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Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 4

It might seem strange that from all that went on during her day, what scares Bella the most are the words Edward just told her. She is happy with the life she is living, and thinking it might change scares her a lot it seems.

Edward's punishment got what he wanted, she was constantly thinking about him and holding on to those thoughts. He made her worry getting home and ignoring her. His day didn't go well and that phone call must have something to do with his wanting to talk with her. Will we see next chapter "regular interaction" between them? Or it will still be Master and Slave?

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments!  The next chapter will see some more open communication between Edward and Bella, but they will still be in their roles.  That is "regular" for them.  The first real moment outside of their M/s roles will be in Chapter 10 as things stand now (which is only about 36 hours in the future from this point in the story).

Thanks for reading and I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Alright now I'm kinda confused.  I'm very intrigued by their lifestyle for cetrtain.  I had no idea people actually lived that way.  I mean I knew about D/s but not about the slave part of it.  I can't wait to see what he needs to talk to her about.

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 4

Awww, want to read the rest now.

Your evil!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

I can't wait till they talk...we haven't gotten that yet! 

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

I realy really want to know were this story is going to lead, I am so obsessed,

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

I am very intrigued with your plot. I'm very curious about what will happen when Jasper comes to stay with them, But I'm very happy to see that there are affection between them, even though it's very unconventional.

Reviewer: dabadoo306 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

no... I was expecting a few more chapters... oh well, looking forward to more!  Soon I hope, but I just discovered this story so I have no Idea of your schedule... keep up the great work!  going in my favorites!  ;)

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying this. Looking forward to the next chapter. Curious to see what Edward wants to talk to Bella about....Jasper visiting? Also will be interesting to see how their relationship changes when they have company. Thanks1

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow -- just, um, wow!  I am so intrigued by this story and their lives.  I have so many questions.  I am confused yet intrigued by the desire to become a slave. 

How is this satisfying to her?  to him?  Do they ever have non-slave/master moments?  Is she really happy losing herself to him?  Is he? 
Do they ever just want to be Edward and Bella?  How do this work when they are out?  What happens when they get married?  And what would the vows be like .... "I slave take you master ...."  ;):)  And what happens if one of them want to end the M/s contract -- does the marriage end?  What is going to happen with Jasper?  I can't imagine he would share her.  Edward seems to be very possessive of her (cameras watching her).

Also, will there be EPOV too?

Sorry to throw so many questions at you --- clearly you have piqued my interest.  I am so looking forward to more!!!

Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

Okay, how's she going to have a conversation with that thing vibrating in her ass??  I'm really curious about what Edward wants to talk about--what he was so stressed out about when he came home?

This lifestyle doesn't appeal to me in the least, and like a lot of other readers, I want to see them in a "normal" interaction...but reading these lemons is such a turn on!

I think you're handling the topic well-- its clear you've done your research, and its a really interesting look into this lifestyle--the smut is fantastic, but you've made it about more than just that.

Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

Need to talk? Edward's softer side? I can't wait to read it all! :)

Reviewer: Stef_Twi1 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

The first story i've read like this but i'm really enjoying it!

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like the story.  This lifestyle intrigues me.

Reviewer: livvi84 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

I wasn't going to review again, but I can't help myself. I think you are a fantastic author and could go many directions with this story. I, along with every reader here, realize that this is a work of fiction, but, I can't read further without saying anything. Please know that I am in no way trying to be offensive or trying you to get you to change your storyline. I just have to say this to be fair to my profession. I mentioned before that I have a PhD in family and relationship counseling. I spent four years researching, in depth, alternative relationships all across the nation for my thesis. I spent the majority of my time within the BDSM community. I should say I do not practice BDSM in any way, however, as a result of my studies, I do have several very good friends that actively participate in this lifestyle. I am well aware of Total Power Exchange relationships, and 24/7 lifestyles. However, you should know that these relationships are not promoted, condoned, or respected in true, trained BDSM communities. I completely understand that this is fictional and, as you said, you are getting your information from the internet. Please be aware that, although it is unintentional, you are doing the BDSM community a great disservice by portraying the type of relationship between these characters.

Just some things you should consider: TPE relationships are never considered longterm-your characters are getting married; all BDSM participants recognize and understand the ROLES (yes, I said role) that they play; BDSM players understand the need for "vanilla" time with their significant other-no one can role-play constantly, it is, as you accurately portrayed, work; no responsible Dom ever, ever, ever, demands that his Sub remain unheard (this comes directly from my friend who is a Master Trainer).

Once again, I realize that this is fictional and you say you are getting your information from the internet, but not everything you read is true. However, I am more than willing to provide my credentials and my associates' credentials if you have any questions. Normally, I wouldn't waste my time, but I have based my entire career on trying to get society to accept healthy relationships, although they many be out of the norm, instead of being judgmental. I am not an expert on the whips and chains of BDSM, but I am a published expert on the love and trust of BDSM. Portrayals like yours are inaccurate and unintentionally cause people to think ill of the entire BDSM community, a community, that, when proper, is no more unhealthy than any other relationship.

Again, it is not my intent to be offensive or insulting and I apologize if I presented that way. If you have any questions, please let me know.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

Gah! You can't end it like that, I'm dying to find out what Edward wants to talk about. I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wander what he is up to now!

Reviewer: audra12s (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

AAAAAAH! Excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next one. You always leave us wanting more. What does he want to talk about??? This is like a season finale or something. Why am I freaking out?

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

I was somewhat concerned with your warning but that chapter wasn't too bad.  Felt a bit like feeding the dog when they were having dinner!  This concept is so foreign to me but I am overwhelmed by the sexiness of it!

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

R eally got my motor running yehaaa!!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 4

ANother really good chap ;p

Reviewer: shannon1107 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

Love your story and can't wait for the next update. I must admit that I get a little disturbed with the selfishness of Edward. Obviously having not lived or been exposed to this lifestyle makes my opinion mute. But, I do long for some kind of sign that he loves her and appreciates her complete submission to his every whim. I want to know he is marrying her because he can't live without her and not just for the protection benifits that marriage has to offer. That being said, your writing is wonderful and keeps me waiting for more.

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

I agree with her last sentiment about the "We need to talk". Great chapter. I look forward to your updates.

Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter! I can't wait to see his softer side.

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

oh man... i wanted to know what was up.. have i ever told you that cliff hangers drive me crazy?!?! lol i know thats what they are supposed to do, but please don't leave us hangin over the edge for too long.. thanx for writing and sharing


Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

What?!?!?!   You can't leave it there!!!   That's an awful cliffy...

Excellent story line.


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