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Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
*THUD*
Oh My GOD!!! I have officially DIED!!!
My laptop and me just went up in flames after that....but what a way to go!!!
:D :D :D
Author's Response: HAHA! glad you liked it!
i'll make sure to have a fire extinguisher disclaimer on the next one!
Thanks my dearest!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
Wow, Steph, so much to like in this chapter! Besides the delicious lemonade at the end, I have to say, I loved Jen decking that douchbag. I definitely thought "Yes!" to myself when reading that.
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: HEHEHE! i am soo glad everyone is liking Jen's Sugar Ray Leonard moves! she's getting pretty agressive, eh? little tiger...
she's going to be a lot more agressive with how this relationship develops...
so glad you liked it!
thanks for the R & R!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
Wow. So hott. And gotta love Jen beating down on a total wanker! That was sweet. And who knew "foyer" sex could be so fuckhot? I love that it was his house and can't wait to see what the surprise is. I'm sure there are more decoration choices that have to do with Jen w/ that comment about that she should've noticed more around her instead of just being fixated on Rob as they went to the bedroom.
Author's Response: hehe you liked the wanker beating, eh? yeah she's not going to take anyone's shit anymore... hmmmm....
oh the foyer... mmmmm... good times...good times.... hehehe
The surprise will be coming.. hehee... and more on the house... sigh...yes.. we'll see what he could do in a day....
thanks my dear!
more soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: kbrendon (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
This chapter was very hot. thanks for the very fast update your the best. Hope to see more from you soon. I cant wait for christmas morning and robs mothers family that should be a very good time.
Author's Response: ah yes christmas morning... I am trying to get there... blasting thru these updates so we can. then we'll take a little break to validate the RPOV story...
oh yes.. Clare's family... just you wait.... hehehe
thanks my dear!
next update soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
Damn, I didn't want it to stop. Please get the next chapter up soon!!!
Author's Response: hahaha! eventually the poor boy had to breathe... heeheehee...
thanks so much my dear!
more very soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
Wow, that man is not only the sexiest thing on wheels he's insatiable! That was HOT Steph. Now you've got me all worked up and I need to get some sleep. How am I going to do that now, huh? I knew I shouldn't have opened that email notification until morning! LOL.
The house was a total surprise to me! The dress: I knew which one she'd wear. The surprise tomorrow? Well, there's that little turquois box I mentioned way back, perhaps that? or a reasonable facsimilie? I think he's going to pop the question. He's totally gone with her and she him.They are meant for each other.
Great chapter! I loved how she decked that goon in the club. And Rob ripping her undies off is a scream! Especially since it was Nick who paid for them!!!! LOL. Oh I can't wait for the next update. When?????
Love you girl! and a big MWAH back at ya!
Author's Response: HAHA! he is insatiable isn't he... goodness. he's got to wear out at some point right?!
ah the house... touring it in the next chapter...
and the surprise... hahaha... goodness... so many thoughts on a ring... hehehe... we'll just have to wait and see.
so glad you like them together... i simply adore RobJEN...
the decking of the perv.... hehe.. i am happy people enjoyed that... it is important for everyone to realize Jen is going to be a lot more agressive from now on... hehehe
next update you say? very soon... maybe 4 days? but very soon!
thanks so much my dear for all your reviews in the last few days! simply awesome!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
I. am. died. That was... I am still staring at the screen in open-mouthed amazement. That was one of the hottest lemons I have ever read. Seriously. I honestly think I need to go take a shower before going to sleep.
Although my mind is on Rob's tongue in my ear I want to mention- I was thinking he was moving into his own place. Loved the "ours" at the end.. sigh. Loved Rob's POV. Loved the sex.. oh, sorry I already talked about that didn't I.
The cougar line was great! I really thought it was going to bring her down, so glad it didn't
Did I mention I loved the door sex... the almost cab sex.. and the crazy body-twisting, frenied new bed sex? I did? Oh... Hmmmm.
