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Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 21-Goodbyes
I really freaking hated this chapter, only because it was a heartbreaker. You naughty girl you. I know about the angst thing and I do love some angst but these kids (okay, she's not a kid :O) love each other so much it broke my heart to bits to see them in such pain. Please bring them back together quickly.
No really, it was a well written chapter and I trust you kiddo to do the right thing. :) Don't pay any attention to what I say, it's all fiction anyway, right?
Off to the next chapter and hopefully she will have heard from him. Wonder why he didn't call? Hmm. That evil Nick! Must be him, the bastard! LOL. Don't mind me, it's very late and I've been at this all day and I'm a little balmy. I still love you.
Author's Response: oh my dear! remind me to send you more lovelies after you get thru these!
I am sendign you another goody for this review...
yeah.. their goodbye was really sad... WHY O WHY couldn't she just go? oh yeah... phobia of LA...
i heart you hard for reading this this late after so much already... i promise, all will be revealed... (psst. there are 32 plus chapters so far posted... so you know something good's gotta happen right? now aren't you glad you didn't read this when you had to wait for an update?)
love you my dear! I'll see you on the next one (*hiding under my desk*)
thanks for the R&R!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Uglybear23 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
updates are always so fast, I love it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks my dear!
blasting out these chappy's so I can get us in a good waiting place for when i submit the RPOV story... we'll have a wait in this story while it gets validated...so i want to make sure we are all feeling happy when we get to that point...it will be the first time i have ever waited longer than a week to update so i am nervous! LOL!
thanks my dear!
another one is going up in a few days!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Oh, just loved this chapter. Loved the 'talk' with the ladies! So cute. Can't wait for the naughty, smexy dancing night that I am sure it will be! ;0
Are we getting to christmas soon? Can't wait for that either. Love every chapter. Thanks!
Hugs,
Louise :)
Author's Response: thanks my dear!
i know! I am so ready to be at christmas already!
it's coming... a little dancing, a little Rob and Jen time.. and then Christmas! but this wordy ass girl keeps writing these chapters and they keep getting soooo looong.. sheesh...LOL!
soon my dearest! I am trying to balst these chapters out inthe next week so we can be at chrsitmas soon.
MWAH!
thanks!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 20-So Little Time
Oh my God, I just slapped Robert Pattinson's ass!
That was hilarious! Dominatrix Jen, who knew.
Very emotional and hate to see them part. sniff...
Author's Response: hehe...glad you liked it.
yes...their time apart is coming...sniff...
MWAH!
thanks for the review and rate!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: LetMeLove (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Fabulous, as always :) With every new chapter, you make me want to pack up and move in with Clare and the Pattinson's! Hahah...if only right?!
I can't wait to find out about the dancing. Here's to hoping it's a disco club or something wacky :)
Author's Response: HAHA!
i'd be moving in too!
Yeah so the dancing.. Let's just say the Lizzy is picking it out.... and she is a recording artist! hmmmmm...
its coming soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 19-The Last Day
I have been reading this pretty much all day and loving it. You are so good! I hope they do get to make it back to he cabin, it's sounds like heaven on earth.
Author's Response: Thanks my dearest for hanging out with Rob and Jen all day! wow!
Yes... the cabin will always be there.. for whenever Rob needs an escape...
thanks for the review and rating my dear! wow you have gotten so far!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: buff802y (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Ok. Awesome chapter. I absolutely love it and am so anxious for the next chapter.n OK on a fact finding note.... what are the ages of everyone again. I am to lazy to go loo back in the story.(ie- Rob, Jen, Liz and Victoria) Thanks and great job with the story. Cannot wait until next chappy:)
Author's Response: Thanks my dear! glad you are enjoying...
ok ages...
Rob is 23
Jen 37
Liz and Victoria are two years apart, my information has them at 25 and 27 with Victoria being the eldest, although i have also seen that Lizzy is 3 years older than Rob. but i like that they are all 2 years apart.
so there you go!
thanks for the review and rate!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Starting with the dream of the blond haired boy - *tear* - I know we talked about it on the forum a bit, but it makes me sad!! Hope you plan on having a talk about it in a chapter to come. And I'm so glad I didn't have a brother growing up - I would be so mortified if he woke up like that around me!
