great chapter. =]

update soon,. im definately sticking with this story... =]

I'm a little sad that they're not "momogamous". I don't like the idea of him letting other people touch her, and I assume other people "touch" him. I suppose as long as it's consentual it's fine, but she did seem jealous about Lauren, and Edward strikes me as the insanely jealous type. I can't wait to see his softer side, and her more assertive side. Does he love her? Or do they tell each other "I love you"? I'm glad that you had Bella be clear that she gets off on all of this. For me it would be extreme, but I can see that some of it would be appealling in smaller doses or a less extreme way. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. Thank you.

Love it!

LOVING this story!! My new favorite! I was sort of hoping that Edward would somehow appear at the mechanic's to beat the tar out of Tyler Crowley for coming on so strongly, since in a previous Author's Note you mentioned that he is very protective. I can't wait to see this side of him! I only have one teeny criticism and that's that in other BDSM stories I've read, 40 strokes seems terribly harsh for Bella's misbehavior. Unless Bella was some kind of super sadist, I doubt most people would be able to handle that kind of punishment. (Not that I'd know, I've never tried the lifestyle, I'm just comparing to other erotica I've read from people who HAVE.)

Unrelated to your story, I wanted to recommend a book to you which is eerily similar to "All of Me." It's an erotic S&M novel called "Carrie's Story" by Molly Weatherfield, which is about her life as a sold (and also consensual) slave in an ultra elite BDSM circuit in the San Francisco Bay Area. It's a bit more hardcore than this story, but not by much. I'm assuming that since you're writing this that you have at least some interest in the BDSM/D/s/slave lifestyle, and if so, TOTALLY read it and its sequel.

Anywho, thanks so much for writing this story and I can't wait for Chaper 4!!

Okay- I need to be honest. It's getting harder for me to read. When you were talking about Bella's chores, I felt kinda bored. It was realllllyy long, and you spent a little too long talking about chores and how she has to do them perfect or she'll be sorry. I'm just the type of person who wants to read and escape to a fantasty world and put off my daily chores and escape for awhile, not read about someone else doing chores. The story seems a little... flat. There doesn't seem to be a plot, and you can't really fall for the characters because there seems to be nothing really said about them.

I do like how Edward seems more human, and smiles, or says 'love', but there are times when I was thinking that he seems like was..into bestiality and was just imaging Bella a dog in his head while she was his slave.

The Dom/Sub relationship seems really extreme compared to any other story I've read, and I was feeling terrible for Bella, feeling bad that she has absolutely NOTHING. Not her mind, her body, her money, her job, her friends, her anything. Her entire life is Edward and pleasing him and then cooking and cleaning the house and doing errands. In my mind, it's really hard to imagine how he is that good at pleasing Bella, that she would give up her entire life for it. Maybe she's in love with him, but it doesn't really seem to be that. It seems like she is just trying to do all of the typical chores around the house, waiting for him to come home and chain her up and use her, then send her off to do more errands. She doesn't even call him by his name once, it's always "Master". It just doesn't seem like a healthy mindset at all.

I'm only basing this off the chapters we've read, so I might just be making myself look like an idiot, because I'm not waiting long enough, but it just seems a little too extreme. The only freedom she had was going to get Edward's oil changed, and then the entire time her mindset was Edward.

This story just is hard for me to read with my personality and beliefs. I love Dom/Sub stories, I do. I love that a person can trust someone else with themselves and their pleasure and just trust them. But, I also believe that a person shouldn't lose themselves in the process- that they can submit entirely, but be able to still be who they were when they started. Bella seemed likes she's almost a shell. Absolutely empty and has no personality, no "fillings" but what Edward wants, what will make Edward look good, what Edward would tell her to do in the situation, and the consequences Edward would give her if she doesn't do it perfect.

Sorry for my rant- I don't hate your story, it's just that there are things I disagree with in it. I'm truly not trying to beat down what you've wrote, but offer my honest opinion and reaction that I got from the story. You can completely disgard what I said if you want, because your story isn't bad- in fact, it's really great that you took on such a controversial subject and decided to take up the challenge of writing it, despite what might be thrown your way.

I like this story it is written well and I can't wait to read the next chapter.. Thanks for sharing

wow.......liking this story...please continue

I love it!

excellent

I know some people might get upset over your story but i think it a really good one. I would just say not to worry what others might think because at least you have the courage to be writing i cant even bring myself to post any of the stories that come to me. Keep updating cant wait to see where this story is going.

just found this today and I'm already addicted! can't wait to read the next chapters!

I am excited to see where this is going.....  Well written!