Author's Response: so let me get this straight... you were ok with the sex? heehehee...
glad you liked it... giggle giggle...
yeah.. the cougar line and 5 or 8 shots... her passion got the best of her...
Our house... boy... he is really smitten isn't he?
thanks my dear!
hehee... the crazy body twisting... heehee... tickled you mentioned that... hahahah...
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KalifDee (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
Finally I get to award you with another 10!!! *sigh* I missed anxious and animalistic Rob!!
So I sorta got the jist of the getaway lol I said hotel but damn I was close! See they TOTALLY needed a place to get buck wild with their smexin!! lol
Bravo girl bravo
Till next time!! MUAH!
Author's Response: I was going to cry if you didn't like this one... the foyer... the rotations... hahaha
yes they now have a sanctuary to erm... defile...
Thanks for the 10 babe!
love you!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
Oh, you crack-addicted fool!
There I was, coughing and sneezing and getting ready to go to bed, when in comes the notice - Updates at Twilighted. Any other fic, and I'd have been off to bed. But it was NTE. So here I am, feeding your addiction as you fed mine!
Well. Ahem. Yes. I suspected from the teaser that there would be heat, but speaking of warnings... where was the "Caution, flames may shoot spontaneously from your USB ports while you read this fic" warning? Hmmm? Incredible.
The chat? Hysterical. Poor Mr. P, feeling all protective of Jen, and Rob struggling to keep his reputation at least balanced with hers while remaining a gentleman. Absolutely adorable. Also, I was happy to note he was drinking an ale from a glass. Thank God. I will probably be the only reviewer that comments on it, but that's why we're twins.
The restaurant? Brilliant. Food is sex. You know my stand on that. Brilliant. And tiramisu is equally brilliant, so thank goodness he appreciated it. Damn shame there weren't any breadsticks. THAT would have been priceless.
The club. Decking the ugly American was absolutely fantastic. Lucky for Rob he could at least smoke while he burned. You know? Getting her drunk was a vicious trick but it sure helped with the clock-cleaning. She'd have never done that without the proper buzz.
The cab. I was wondering when they'd remember that they were in a London cab, which is nowhere near as spacious as an American cab, and just as clean. Ick. I hope the driver enjoyed the show! Too funny.
The house. Well, you knew I knew, but you knew that I'd have to know, because of the whole "separated fics at birth" thing, so past that - the foyer was excellent. Mr. P thinking he has something for doors? Cracked me up! Really too much!
Finally, getting the same mattress as the one she has? And then saying "Our home."???? Awwww... just so sweet. Of course, I can't wait to see what he has planned for tomorrow. Hopefully you won't post at midnight again, or I'll be doing the sleep deprivation thing all over again!
Another fab chappie, Steph!
MWAH!
Author's Response: oh my god I am cackling right now! darnit I keep forgetting that warning label.... *shakes head in darn shame* hehehe
so glad you liked Mr. P's sex talk... and the ale... yeah... evil twin...
oh breadsticks! dammit... oh well... i think if there had been breadsticks, rob wold have combusted...
yeah... who knew Rob was helping her limber up to a good knuckle buster...hehehe....
yeah... the cab... silly boy... and with those legs, where was he going to go?
Poor Mr. P... Rob's erm frustrations over the door must have spurred the pub talk, eh?
Rob's attention to detail with the bed. sigh...
I wonder how she will react though in the morning when she is no longer drunk when she realizes... he intends to make his house theirs...
wow... that's a big step there Mr. Pattinson! but still very sweet...
willtry not to update so late. i was quite pleasantly surprised to have it update tonight! woohoo!
thanks my dearest! another one in a few days... maybe i should actually finish up 35 now?
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 33- A Night out in London
that was allll kinds of HOT and I KNEW IT! haha i knew he bought his own place
Author's Response: hehee! yes you did!!!!
glad you liked it hun!
more to come!
touring the house and a surprise next up!
thanks for the read and review!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: m244robp (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
That was fun. It's so touching to see the way the Pattinsons love each other.