I'm loving the girl bonding time - even if it includes really really awkward Mrs. P conversations :)
Dancing is up next - oh dear! This'll be interesting - will it be private enough that she'll be able to dance with him?? You did promised a Schmexy Chapter 33 - combine that with dancing - uh oh!!
Looking forward to it!
*MWAH*
-Terri
Author's Response: Oh the little blond boy... could it have been Rob as a child, or something more? mmhhmmm.. we have been talking on the forums....lots of talking about this subject coming up....
and Rob's errr. morning thing... heehee... serves Liz right! ahahhahahaa!
the girls have really taken to Jen... Let's see how that progresses...
Dancing... hehehe... you guys are in for an interesting and as promised schmexy 33..... private enough? you'll see.... smirk....
thanks my dearest!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Cymoria (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
I love what you did in this chapter. Seeing the girls interacting wsa cool. I wish my mother in law was a cool as Mrs P. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
I am really liking the relationship the ladies have with Jen.
Oh my , Clare really is pretty awesome, isn't she?
Thanks so much for the review!
more very soon!
Mwah!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 17-What You Want
Aww, his family seems to really care for him a lot and that's so wonderful. Can't wait for them to be in London, hope it's not too far off. Another great chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks my dear.
He is really tight with his family i have heard, so i am glad it comes through here.
London is in a bit...right about christmas...
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 18- Time to Face the Music
TBH I had started to get a little bored of lemony things but yours are all just beautifully done - the words you have used are perfect and not the harder more harsh words that a lot of people use but the picture you paint is still as vivid and affecting. *sigh*
Giving up the love for Jen & Rob!! *Muwah*
Thank you so much again. I hope they working it all out :)
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Lemons are my biggest fear in writing TBH. I am always afraid to go too far (although, sometimes, it needs to be intense) But yes.. i spend a lot of time on them, trying to be sure they are out together as tastefully as i can... I have a list of words I simply won't use in this fic. some may venture in if the story calls for it (very naughty Rob?) but so far no... It's Rob after all, and above all else... I respect him and want to paint a respectful and realistic view of him... at least as much as I could possibly do without hidden spy cameras in his room...
evil smirk....
So happy you are enjoying ROBJEN. lots more to come!
thanks for the review and rating!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: robbiesgal (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
I love this story!!! I get all excited when i see it's been updated! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
There'll be some fast updates here for the next week or two to get us to a place so I can pause and submit the RPOVs!
then there will be 2 stories! GASP!
thanks for the review and rating my dear!
MWAH!
Steph
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Love it
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 16- Consequences
Um, that was so...so...bloody hot! You do know how to write lemons my dear. :)
They are so good for each other and knows what the other needs. I hope the real world doesn't tear them apart when they are finally faced with reality.
I'm girding my loins ( how's that for descriptive jargon, hehe) for the angst to come. Nice work again. Hugs.
Author's Response: *blushing profusely*
thanks my dear! I try my best. and really it is all the great readers that spur me on.... so THANK YOU!
they are good for one another...
Oh that real world. can Jen handle it? Is Rob ready for it?
ay, there will be angst... as any young and passionate relationship must face... and then add to that it's ROB... oh oh...
thanks my dear for the review and rating!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: crazyfanmom (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
SO loving this story. Most RL fic bores me after a while, but you keep me hooked!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I'll admit, I never intended for this to be as long as it is (and continues to be) so I am so happy to hear you guys are still enjoying!
Thank you so much for the review and rating!
more very soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 14-The Morning After
Fresh hot scones (and Rob) with just butter for breakfast sounds heavenly to this Brit! The clotted cream and strawberry jam is only really in quaint tea shop and posh hotels and stuff - just having them with butter and a cup of tea is perfect and exactly what we've always done at home :) Sultana scones are even better - oh god now ou've got me thinking about baking this weekend - no shop bought ones can ever compare!
Right now I waxed lyrical over a bit of fat and flour I'd better tell you how much I am absolutely loving this storyline. They are both absolute sweeties and so full of love that's it's luscious to read! I found this really late last and was up until 5am reading as much as I could before I finally fell asleep on the sofa!
Thank you so much.
