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Reviews For After All
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Girlfriend

I read the summary for the story and thought I have to see what this is about and here I am...still reading lol



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you stuck around!! Thanks so much for reviewing!!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Girlfriend

Jealous Bella, me likey. But Edward didn't seem to thrilled to see Tanya. I hate that bitch, sorry. LOL

I love your story; always glad to seen an update. I just stumbled across it one day. It had to be favorited! Don't keep us waiting too long for an updat. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward wasn't happy to see Tanya. At. All. 

All will be revealed in Chapter 10. :) 

Thanks so much for reviewing!! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long! 

Reviewer: cascsiany (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Girlfriend

Completely agree with "Oh What a Tangled Web We Weave" awesome story. I was looking through all the AU-Human stories and stumbled across it.



Author's Response:

Isn't Browns telling a great story? LOVE IT! :) 

So glad you stumbled across this story...I'm so glad you're reading and reviewing!! Thanks so much!! 

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Girlfriend

I stumbled across your story and am glad I did. :o)

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you did too!! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Girlfriend

I love the sexual tension between Bella & Edward.

Too bad Tanya showed up to cause some trouble.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I have to say I love writing the sexual tension between these two as well.  They're fun.  It's going to be a slow burn...but not tooo slow!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Girlfriend

Well I can't wait to see how he gets himself qut of this one.



Author's Response:

Me too... (just kidding, Chapter 10 is being beta'd as I write). It will reveal exactly how everyone takes Tanya's arrival. 

Thanks so much for reading and always reviewing!! I really appreciate it! 

Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Girlfriend

Yes, I just stumbled upon this one and it has been really entertaining.  Please continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks Daisy!!! Chapter 10 is being beta'd now so hopefully I'll have it out to you all soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Girlfriend

dun dun dun

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Girlfriend

Damn girl, that cliffhanger was cruel.  This from the Queen of Cliffy's right...

Okay, so what the hell is up with can't take a hint Tanya Jackson.  Seriously, the first time you introduced that bitch I hated her.  She isn't blind.  It's obvious he didn't want her there.  And how the hell did she know where to find him.  I don't think it was a coincidence.  I picture him telling her he's going out the meet his family, her dumb ass trying to attach herself to the invite and him saying no.

Ugh, love the chapter...hate the whore.

Smooches, Browns



Author's Response:

YOU'RE telling ME my cliffy was cruel? YES!!!!! I did good then! 

Tanya's a sneaky little thing.  That's all I say for now. 

Glad you loved the chapter and hated the whore - my work here is done! 

Thanks for everything, my dear!! 

Reviewer: Nite_Owl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Girlfriend

You are queen of the cliffhangers ! But I love it. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much!! Your review brought a huge grin to my face.

Hope you continue to enjoy!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Girlfriend

ArrrrgggghhhH! I HATE you!!  I cannae beleive you ended it there!  Awful awful place to stop!

Please please update soon.

P: I loved all the sexual tension between Bella and Edward.



Author's Response:

This has to be one of my favorite reviews ever. I love that you hate me for leaving you hanging!!

Chapter 10 will hopefully not be a long wait - it's written and out to my betas right now. 

I'm glad you enjoyed the tension between Bella and Edward. I'm planning a slow (but not tooo slow) burn between these two so we'll see more of it. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Girlfriend

Well how did I stumble accross After All?  Well I was looking for yet another story to sink my teeth into and so I went to most recent and I thought that this might be a story I would like and well I was wrong....I LOVE IT!!!

So hope to have you post soon and until then I will be

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're loving it!!! Seeing that just makes my day! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Girlfriend

Tanya Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. I hope one of her fake boobs explodes.

love the story



Author's Response:

You made me laugh out loud.  I just had this picture in my head of her boobs exploding all over the place. Quite the mental picture you helped me create. Thanks for that. LOL!! 

I'm so glad you're loving the story.  Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Nite_Owl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Broken

oh! man, break out the tissues. This one really got me.

Reviewer: Nite_Owl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Reunions

Really interesting story. Draws you right in. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Hope you continue to enjoy.  Thank you for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Unexpected

It was a rollercoaster chapter. I'm laughing at Dr. Dick and then having a perfect mental picture of Alice in her pink robe ... then the good Doctor comes in and ooh la la!