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
i just love them...
thanks for the read as always! so happy you have stuck with me since the very beginning!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
What do you mean a little lag in updates? You can't do this to me after I've spent a sleepless night and 2 whole days reading! Steph, please have a heart. Are the RPOVs the one's you sent to me? Hope not as I'll need some reading to keep me happy here during the drought!! Oh, and they better be juicy and long!! Just the way I like it! LOL!
Sorry!
I loved this chapter, he's such a horney little Brit, so is Jen for that matter. Pretty brave too since she's with his family. Don't think I could do that.
Author's Response: hahaha! sorry dearest... yeah. will be submitting the RPOV companion story to this one.. It may take a week to validate.. it may take 4... so i am prepping everyone early.. I won't submit until i have 37 of this story up- we'll be in a good holding pattern then...
i will post teasers on the forum thread while we wait...
yes... he 's is a randy boy isn't he? must be the london air....
and Jen is just too damn dazzled by the pretty! hahaha!
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Oooh, I loved the images that Rob working the bag brought to mind. Yum. Thanks you muchly for that. Yowza.
His family, especially Clare, Lizzy and Victoria are a hoot, and clearly love him to bits. I think Jen is a perfect fit.
I also would like to say that I am currently reading one of your FFrec's called Loss of Contro by KrisB and it's fantastic.
As for Nick, meh, I realize it would probably be a bad idea to fire his ass but he sure needs to do some prison time. LOL. By that I mean atonement baby. Big time.
Author's Response: Oh my yes.. boxing Rob... mmmm... the EW outtakes help with that image.
I simply adore the Pattinson's real and otherwise. Jen is fitting in rather well.
Oh yes, LOC by KrisB is awesome... she is my long lost evil twin (or I am the evil one... the jury is still out on that one!)
and as for Nick... he definitely hasn't been forgiven.. there will be some retribution involved...some groveling, maybe a loss of body parts... but he will definitely have to atone for his actions!
thanks my dearest!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
OMFG IT ONLY TOOK ME LIKE 3 HOURS TO READ THIS CHAPTER DAMN EFFING CUSTOMERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BLOODY HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway this was a FANTASTIC chapter. I loved the family looking for a tree and the blowjob in the tree then the finger pleasuring later. DAMN IT!!!!!!!! I'M NOW ALL HOT AND BOTHERED I HAVE TO WAIT TO READ THE REST!!!!! FUCK MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!! Oops sorry about that I was ranting *blushing* Yeah I LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!! Now I need a drink!!!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHA!
but hey, on a better note, the day is ALMOST over! YAY!
so glad you liked the extra goodtimes at the tree farm...hehehehe....
doesn't it suck when Rl gets in the way!HAHAHA!
oh youare so close to being caught up (of course, there will be an update in a day or two...LOL!)
thanks my dear! i'll catch you on the forums, or the chats, or the reviews!
mwah!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 27-Finally
Ha ha, sorry about that Kris slip in my last review.
There is definitely something to be said for your men and their stamina and Robbie boy has it in spades. LOL. Lucky Jen.
Great reunion, love fest chapter. Can't wait to read more about their stay in Jolly Old England together.
It's been about 8 years since my last trip over to London and I loved it. The tube is a bit frightening trying to figure out but the cabbies are a lovely bunch. We had one who actually had lived in Tennessee (my home) for a while!! How's that for coinincidence!
Author's Response: HAHAHA! Kris...jen.... does it make a difference? it isn't us! hahaha!
yeah...Robbie has some drive that one does! hahaha!
so glad you liked the reunion! hehe
lots of time in england up ahead!
it's been as long as Jen for me... Rob wasn't even a twinkle.... sigh.. i really need to go back! and never leave!
oh tennessee is beautiful! mom's from NE alabama, so we'd drive thru every year! sigh!
thanks my dearest!
mwah!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 26- Welcome Home
Lovely chapter, getting to know the Pattinsons and they are a lovely bunch!
Lovely too that Rob showed up at the end. Clare went to pick him up didn't she?
