Oh, I had to wait a whole day to read your update and it was killing me!!   I liked this slice of real life for these two.  I think it will be very interesting when Jasper comes to visit.  And I hope you'll understand when I say I love your story, but still get stomach squirms!!

I love this story! i started reading it thinking that i really wouldnt like it, but i love reading. The story line is interesting!

So there Lauren, Hah! In your FACCCCCEEE!!! LOL

Loving it, simply loving it. I wonder if it was a ring , the other object???

I quite enjoyed this chapter, despite the lack of lemons! A good story has to have a plot too, not just all smut! Looking forward to the next chapter, and some Jasper action!!

i am totally and completely sucked in..... keep up the great writing!

Thats ok hon, let's face it we're all like Bella, still in recovery from the last one!;) Plus there's nothing like seeing a scheming skank be put in her place! More than makes up for it. It's nice to see how Domward truly does care for his sub. Not that I doubted it, but now Bella sees he's taking the Lauren threat seriously. Now she must feel much more secure since he publicly acknowledged their engagement. It was nice to see how sweet he can be. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. And I'm always up for more fanfic, I'd love to read the one shot!

OH. I wonder what he gave her. Probably a collar for her to wear. We shall see. Stupid Lauren. She is going to cause some major problems.

I just want to punch Lauren in the box! I love this story ... so good! Please update again soon :)

This was a intersting chapet can't wait to see how they will act around Jasper. Is Alice in the story? Maybe as Jaspers sub?

Wow. This is just... WOW!! Very hot. I like that you've got a plot going on, it makes things interesting outside of the very interesting relationship already taking place.

You write really well. I admire the research you've done too as I understand that this isn't something you yourself are into. So well done!!

I look forward to reading more chapters from you!!

Love JulesAmes.

I'm really enjoying this story even though it can be hard for me to read at times.  I'm not really into the whole master/slave thing.  I spend most of my time when reading this just trying to understand why Bella would want to be treated quite similarly to a dog, but the more I read, the more I'm starting to understand her.  I think that there is more to Edward than meets the eye.  I think he really loves her, and I could be totally wrong, but sometimes I feel like maybe he doesn't want to be doing the whole master/slave thing 24/7.  I think he really wants to make Bella happy, and it seems to be very stressful for him. 

I have a question about the wedding.  Are they really in love with each other?  Have they spoken this aloud to one another?  Are they only getting married because of appearances, or is there more to it?

I'm dying to know how Edward really feels.  I would love an EPOV, but I know that would take away a lot of the mystery.

It will be interesting to see how the interact with Jasper around.  I hope there won't be any threesome action going on.  I got a little worried when Edward said he wanted her rested so she could entertain him.  I'm also really toubled that Edward gets to have sex with anyone he wants without asking Bella before hand, and Bella can't do anything.  I know that Bella said he is the master and has the right to do whatever he wants as long as he is safe about it, but still...  If I were Bella, I would lose a lot of trust in him for that...even if he isn't having sex with other women as Bella suspects.  I would always wonder to myself "did he have sex with someone today? Is he going to have sex with someone today?"  Just the fact that he could and she would have to be ok with that really bothers me.

I think a chapter without lemons is okay now and then.  It reminds us that there is more to stories than sex (and such).  But anyway, one of my very favorite things about your writing is how detailed it is, without being too overboard.  Everything you say Bella does I can totally see it in my mind.  She is such a loveable character.  You do such a great job.  Applause for you! ((applause))