Alice and Esme were perfectly not subtle. I'm not sure how Alice feels about the possibility of something between Edward and Bella. She seems pretty posessive.



Author's Response:

It was definitely a roller coaster chapter - I had so much fun writing it though. Still one of my favorites. 

Alice will definitely be fine with Edward and Bella hooking up. We'll see more of that in Chapter 10. 

Thanks so much for stopping by to review!

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Confusion and Hope

I love how Emmet is egging him on - fanning the flames of jealousy but it doesn't seem that Edward needs too much pushing. Time to ditch that girlfriend.

I'm interested to find out why he so conspicuously couldn't remember Jake. So wrapped up on noticing Bella?

Reviewer: Alizabeth Roc (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Seattle

I found you again. For some reason your story dropped off of my favs but it is back on.

No wonder Bella freaked out. All those horrible memories. I was really drawn in and could feel the rising panic. I like that she was sedated for their reunion. I was completely holding my breath when she reached out to touch him. Can't wait to read Edward's POV

Reviewer: dcook78 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Unexpected

Another great story I found.  Looking forward to more. 

Dee

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!! Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Unexpected

Awesomeness!!! I got rec'd!

So here is the thing.  I'm questioning this friendship thing with Jake and the girls.  But he's married so I could be way off base.  Frankly, every Leah character I have read is like ruthless, not to be messed with at all.  Am I reading too much into their closeness?

Is she going buss their ass?  

I like that Bella is doing better.  I was totally scared about her panic attack last chapter.  She seems to be doing really good.

Okay, not onto Mr. E (AKA Dr. Dick, you and the damn nicknames).  I know his 'tude was because of Emmett effing with his mind (loved that by the way), but he's still all aloof and shit.

I'm not even going to try to leave a page like you usually do...I'm not that creative.

Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one. Don't wait too long.

~Ms. B



Author's Response:

Hey!!!

Don't question the friendship thing - it really is very innocent.  The three of them got close in high school and managed to stay close across time and distance. Jake's around a lot now to help support Bella and Leah understands it.  She's not thrilled with it since she's always wondered if Bells and Jake had somethin' somethin' on the side, but she trusts her husband so she'll deal. In all honesty, we probably won't see Jake as much after this chapter, since Eddie's finally pulling his head out of his butt. ;)

Bella is continuing to improve.  Except...well, yeah, that's all I'm gonna say. 

I know you secretly love my nicknames!!! (It's been a thing with me since high school - everyone gets one.) I'm currently working on Chapter 11 and I have a feeling Dr. Dick will be a thing of the past after I'm done with these two.

Chapter 9 is currently with the betas so I'm hoping if I get it back soon and there's not too much to edit, it'll be up sometime next week.

Thanks as always for reading, reviewing and your support, Ms. B!!!

(And apparently I made up for the page I usually leave in this reply...I just can't shut up.) 

 

 

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Goodbye

thanks for the teaser! now i'm even MORE anxious to see the next chapter! LOL

 

g

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Unexpected

Awww I loved this chapter.  I love how drawn Edward is to Bella, the easy flirty 'tude they have going on and the fact she called him her own personal physician :)

Laughed at Bella and Jake being brought into line by a scarey pissed off wee pixie :)  Loved the visuals you gave me by your vivid descriptions.

Can't wait for more,



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled that you loved this chapter!  One of my favorite parts to write was the Jacob/Bella fight scene.  Is it bad to admit I laughed out loud when I had Bella tell Jake to "bring it on?"   Probably, huh? :) 

I hope that I can give you much more flirty Edward or Bella pretty soon.  That was a lot of fun to write too. :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: twilightvampgirl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Unexpected

hey love the story update soon



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it!! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Unexpected

OH, JUST LOVE THIS

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad!!! Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Unexpected

I'm partial to Sweetward and not so much to Dickward.... keep them chappies a comin, k???  thanx!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm partial to Sweetward too, so we probably won't see too much more of Dickward! lol!!

Chapter 9 is with my beta's right now, so the wait shouldn't be too much longer! :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!!!

Teaser coming soon...

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