I think you worked it out well that Kris was first to arrive for that reason and also for the fact that she needed to hide the guitar so he wouldn't know what she was giving him for Christmas. I wonder what his gift will be. Hmmm, maybe something in a pretty little turquois box with a white grossgrain ribbon bow? :)
Author's Response: hahaha!
they are a lovely bunch... aren't they?
Rob actually came home by cab.. Clare was really running errands...hehehe I have to get her out of the house somehow!
hehehe..Kris? hahah... iknew what you meant... a slip perhaps?hahaha... yes. she definitely needed to get there first, for the guitar and for the enjoyment of seeing her with the PATTI clan alone...
hmmmm. his gift to her? heeheehee.... we'll just have to see now won't we?
thanks my dear!
love reading your reviews!
really I am not lurking! just writing and and get such a joy out of my notifications popping up!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 25-Pretty Woman
I loved this chapter and the shopping was so much fun, ina "wish it were me" kind of way. LOL. $$$$ almost 40 grand, wow. One of these trips of mine to NYC I'm going to check out Saks, just for the fun of it. Maybe I could afford a shopping bag! Or a small scarf perhaps, er, maybe not.
Tracy was definitely an Alice but you know that. haha.She was so cute.
I was really on the edge of my seat during her wait on the runway, that was really good. Can't wait to see what happened to Rob. Hope he's not too delayed!!!
Author's Response: thanks my dear!
oh to have that kind of money to be able to spend at SAKS...and to have an Alice to help! sigh...
glad you liked the airport tension... heehee... We'll see what happened to rob next chapter.. and oh no! Jen has to meet the PATTI clan without him! HAHAHAHAHA!
thanks for the R& R my dear!
mwah!
steph
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE KNOWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until he comes face to face with Nick!! I knew Rob would be like that when he found out about what Nick did. I would be furious too. For their first argument I think it went real well. I would just love to see him let off some steam like that. Damn I would have came in my panties watching that. THUD!!!!!! Bend over baby!! ARE YOU REALLY TRYING TO KILL ME? I think so... Thank god Mr. P didn't walk in while they were fucking that would have REALLY been embarrassing. Damn paps need to get a damn life and leave him alone to enjoy his holiday. Anyway it was a great chapter and I'm holding you to the first shot!!!!! Love ya!!!!!
Author's Response: heehee...
oh yes... the image of Rob relieving some tension... hehe
it was a good arguement... resolved a bit, although they have so much more to discuss.... sigh...
yeah... if Mr. p had walked in that would have been terribly mortifying... i couldn't do that to Jen... bad enough they all know they are molesting each other every chance they get...hehehehe
ah the paps... will they ever leave him alone? sad sigh... At least jen handled it well.. maybe she will be able to deal with the crazy life Rob leads....
thanks hun!
looking around for our virtual bar right now!
mwah!
steph
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 28- An Evening at the Pattinson's
I FUCKING LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! Damn it I'm panting!!!!!!!! The dinner was a wonderful time and I loved how they were making Jen blush sooo much. I was even laughing and then the FUCKING SEX BLOODY HELL!!!!!!!! I'm sitting here at my desk at work and THANK GOD no one is here at the moment. That was just....... I have no words hun. Then you closed it out being sweet awwwwww. Thanks for the shout out that really does mean a lot to me. Thank you.. Love ya. Okay a few more chapters to go. Damn I hate getting behind.
Author's Response: heehee... London is going to be good for them, can you tell? heehee
Oh the family... they are spirited aren't they? hehehe... poor Jen...
HAHAH! glad you were alone... how do you explain intense looks at the computer screen and panting to co workers!
ummmm.. dearest... there might be more panting in the future chapters... just saying... hehehehe
thanks my dear!
love you! we'll have to catch up friday night! first shot's on me!hahaha
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 27-Finally
HONEY I'M HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well here I am trying to catch up with these chapters you insist on posting so DAMN often. Bwhahahahaha. Just kidding, it just means that I don't have to wait for an update. Well I'm sitting here at work and I had a little time so here I am reading. That was one hell of a WELCOME HOME if I say so myself. It was perfect Steph. I was giggling with NAUGHTY PANTIES. I think I would have done the same thing. Great chapter hun and I promise I'll get caught up. It's been lonely in my cave. It's great to FINALLY come out. Love ya!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Honey! Dinner's almost ready! HAHAHAHA!
