz!!!!  She is my new favorite..well..other than Rob and Jen!!  I'm just so glad that she was there for Jen..and Rob.  I can't wait for the shopping and the spa..and of course..ROB!!!  But I can wait for him!  I'm just glad that Jen is getting some "Jen time"!

Until the next chapter....

Author's Response:


I love Liz too. i have been having such a great time writing the supporting characters! Can't wait til London with the whole Patti clan.

Liz is a good support for jen and Rob... she'll definitely be there for the two of them!

hahaha..i'm a little nervous about the shopping now! you all are so excited over it.... it was great fun to write and research! I'll leave a grand total of her shopping extravaganza inthe A/N for next chapter... it was funny to do some "virtual" shopping!

Next chapter real soon!



Reviewer: EMCullen17 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Love it!! I love all their banter back and forth--and the blog is just heartbreaking, in a good way.

Ugh--Nick! Although I would like to spend some of his money.

Another fantastic update!

Author's Response:


I think they are finally getting to that part all the rest of us do when we meet someone... The learning, the flirting the wanting....this separation will be a good thing for both of them...really

I'm glad you liked the blog... It gives you guys a little perspective of how Rob was feeling during the time they were apart....

I plan on more entries... Jen isn't going to let it go now that she is with Rob....should be interesting to see what she has to write...:)

Nick..yeah he just won't go away will he? and the shopping on his was fun for me.. and i don't like shopping!heeheehee

Shopping is up next and should be up soon!

thanks again!


Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Awwww, Jen's latest post on her blog made my heart melt. If your aim is to build up the tension before their reunion you are VERY successful!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I am so glad you found the blog. My near and dear side project to this... 

and the tension....heeheehee...let's just say I CANT WAIT TO GET TO LONDON! and I already know what happens... ;D

thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Yeah, hit Nick where it hurts - right in the wallet! Love it!!!!

Author's Response:

HAHAHA! for starters! that's for sure! I'll post the grand total in the A/N for next chapter. I did alot of "research" on fashion and shopping, cuz seriously if they don't sell it at the local mall I don't know about it... (I now have a serious desire to buy some Christian Louboutin shoes...)

Shopping is next!



Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Yea - an update!   Went to the blog and read the comments - so sad,  What's with the two entries that got deleted?   On chapter - what's the significqnce of the shopper's name - Tracy?  (I read the reviews first) - there is obviously an inside joke here that I've missed by not spending enough time in the forum.   I hope she spends scads of money and makes Nick wince.   Serves him right.   If he hadn'f been an sob to begin with, she and Liz wouldn't be spending so much but then we wouldn't have a story.   I can't wait for Rob to find out exactly what happened.   Love the bantering back and forth with the texting.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the blog. The two entries that got deleted... One was a mistake( i wrote it in the wrong person....)and the other probaby had a timing issue i couldn't fix...mysteriously a comment was deleted by a blog administrator too i noticed tonight (i don't think it was me...GASP)

I assume i will have to write a big disclaimer at some point all over the blog stating it is fiction... I'd hate for TMZ to get ahold of it...hahaha

The significance of TRACY- I have occasionally insert people into the story line and used names of some of you fabulous readers... some have caught on... I intend to continue to do so throughout the rest of the story. So every now and then, a reader will go- "Hey that's my name! that could be me!" yeah it pulls you out of the story a little (aren't all of you named Jen loving this story so far...) so yeah... fandom immortality...kind of like Stephen King in his movies... I intend to get as many in as i can... It's all theatrgirls fault...she was the first...but then again...she opened my eye to i owe her big time...

Spending Nicks money... yeah its gonna be fun... and it is in no way a payoff or a get out of jail free card... and it's gonna hurt... youcan't get out of saks without spending enough to buy a car! and I'm not talking a KIA! heehee

I love the texting... it brings them together more i think... they didn't get the chance to flirt when they were together...

thanks my dear!

Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Ok, loved the texting and screwing Nick over, BUT.....


I am not happy with even the suggestion that he (Nick) might be forgiven.  He's a rat and should be appropriately exterminated!


Ahh...the Rob blog entries were so sweet.  Just makes you want to give him a consoling hug or fifty, doesn't it?


Thanks a lot, Steph.  Looking forward to the shopping and to London!

Author's Response:

Oh he is not forgiven... not by a long shot... 

Lets just say Jen realizes that once they are outted, she will need to look her best... she will not let him get off that easy...even if she spends as much as i intend (I went virtual shopping at SAKs...hehehehe) 

Nick WILL be dealt with (remember though- i try to stay true to Robs real life we see every day- so unless Rob mysteriously gets rid of Nick between now and when i post the NICK chapter... he probably won't be fired... his ass kicked, maybe... hehehehe)

thanks for the nod to the blog... it's a little treasure for me... i had a great time writing the posts and Robs comments... I will be putting more posts up eventually....

shopping is next! London very soon!



Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Loved it!!!!  I hope she spends a ton of Nick's money!!

Lizzie is just so sweet.  And Rob's response to Jen's joke about her and Lizzie were hilarious!

Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

HEEHEE! thanks hun!

I'll post the damage she does in the A/N at the end of the next chapter. i went virtual shopping....just for fun!

i love Lizzy! and yeah... robs and jens banter i simply loved to write! 

more soon! 



Reviewer: deeLee (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York

Steph!!!LUV>>>LUV>>>LUV>>> I luv me some Jen and Rob.... Almost as much as the idea of 'me' and Rob!!!Only in my dreams..LOL But WHAT dreams they are!!!!

Author's Response:


thanks! just insert your name for Jen's... works for me! LOL!

More very soon!

thanks for reading and reviewing!


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