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you my dear!
Oh Scones.... how i love them... although i admit to marmalade or jam on them... but i don't make them particularly sweet... yes.. now I want to do some baking this weekend! LOL!
I am so glad you are liking the storyline! they hold a special place in my heart.
heeheehee... I am simply awed by you that you read so much in one sitting! it is truly amazing!
Thank you so much my dear for the review and rating! it means a lot to me!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 15- Game Time
Oh I knew they would never make it until midnight! I don't think either one of them really wanted to. LOL. Hot and sweet just the way I like Edward. Sigh.
I must say though that I am having misgivings about them not useing protection, even thought she was told she can't get pregnant again...miracles do happen sometimes. OY!
Author's Response: heehee... such a silly game really... just a matter of time to decide who would want to cave first heehee
and the protection... yeah... she has said she can't have kids.... and Rob is putting an awful lot of trust in that...
We'll see...
thanks for the review and rating my dear!
It means so much to me!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Ok, I absolutely LOVE this story. I can't wait to see where you take it and I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much my dear!
So happy you are loving this! I'll be submitting another chapter tonight... so maybe by the weekend!
thanks so much for the review!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Hahaha little British snow flakes...
My hubby told me that it is considereda "White Christmas" in England if one flake lands on the roof of the Weather Building in London. I know from my Sister-In-Law that two inches is VERY exciting. I live in Denver.... I'm used to snow. I still lov every bit of this story.
Love,
Emily
Author's Response: HAHA! yeah, i love having a White Christmas... alas Los Angeles just doesn't get them! hahah
it did in fact snow the day this references... at least 4 inches in some places!
so glad you are still loving the story!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
has to be a hot red dress hehe psst no and between John Lewis
Author's Response: heehee.. the red dress is coming... hehe
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Cute chapter...I loved Clare's talk with Jen! Can't wait to see how the dancing goes...and Christmas morning!!!
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
Clare is awesome isn't she!
hehe dancing...with Rob... should be fun!
christmas is coming soon!
thanks!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: lullabye (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
God your story brightens my day :-)
I love Jen's 'inner voice'. She makes me laugh out loud.
I really thought that I wouldn't enjoy reading a part works, so to speak, and while I admit it helped reading through all the angst of them being apart in one go, now I just love having this to look forward to ... (You can only re-read Twilight oh so many times LoL - Don't tell anyone I said that though :-)
You remain my inspiration ... Thank you for sharing your dreams xx
Author's Response: Yay for brightening you day!
You just brightened mine!
i try to make sure Jen is heard- both internally and out...hahahah
Awww thanks so much for liking this so much! it means a lot!
heheh..your secret is safe with me...
thanks my dear!
another chapter coming up!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: wendywhiner (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Ok, so I'm assuming that Rob and Mr. P. are moving Rob into his own place, which would be really awesome for some hot lovemaking...hehe.
I'm glad Jen spent the day with the girls and got to learn a little more about Rob in the process.
Looking forward to the next chapter.....not really sure Rob's the dancing type though.
Author's Response: Hehehe...
wouldn't that be nice!
The day with the girls was special... and enlightening! hahah
heehee... Rob dancing... you'll see...hehehehe would I steer us wrong?
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: selene84 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
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Hi,
I just wanted you to know how much I love your story. I found "need to escape" this weekend and read all your chapters in just 2 days – I’m officially addicted ;). Looking forward to the next chap.
Sandra
Author's Response: HI!
and welcome to the NTE madness!
Oh my gosh! I am always amaze when I see a new reader and you've read it so fast! this story is such a beast! LOL!
My hat's off to you for reading it in so short a time!
I am so happy you found us!
I update once a week, sometimes more, and right now i am blasting out chapters so I can submit the RPOV story along side this one...
so look for another chapter in a few days! YAY!
welcome and thanks so much for the read and review!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Squee! That was such a fun chapter...lol
"Look, now I have two angels. One in the snow and one in my arms" made my heart almost burst, and I love how the whole family interacts, beautifully written!
:D
Author's Response: SQUEE!
I love that there is one little quote that someone picks out that makes them happy!
I like that line too, sigh!
thanks so much my dear!
more very soon!
MWAH!
steph
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