I'm sorry for being such a wordy ass whore and updating so often... i am thinking therapy..hahaha
oh you and work again.. well no dramatic cliffy's this round... hehehe
I'll keep an eye out for the boss! hahaha!
heeeheee naughty panties... I'd be so done with just his voice!
Yay for coming out of the cave!
thanks my dearest!
love you!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York
I'm leaving you lots of love!
I love this wonderful, sweet, I can breath again, chapter. :D
I love how you made Nick pay bigtime!
I love Lizzy and how she fell for Jen right away.
I love how over the moon Rob is for his girl.
I love Little/Big Patty! :O
I love the naughty photos and especially with the Stoli, that was so rich!
Is that enough love for you, Love? :))))
Author's Response: LOL! Oh how I love you!
hahaha!
I have to say I felt really bad that you read those last chapters after such a long day and just before bed! oY!
so i am glad things are better now!
glad you loved it all!
surprises comiing to you shortly!
thanks for the R&R!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 26- Welcome Home
Aww how sweet was that? I didn't expect him home until next chapter so that was a lovely surprise.
Thanks so much for writing this.
Achilles x
Author's Response: thanks! wasn't it nice to see him early? heehee
Thank you so much for reading. It's readers like you that keep me going!
thanks for the review and rate!
MWAH
steph
Reviewer: writertobe (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out
Christmas shopping in London is wonderful, all the decorations alone make it worth the effort! But if you could be shopping for Rob P...wow, lucky woman! Great chapter, even though he wasn't in it much, the parts where he was were so wonderfully written, loved the snow fight scene, reminded me a bit of that scene in the movie "Love Story".
Author's Response: Thanks! I think of anywhere I'd want to go Christmas shopping, i am thinking London would be it!
Glad you liked the snow ball fight...hahaha I hadn't thought of Love Story until you mentioned it! HAHAHA!
There's LOTS More Rob in the next chapter...heeheehee
thanks for the read and review my dear!
more very soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 23-Rescue Me
I love Lizzy, she's what a big sister should be. Lucky Rob.
Okay I can go to bed now, thank God, all's right with Jen. Great chapter Steph, and yes you can come out of the cave now, you have redeemed yourself.
Good night and sweet dreams. Looking forward to that lemon you promised. I"ll be back tomorrow, just not too early, I need my beauty sleep after all. Hah!
Author's Response: HAHA!
oh yes... i love Lizzy! she will be instrumental!
Yay for bed, i am on my way as well! Now that i can come out of the cave...hahaha
sweet rob filled dreams for you! I'll send you a little lemony goodness your way in the morning!
thanks so much for hanging in there! you are truly awesome!
night!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 22-Alone
I don't even know if I can write anything halfway intelligent at this point, I'm so tired I can hardly hold my head up. Bawled my eyes out I did. That was one of the saddest chapters I've read and my heart is broken for Jen. I somehow can't believe Rob could be that beastlly after the week they had together. Somehting afowl here.
Those green eyes in the shop? I think they may belong to Stephanie, or Kristen perhaps.
Just when I thought I was going to quit for the night (it's 1:20am for God's sake), I just need to find out what is going on next. You are EVIL woman!!! Yeah, I still love ya, even after this chapter. :)
Author's Response: I Am sooo Sorry! oh not the chapter to read at 130 that's for sure!
you're such a trooper to keep reading! I swear i am amazed when you guys read marathons! wow!
ok... next chapter there are answers! I promise!
something afowl..most definitely.
Thanks so much my dearest!
oh my! you def deserve a goody after all this! but i'll send it in the morning.. so you aren't tempted! LOL!
mWAH!
steph
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