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Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Concession
Hell yeah I want to see that conversation! It would be EPIC! LOL Great chapter. I am glad that Edward broke up with that crazy hoochie,
Author's Response: YAY!!! I'm glad I made you happy with the news of the breakup!!
As always, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Concession
I am enjoying this story. I love when Esme is in protective mama bear mode! Would love to have been a fly on the wall for that break up! Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
CM
Author's Response: Your wish is my command...the Breakup Outtake is on its way...
Thank you for reading and reviewing!! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Concession
LOVED IT
Love how Rose wanted to kick her ass lol - would love to see that
Author's Response: Maybe Rose will get a chance to kick ass yet... :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing as always. The outtake is on its way!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Concession
i can't wait to see how dinner goes!
Author's Response: I think you'll be happy with dinner, even if it does take a bit of an unexpected turn. Hell, I wrote it and didn't expect what happened to happen!
Thank you so much for always reviewing. :) The outtake is on its way...
Reviewer: alt (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Concession
Esme was hysterical! I love your depiction of her. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed Esme. I always had the impression she would project her children until the death. It's a good thing Tanya didn't show her face after she slapped Edward!
Thanks so much for reviewing. The outtake is on its way...
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Concession
Sneaky little Alice!!! LOL And maybe Bella will kiss Eddie's cheek and make it all better.....
Author's Response: Oh, that Alice. She's something isn't she?? :)
Thanks so much for you reading and reviewing!!! I just sent the outtake!
Author's Response: Oh, that Alice. She's something isn't she?? :)
Thanks so much for you reading and reviewing!!! I just sent the outtake!
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Girlfriend
is it wrong that right about now i want to stab Tanya with a rusty steak knife hmmm. i found this story while looking the the A section of the stories.
Author's Response: I think lots of people want to stab Tanya right about now. LOL.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Reunions
did she know the cullen from when she previouly lived in forks i'm wondering. i love that hake iss her best friend in this too.
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Goodbye
O love this so far, i'm interested to see what will happen when she gets back to Forks, also to find out what happened and what her injuries where.
Author's Response: So glad you found the story and you're enjoying it so far!!
Author's Response: So glad you found the story and you're enjoying it so far!!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Girlfriend
I absolutely loved the end of this chapter. The whole thing was great but the ending was the best part. Gotta love the image of Tanya just stumbling unto the family dinner. Poor Edward, he must be such a mess in his own head, specially after the feeding and catching of Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Ahh, Tanya. She certainly knows how to kill a party, doesn't she?
Edward isn't too much of a mess in his head, he's just got a lot of unfinished business. I actually have an outtake written where he sits down and really thinks about what he wants out of life. If I get enough interest, I may post it.
Thank you again for reviewing all the chapters!!! I loved reading all your thoughts!! Can't wait to see what you think of the next one... :)
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Unexpected
Good one. I like the Dr. Dick nickname, it's fitting. hehehe. I wonder what Alice really thinks about the whole E/B interaction. That will be a curious conversation when the other two leave. I love the familial way A/B/J are with each other. It's sweet how close they are - it made me tear up a little when Jake said goodbye. I dunno why. This fic just seems to bring out the girl in me.
Author's Response: We'll see more of how Alice feels in Chapter 10; she may not come right out and say it, but I think we're able to see what she thinks about these two hooking up.
I'm so glad you like the relationship between Alice, Bella and Jake. I hate making Jake out to be the bad guy, but I don't think I'd ever have him with Bella either. I wanted to make their relationship close, but realistic. I hope I've done so!!
BTW - you're completely awesome for reviewing each chapter! Thank you for that!!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Confusion and Hope
It was a good chapter. The scenes were definitely different from EPOV but I think he was a bit too possessive for my taste. I always find it odd when he is so violent in his own head with regard to other men that might be around Bella. It is totally within his character, I just don't find it realistic. Everything about this story so far has felt so real and a possibility for anyone to land themselves in. It's just when he starts getting all You-won't-like-me-when-I'm-angry Hulkesc, I'm a bit leery. Good job though. I'm just picky.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honesty - I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Seattle
I like how you tried very hard to not use the term "bridal style" when Bella is picked up. I absolutely HATE that phrase and give major props for coming up with inventive ways to describe it. The chapter was very good but I've come to expect that from you so keep it up. I look forward to reading the next one. I just hope there isn't too much of the chapter resaid in EPOV cause that can get boring. I like how you jumped ahead a few months in the story and instead gave us little pieces of the time in between. It helps when moving it along and then you can always stick stuff in after the fact if you forgot. Smart little writer...
Author's Response: OH! I hate bridal style too. If at all possible, I will never use it. It irritates me when I read it, so I doubt I'll ever write it.
I try not to restate things either, or spend a lot of time on a stretch of time that isn't really enhancing the plot. Those three months may pop up from time to time, but for the most part, Bella was just recovering at Charlie's.
I'm really happy you're enjoying the story!! I'm loving your reviews!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Highs and Lows
I loved this chapter! I liked hearing from Edward. Can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Bella meet... again. hehehe.
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Agony
That was an incredibly depressing chapter. I'm not gonna lie, I cried a little. When she is thinking about the time in the hospital, it broke my heart. Thank you for writing such an intense words. They were obviously quite moving if you got a few tears out of me.
Where's the fucking rainbow though? I need a joke or two. I guess we got that when Jake was talking about communicating with her in the coma. But still, I need a smile. This is one sad little fic. I guess it's good to build up the story. We really get to see how dark a mind can be after an accident like this.
Author's Response: Is it bad that I'm not sorry I made you cry? LOL. I mean I am, but I'm also incredibly happy that something I've written brought that much emotion out in someone!
I think, when I started this fic, I was in a bit of a dark place myself, so that's why Bella is so dark in the first few chapters. I think it lightens up a bit, especially as she recovers. That's not to say there won't be angsty times ahead. I love writing some angst!!
Thank you for such lovely, long reviews!!! I love reading your opinions!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Broken
It's so upsetting to be in this situation and feel like you are suffocating. You did a good job of describing not only how Bella feels but how the emotional and physical pain is erratic. They seem to go as quickly as they come. I like how you paint the Cullen family picture. It's the same photograph but it is described so differently from the cliche version we seem to get from a lot of fanfic authors.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!! I love writing about the Cullen's and all their family dynamics!!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Reunions
Great job with this chapter. i can feel this story is going to be a good one. I can't wait to be all caught up. You have some beautiful words and more to come, I can feel it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Girlfriend
Ack, Tanya! That's okay, a good love triangle always does wonders for getting my two favorite characters together, it seems :-). I love the way Bella described her... exactly what I would have been thinking about her under the circumstances!
Author's Response: LOL!! I'm glad you enjoyed the Tanya description. I enjoyed writing it! :)
Thanks as always for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Goodbye
Good start to a story. I'm excited to keep reading.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: Joyce Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Girlfriend
Hi,
I found your story by doing my regular perusal of the most recent submissions. I was intrigued by your story. I am enjoying it thus far although Edward needs to grow a pair and tell Tanya to talk a long walk off a short pier! I look forward to reading your updates to this story.
Heidi
Author's Response: Heidi, thank you so much for stopping by to read my story. I really appreciate it!
We'll find out what Edward decides to do with Tanya in the next chapter (I like the long walk off a short pier idea!)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Girlfriend
I came across the story looking at everything that had recently updated during the Christmas break. The banner caught my attention and the summary made me want to take a look and see what the story was about. Bella's accident, recovery, physical therapy, the changes to her personality and her emotional and physical hardships, as well as the attraction to Dr. Dick, drew me in.
Too bad Tanya appeared and burst Edward's bubble, but he's got some unfinished business. He needs to get his ducks in a row before starting anything with Bella. I know they're not in a relationship but the attraction doesn't seem honest without disclosing his present situation with that skank. I just think he owes her the truth.
Author's Response: Hi Hope!! So glad you decided to take a chance on my story!! :) Thank you!! (And didn't Readergoof do an excellent job on the banner?!)
Edward does have some unfinished business and hopefully we'll see him wrap it up pretty quickly. But just because he's done with Tanya doesn't mean she's done with him...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Girlfriend
Edward doesn't seem to think she is his girlfriend...Fbuddy maybe but not his girlfriend. And Rose must HATE her from the reaction the Edward was having. I cannot wait until you post again and let us know what happens.
Author's Response: Edward has had conflicted feelings for Tanya for a while, but with Bella back in his life, there's no contest anymore.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Girlfriend
i hope he breaks it of with tanya ,i think i would be completely pissed he if started pursuing bella while having tanya in the background,rose's reaction to meeting bella is anythng to go by i'd say the skanks days are numbered..lol
i found this story while checking out the recently updated stories and the premise sounded really interesting and here we are
Author's Response: Edward is not the type to string two people along, despite what it might look like right now. Most of this will be answered in the next chapter.
I'm so glad you decided to check my story out and stuck with it!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Girlfriend
not Tayna Denali?
Author's Response: Nope, I decided to change up the names for some of the non-major players. Just for something different. Bella's ex-boyfriend is not Mike or James, and Tanya has a different last name than usually given. I tried to switch things up just a little bit. :)
Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Girlfriend
OMG... LOL I am thinking that Edward and Tanya had not officially defined their relationship.... and that for him, it was more based on sex than anything. He was a bit of a manwhore before Bella came around. I bet Bella is going to be piiiiiissed the f--k off about this... LOL
I think I found AA just from searching fics and liked the description and the banner.
Author's Response: Bella's reaction might surprise you...remember, they've only been "flirting" for a week at this point. :)
I'm so glad you decided to take a chance on the story and stuck around to read it!! Readergoof made the great banner!!
Thanks for reading and always reviewing!!!
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